1112 Final Eng.3 s4 Marking Scheme

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S.4 Eng. 3 Marking Scheme p.1

Delia Memorial School (Hip Wo)

Final Examination 2011-2012

S4 English 3

Marking Scheme

Part A: 55 Marks

Part B: Section 1 : 55 marks

Section 2: 58 marks

Task 1 (13 marks)

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Hong Kong College Social Services ClubMember Survey Form

Name: ________________________ Form/Class: ________________________

1. How long have you been a member of the club?___________________________

2. How long have you been involved with volunteering or other social services?___________________________

3. What kinds of social services have you been involved with in the past?________________________________________________________________

4. How much time on average do you spend on social services each month?___________________________

5. Which charity group(s) do you want to help out most? Why?________________________________________________________________

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6. Which of these countries would you like to visit for volunteer work? Please choose two.*Mainland China India Nepal Indonesia Cambodia Kenya

* Circle as appropriate.

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(1)Nancy Fong (1) 2D

(1) 1 year

(1) 5 years

(1) visiting the elderly and (1) flag-selling

(1) 6 hours

(1) Safe Haven (1) many children arent as lucky

(1) Brighter Day (1) the visually impaired are often neglected

(1) (1)


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Task 2 (21 marks)

Activity Reason Remarks

Annual general meeting

PIC: Eunice

Month:_________________

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PIC:_________________

Month:_________________

Charity sale

PIC:_________________

Month: December

Service for the elderly

PIC: Angel

Month:_________________

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PIC: Tom

Month: January

Extended Social Services Week

PIC: Eunice

Month:_________________

What is the proposed theme for this year?

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(1) October

(1) Raffle ticket sale

(1) Iris

(1) March

- (1) introduce the year planto members

- (1) create a bond betweenmembers

- (1) continue this tradition

- (1) raise funds for

underprivileged local schoolstudents

- (1) get young people tointeract with the elderly

- (1) learn about the harmfuleffects of drug abuse

- (1) help students learn to beresponsible global citizens

- (1) appreciate what is trulyvaluable in life

(1) John

(1) November

(1) Visiting ex-drug addicts

(1) April

(1) Local students, global citizens

- (1) should start preparationthree months in advance

- (1) need to decide on asuitable charitable organisation

- (1) selling chocolate

- (1) have a talk on drugabuse for the participants


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Task 3 (12 marks)

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1. Proposed activity: Autumn Delights : ____________________________________________

2. Proposed date(s) / Period: _____________________________ , 20_ _

3. Objective(s) of the activity:- _______________________________________________________________________

4. No. of participants: ___________________

5. Which of the following area(s) does your activity belong to? Tick as appropriate.A. Academic advancement ( )

B. Community outreach ( )C. Global awareness ( )

6. Budget for the activity:

7. Funding requested (HK$): ______________________

Expenditure (HK$)- Location cost:- Gifts:- Food & drinks:

- Promotion:

Total:

Sponsorship (HK$)- From ____________________

Total: (1) $1 000

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(1) service for the elderly

(1) 13 15 November

(1) raise students awareness of the problems of an ageing population

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(1) $450

(1) $700

(1) $1 000(1) $50

$2 200

(1) 1 200

(1) Tomato Express


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Task 4 (9 marks)

What Elisa likes and why Advance preparations

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(1) the name of the project (1) givespeople a jolly feeling

(1) the idea of recruiting primary schoolstudents as volunteers (1) teaches themthe importance of the elderly

(1) gifts for the elderly (1) very practical

(1) confirm the number of volunteers from theprimary school

(1) make a list of things that they need toprepare (for the activities)

(1) prepare a back-up activity in case thereis heavy rain


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Part B Section 1

Task 5 (15 marks)

Complete the summary below, listing the social problems that Eutopia Hong Kong would like to focus on this year

and some programmes that they may launch for each issue. Refer to the notes you made on page 2 and information

from page 4 of your Data File.

Summary of Eutopias Areas of Concern

Issue Specific problem(s) Programme(s)

Mentally/

Physically

disabled

Juvenile

delinquency

Domestic

violence

New immigrants

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(1) feel neglected by society

(1) find it difficult to make a living

(1) teenage drug abuse

(1) drug selling/trafficking

(1) wives battered by husbands

(1) children abused by parents

(1) feel like outsiders

(1) organise recreational activitiesfor them regularly

(1) organise courses on work skills

(1) organise mentorship schemes

(1) set up temporary shelters forvictims

(1) provide counselling services tofamilies

(1) offer classes teaching themCantonese

(1) hold talks on job marketadaptation

(1) introduce Hong Kongs unique

culture to them

[DF 1]

1 mark for each point


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Task 6 (20 marks)

