San Francisco School of Copywriting Module One Slides
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Copywriting Fundamentals
Yes, Anyone can master this skill Practice and Patience Be Open to Critique and Copy Others
You Like Outsource When Sensible –
Understanding what Your Business Needs is Different than Doing Every Job
We will cover a lot of marketing and Psychology
Great Copy uses the Dan Kennedy Formula of: Problem, Agitate, Solution….
Always Focused on the Prospect Get a Clear Picture of Them in Your Mind
Habits Age Preferences Gender Lifestyle What do they watch, read, eat? Where do they go
out? What do they do with their free time?
What do They Long For? What do They Fear? What Keeps Them Awake at Night? This will tap into the problem you
solve
Picture One Person in Your Minds’ Eye
Write to THAT Person ALWAYS ONE PERSON
ONLY ONE PERSON is reading, watching, listening
THE WRITING PROCESS Now…Start with Your Headline or Lead Write Several – Don’t Edit – Yet If You Can’t Come Up with the Lead, Start
on the Body
Writing Ad OR SalesLetter or Website, White Paper, CaseStudy, eBook, Newsletter, Email…
Create Your Bullets – Index Card Method? Cut and Paste. Stay open, keep the process fluid
4-6 Key Reasons – Whether or not You Incorporate into Copy
Bring in USP – Why Should I Buy From You Instead of Your Competitor?
Create Big Promise – What Will I Get? Make Sure Body Copy Stays in Touch with Big
Promise and Headline/Lead Make Certain You Present Benefits of Every
Feature Put Benefits into Sentences, Play with Order
The American Dream Has Changed, Have You?
OR: Get Free From Corporate Bondage OR: Bust Out of the Corporate Shackles but Keep
the Income, Benefits and Perks
PROBLEM:Dear Name, Does this description fit you? You have a
healthy six figure income and some enviable perks and benefits. You’ve paid your dues in late meetings and long hours, unrealistic expectations, lost sleep, crappy airport meals, missed family events – maybe you’ve compromised your health.
AGITATE: It’s a harsh reality check, but the days of working for one company and trading your loyalty for their beneficence are gone. Over. Finished. A relic of a bygone era. These days everyone is replaceable and their jobs outsource-able – from the C Suite to the factory floor
AGITATE: Businesses of every size and description are working under the threat of extinction and the fear of job loss looms at every level. Corporate employees are constantly looking over their shoulders and for the worker over 40, there’s always a chance of being tossed on the scrap heap while they replace you with someone half your age, with twice your energy that works for half your pay.
AGITATE: All your life, you’ve been told to work hard and get ahead. You’ve done that and you’re proud of your accomplishments, but still, there’s a nagging dissatisfaction. Long hours, stress and exhaustion may be in your way of engineering a better solution.
SOLUTION: You Can Translate Your Skills and Knowledge Base into a Lucrative Business I call it the ‘Independent Executive Lifestyle’. Great income, ultimate freedom. Imagine feeling energized when you put your feet on the floor in the morning, excited to take on the day instead of worn out before you even brush your teeth. You look forward to what’s next – challenges included - because they’re yours to solve, on your terms, for your reward.
Copy American Express Letter and….over 6 weeks, along with…
Project: Hair Growth Product for Men: short letter or advertorial
Features: Natural ‘secret’ ingredient from Amazon
rain forest Has scientific proof from independent labs Has testimonial proof from satisfied clients
Project: Hair Growth Product for Men: short letter or advertorial
What do They Fear? Less attractive Less Sex (Romance!) Perceived Loss of Virility Lost Confidence Aging sanfranciscoschoolofcopywriting.com/speci
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What is Most Compelling of these Factors?
Write a Headline to Grab Attention Using their Key Fears Restore Your Hair and Your Confidence A Thick Head of Hair = More Romance Restore Your Hair in Only 4 Weeks
List Your Features and Benefits Features:
Grows Hair Easy to Use Not Messy Revolutionary Technology
Benefits of Those Features: More Confidence + Not Time Consuming – Can Work with Your Busy Life Not a Lot of Screwing Around with Formulas – You’ll Actually Use it… You’re Cutting Edge/Cool
Lay out Negative – Paint Picture of Fear and Disappointment
Lay out Positive – Removal of Fear and Anxiety
Provide Solution Offer Proof Remove Obstacles to Buy
Providing Proof Testimonials Pictures Stories Audio Video
Removing Obstacles Guarantee Trial Period No Money Down Introductory Price Liberal Return Policy Sample (Chance to Sell)
Why Guarantees are Important Prospect Needs to Rationalize
Purchase Builds Trust Enters Realm of Agreement as
Opposed to Sale Dispels Negative Feelings that Crop
Up
Negative Feelings: This Won’t Work Sure, Women Will Be Interested…Yeah,
Right I Can’t Spend Money on This – What if it
Doesn’t Work? Offer a Money Back Guarantee? Ultimate Satisfaction? Builds BIG Trust
Reinforce in the P.S. People Often Read Subheads and P.S.
First Guarantee in the P.S., Puts Them at
Ease to Read in Buying Mentality Restate Benefits in P.S. P.P.S. to Cement Credibility
Ask this: Does my copy use Problem, Agitate,
Solution? Did I make a compelling case? Did I prove genuine value? Did I illustrate clearly and in certain terms
how the product solves their problem? Did I make them feel the pain of their problem first?
Did I tell about features and provide benefits for all of them?
Now You’ve got a First Draft What Now? LET IT SIT Overnight at Least Then Edit
Editing – be Ruthless First Read Through Read Again Notice any Place that Made You Stop - Glitch Start there
What to Look for – COPY KEYS Do Your Sentences Flow one to the
Next? Are they in the Correct Order so the
Conceptsare Easy to Understand? Does EVERY single Word And Sentence Move the Reader Forward and Serve the Mission of the Copy?
Edit with a Chain Saw! Look for ‘that’, in order to Take Out Passive Language and Future Tense Write it all in the Present Benefits Exceptions on Occasion Short Sentences are Better Subheads Tell a Story
Editing is Often Much More Work than Writing
Don’t Get Married to Clever Don’t Fall in Love with Your Ideas
Make a Copy and Remove anything that Keeps Catching You
Remove Entire Sentences, Re-read for Clarity and Crispness
Get Input From Coach/Mentor/Copy Colleague
Your Writing Will Improve Focus on One Area at a Time Move on to Others with Greater
Confidence Be Patient Emulate Pieces Your Like – Literally
Write them Out
This week: Write the American Express letter
out longhand Start Hair Gro if you feel ready
Make a List of Questions that Pop Up for You: Why he uses a technique What the point of certain ideas is Something you would do differently or
don’t understand Anything else that jumps out sanfranciscoschoolofcopywriting.com/special92
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