It was not until the sun set down that my mother came back home. Hardly had my mother came back, when I ran towards her, shouting, “Happy Women’s Day.” What surprised her most was that there was a good dinner on the table. Then my mother and I had the dinner happily. My mother said that was the most delicious dinner she had ever had. Doing something for my mother, I felt happy too.

升华 :The Women’s Day was unforgettable. Only when I felt exhausted after the hard housework, could I understand how hard my mother was. I knew I should help my mother to do what I can for her. I love my mother!

内容连贯紧凑，

句式多样，感情丰富

放学回家想着看电视 看到人们排队很惊奇

加塞 ; 被老人制止 老人教育 ; 自己惭愧

　 I will never forget the day, March 11. That afternoon, school was over at about 5:00. I rushed out of the school gate, hoping to get home as soon as possible to watch my favorite TV program. When I got to the bus stop, I noticed people waiting in line. What surprised me most was that people were waiting in lines instead of pushing their way. Before I could think another second, my bus pulled into the stop. Hardly had I jumped the queue, when somebody stopped me. I heard a loud voice from behind, “Please queue up, the young boy!” It was an old gentle man who signed to me to stand in line. Then he explained to me that the day was “Queue Day”, whose purpose is to appeal to people to shape their behaviors in a proper way while they are waiting for a bus. Hearing his words, I felt ashamed of my behavior (my face turned red). I come to understand from this lesson that we should behave ourselves properly and I do hope that every day will be a “Queue Day”. I call on everyone should obey the public rule self-consciously. Only in this way can we lead a harmonious life.

　

P1: Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.

P2: Hardly had the accident happened when one of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic. Hearing that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital, we all felt very sad. ( What made us worried/ sad was that it turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital.)

P3: The following day, we went to visit her with flowers and fruit after school. (We visited our teacher the following day chatting and comforting her. )Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon.

P4: What moved us deeply was that It was not before our teacher recovered completely that she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all proud of having such a responsible teacher.

升华： We should study hard and behave ourselves. Only in this way can we show our respect and love to our teacher.

Several days ago, on a hot summer day, I had quite an unforgettable lesson on the bus.

I was sitting on a bus, tired and sleepy, when I saw an old woman walking straight towards me. For a moment, I hesitated whether to give up my seat to her. Then a girl gave up his seat to the old man. But before I could make a decision, the girl behind me stood up and helped the old lady into her seat. Hardly had the grandma settled down, when the bus had a sudden break and the girl fell down heavily. It was not until the girl fell down on the floor that we noticed that the girl was handicapped with an artificial leg exposed. (What astonished me most was that the girl was handicapped with an artificial leg exposed. ) I hurried to help her sit down. For the rest of the journey, I could think of nothing but blame myself.! It was I who should give up my seat to the grandma, but pretended to see nothing, and remained seated. What a shame! I still wish that I had given up my seat to the old lady instead of the disabled girl.