Entering English 101

• Eng. 085• Ritter’s 1st

Email• Self-evaluation

up until the Day #1

By Kevin Kors

Week to week memos always pertained to my attitude towards my job

Primary issue: “Unity” & “Run-on” sentences Constant Struggle

Why is there two people on the Hill?

Memos

Home life goes from crazy to stable Made some changes Memos got better

Unity

“We all we got, We all we need”

-Seahawks

What are some of the first things that come to mind?

How did I fix it? Writing became clearer

Run-Ons

Have never worked on weaknesses Meet with a teacher Just sit down and read over the rubric

numerous times

New Approach

Had an extremely tough time starting the research

Went to Instructor for help Applied memo critique into paper Ended up doing better than expected

Annotated Bibliography

Both contain messages One offers creative writing and the other

offers information Which was more powerful?

Memos VS. Annotated Bib

Taking a new sense of confidence with me

Be a strong critique towards my work

Conveying my message in the clearest most concise way

Leaving English 101