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About UsWho we are

Our mission

Our vision

Volunteer for us

Quote of the day

3. Eutopia Hong Kong is a registered non-governmental organisation [DF 3] (1)4. focusing on urban social issues. [DF 3]5. It was founded in January 2001 [DF 3]6. when a group of devoted local social workers began a campaign to improve Hong Kongs social

situation. [DF 3]7. Eutopia Hong Kong is a member organisation of Eutopia International, [DF 3]8. which is a confederation that comprises over 10 countries. [DF 4]

9. The word Eutopia refers to an imaginary place that is deemed to be perfect in all aspects. [DF]10. It has its origin in the bookUtopia (1516) by Sir Thomas More. [DF 7]

11. Eutopia Hong Kong aims to promote the virtue of compassion.12. We try to focus on minimizing Hong Kongs social problems .13. through social services.

14. What Eutopia Hong Kong envisions is a city in which everyones needs are taken care of. [DF 1]

15. Eutopia Hong Kong never underestimates the value of our volunteers. Without our volunteers, our effortswould all be in vain.16. Please join us and be part of a huge endeavour to better human lives by registering online at

http://www.eutopiahongkong.org/volunteers.17. Act now! Eutopia Hong Kong needs you!

1. Only a life lived for others is a lifeworthwhile. [DF 5] by 2. AlbertEinstein [DF 5]

[DF 1]

[DF 7]
http://www.sionhongkong.org/volunteershttp://www.sionhongkong.org/volunteers


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Task Completion (10 marks)

Description Marks

1517 points 10

1214 points 8

911 points 6

68 points 4

35 points 2

02 points 0

Language (5 marks)

Marks Language Remarks

5 There is a good range of accurate sentence structures, and thestandard of accuracy in spelling, punctuation and language is high.

Award 1 or 0 marks ifthe candidate onlyscores 2 marks or

below for the taskfulfilment.

4 Simple or compound sentences are used appropriately, with some

attempts at more complex sentences. Punctuation, spelling andlanguage structures are mainly accurate with occasional minor errorsthat do not affect the overall clarity.

3 Most simple and compound sentences are accurately constructedand punctuated. There are grammatical errors but meaning isgenerally clear.

2 Short and simple sentences are mainly used. There are quite a lot ofmistakes in spelling and grammar, which at times affect meaning.

1 Short and simple sentences are mainly used but there are manygrammatically mistakes, which greatly affect meaning.

0 The text is unintelligible because of the large number of spelling,punctuation and grammatical errors.

Style and format (5 marks)

Marks Style & Format

5 An awareness of audience in shown throughout; tone and register are appropriate, and

appropriate features of a survey report are used.

4 An awareness of audience is shown and may by maintained throughout. An appropriate

tone and style is used and most features of a survey report are used correctly.

3 Some awareness of audience is shown. Tone and register are largely appropriate, and somefeatures of a survey report are used correctly.

2 There may be some awareness of audience. Tone and register are sometimes appropriate.

Some features of a survey report may be used.

1 A suitable tone may be used in some parts and some basic features of a survey report may

be used.

0 Inappropriate tone and register and / or wrong genre (of a survey report) are used.


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Task 7 (20 marks)

Complete the draft of a speech below, using information from pages 4, 8 and 9 of your Data File.

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Good morning, everyone! _______________________________________________________________

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1. Welcome to our service project, Fifty Hearts, One Dream! 2. I am David Tong, [Situation & DF 8]and I am in charge of this project. [DF 8] 3. Thank you very much for coming to volunteer! [DF 2]

4. I am sure all of you can still vividly recall the slogan for the 2008 Beijing Olympics One World, OneDream. [DF 9]5. Indeed, the slogan has given us some inspiration when choosing the name of this service project, FiftyHearts, One Dream. [DF 9]6. Fifty Hearts refers to the number of target participants. [DF 9]7. And we say One Dream because those we are trying to help all have one common dream to be

valued members of Hong Kongs multi-ethnic community! [DF 9]8. We hope, therefore, that our service project will help new South Asian immigrants integrate into HongKong society [DF 8] and9. will raise peoples awareness of ethnic minorities in Hong Kong. [DF 8]

10. Now, I know that you are all very responsible volunteers. However, I would like to emphasise againthat

11. your attitude towards our participants is extremely important. I hope that you will all12. treat them with love and respect. Remember that13.you not only represent Eutopia Hong Kong, but the community of Hong Kong as a whole.

14. We hope you enjoy this service programme, [DF 2]15. and thank you very much again for your help!

[DF 10]


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Description Marks

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Part B Section 2

Task 8 (18 marks) (1 mark for each point)

Mentally/Physically disabled

Juvenile delinquency

Domestic violence

New immigrants


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1. The mentally/physically disabled may feel neglected by society.2. Another problem is that they find it difficult to make a living. For example, Mr L, whose left arm wasamputated, has been jobless for four years.3. We will therefore try to organise regular recreational activities for them to make them feel that they are

part of a community.4. We will also organise courses to teach them work skills.

