Entering English 101
• Eng. 085• Ritter’s 1st
Email• Self-evaluation
up until the Day #1
By Kevin Kors
Week to week memos always pertained to my attitude towards my job
Primary issue: “Unity” & “Run-on” sentences Constant Struggle
Why is there two people on the Hill?
Memos
Home life goes from crazy to stable Made some changes Memos got better
Unity
“We all we got, We all we need”
-Seahawks
What are some of the first things that come to mind?
How did I fix it? Writing became clearer
Run-Ons
Have never worked on weaknesses Meet with a teacher Just sit down and read over the rubric
numerous times
New Approach
Had an extremely tough time starting the research
Went to Instructor for help Applied memo critique into paper Ended up doing better than expected
Annotated Bibliography
Both contain messages One offers creative writing and the other
offers information Which was more powerful?
Memos VS. Annotated Bib
Taking a new sense of confidence with me
Be a strong critique towards my work
Conveying my message in the clearest most concise way
Leaving English 101
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