7/30/2019 Vinod Half Corrected

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TOPIC:-"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed toengage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."

There are many persistent problem around the globe which cannot be solved by a particular nation. Likeglobal warming, terrorism, nuclear fuel uses. So in order to overcome these persistent problem andmaintain world peace: all nation should help support the development of global university.

Rephrase the part highlighted above as : It is very difficult for a nation to single handedly solve thepersisting global problems such as terrorism ..

Some social problems like for example global warming cannot be originated from that particular land, itcan be the influence of some else country and the consequences are suffered by some other nation . forexample the submerging of many Hawaii island is not just only due to the emission of CO2 by the thatplace, it is due to the overall emission around the globe.

IDEA NOT CLEAR and LOT OF SENTENCE STRUCTURE ERRORS IN the ABOVE statement

Further more example of Terrorism around the nation is not always due to its own people. Like the 9/11attack on twin tower, was attacked by some terrorist organization of Pakistan and Afghanistan.

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So in order to solve such problem and to maintain peace along the globe: global university should alwaysbe built for the students, so to expand their thinking and make their thinking globally, to look beyond theirnation at global platform. As it help them to understand the other civilization, culture. It will help them toknow the problems of others.

As the child of today , will be future of tomorrow or the strength of the nation is the youth as theseproverb which are always true will help in solving persistent problems, moreover the students of these

universities can be the part of WHO , UNESCO, UNICEF or many other global institution or can evenform these kind of university.

Moreover if organization is composed of discrete profile people to maintain all the discrete sector will bemore successful. As people are from all the countries will make these organization more successful ineradicating the global problems.

So, concluding the main idea from above,if people of all the nation together organize to solve the globalproblem then the persistent social problems can solved. To include people from every nation, thereshould be some globalized university where all are taught together and this act requires support from allthe nations.

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