5. Teenage drug abuse has become a serious problem in Hong Kong6. For example, a fifteen-year-old boy, who we interviewed, has been taking drugs for three years. Besides

drug abuse, however,7. drug trafficking is becoming an increasingly serious issue among teenagers.8. To tackle this issue, we plan to organise some mentorship schemes;9. this will allow students get advice from people who have more life experience.

10. All too often, wives are being battered by their husbands.11. Many children are also victims of abuse at home. For instance, a newspaper story recently talked about asix-year-old girl that was frequently beaten by her father, who has a drinking problem.12. The first thing we would like to do is set up temporary shelters for the victims.13. In the long run, we could also provide emotional counselling services for families that have experienceddomestic violence.

14. A lot of new immigrants may feel like outsiders in Hong Kong. This was true of15. a boy from India, who said that he felt really out of place when he first came to Hong Kong.16. In order to help new immigrants, we would like to offer classes to teach new immigrants Cantonese. 17.Moreover, we would hold talks on job market adaptation for them.18. There would also be courses introducing Hong Kongs unique culture to help them integrate into HongKong society more easily.

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Task 9 (20 marks)

To: All volunteers

From: Sally Chan

Subject: About Fifty Hearts, One Dream

Dear volunteers

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Yours faithfully

Eutopia Hong Kong


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[DF 12]

1. Thank you very much for joining Fifty Hearts, One Dream! [DF 11]2. I am writing to remind you of the details of the service project.

3. Please be reminded that the project will be held from 7 to 10 July at Sai Kung North Country Park.5. The individuals this project caters for are new South Asian immigrants.6. The purposes of this service project, as you all know, are to help these new immigrants integrateinto Hong Kong society and

7. to raise peoples awareness of ethnic minorities in Hong Kong.

8. According to the weather forecast, it will be generally sunny during the four days of our service,[DF 14]9. with temperatures reaching as high as 35. [DF 14 & 15]10. For this reason, we recommend you bring the following with you: lots of water [DF 15],11. high SPF sunscreen; [DF 15] and12. extra clothes. [DF 15]13. Remember to also bring mosquito repellent too as mosquitoes can be a nuisance in the

countryside. [DF 15]14. We will gather at Eutopia Hong Kongs office in Central [DF 15]15. 7.30 am on 7 July, the first day of our service project. [DF 15]16. Do have your breakfast before we meet as there will be none provided. [DF 15]

17. Let me remind you once again that Eutopia Hong Kong believes in the virtue of compassion while/ it works to minimise Hong Kongs social problems through social services.18. We envision a city where everyones needs are taken care of. Your help is crucial in carrying out

our mission and realising our vision.

19. Should you have any enquiries, feel free to contact David Tong [Situation & DF 12] at20. 2827 2827. [DF 12] 22.We look forward to seeing you soon! [DF 11]

[DF 1]


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Task 10 (20 marks)

Eutopia Hong Kong - Proposal

Proposed activity: Eutopia Marathon

Introduction:

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Details:

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Estimated cost:

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Justification:

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Conclusion:

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[DF 13]

1. The Eutopia Marathon aims to raise funds for the mentally disabled. [DF 13]2. The money raised will be used to establish a Eutopia House in which they can live and work [DF 11].

3. The marathon will be held on 15 November. [DF 13]4. It will start at 9.00 am. [DF 11]5. The runners will include approximately forty people who are mentally disabled. [DF 13]

The route will begin at Tsing Ma Bridge [DF 16] and end at Victoria Park. [DF 16]

6. As for the cost, we will need an estimated HK$4 750 for promotion. [DF 17]7. We will not need to cover the costs of snacks because Yummyland has agreed to provide snacks as

part of their sponsorship. [DF 18]8. Wilsons Water has also agreed to provide water for us. [DF 18]9. We will, however, need HK$8 888, which will be awarded to the winner. [DF 17]10. The certificates will cost HK$750. [DF 17] / We will also need HK$1 450 for towels, [DF 17]

11.HK$6 600 for equipment, [DF 17] / HK$35 800 for staffing costs. [DF 17]12.The total cost of hosting the event, will amount to HK$58 238. [DF 17]

13. Eutopia Marathon is an event with a noble cause.14. a valuable chance for the mentally disabled participants to confront personal challenges and to 15.show the world how much they are capable of. Whats more, as16. an outdoor activity, the marathon will also get the medias attention. This will help to17. raise peoples awareness of the importance of integrating the mentally disabled into our

community. active event as18. This is a cost effective event as there is no location cost, and so expenditure will be relatively low.

19. As we are very experienced in organising fundraising activities,20. Eutopia Marathon will definitely be a huge success!

[DF 11]


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Description Marks

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