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Touching theVoid is a book,published in 1988,by Joe Simpson.
In it, he recountshis disastrous and
nearly fatal climb inthe Peruvian Andeswith his companionSimon Yates.
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Lesson1
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Touching theVoid is a book,published in 1988,by Joe Simpson.
In it, he recountshis disastrous and
nearly fatal climb inthe Peruvian Andeswith his companionSimon Yates.
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Catapulted Fierce Grotesque
Distortion Nausea Eploded
!uptured !ationalDispassiona
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Trail #$stacle Cautiousl"
Tautened !ational Searing
Desperatel" Screamed Terri$le
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Eplore ho% Joe Simpson is a$le tosuccess&ull" create tension in theetract &rom Touching the Void'
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hat happens in the e!tract"
hat challenges do #oe $impson and $imon %ates face"
hat are the key language &eatures"
&ow do they help to shape meaning and $uildtension"
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(hat isa )oid*
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hat happened to Joe"
hat happened to Simon"
+, %ords &or each
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(hat arethe 0e"
language
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EllipsisShort
sentence
d2ecti)e
Ver$ d)er$ !epetition
3etaphor Eclamation 4uestion
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ith a partner, usin' the key
words on the previous slide, allI want you to do is &eaturespot. (se a hi'hli'hter.
im to 5nd at least one
eample o& each &eature'
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In the )rst para'raph, I*vechosen to focus mainly on #oe
$impson*s use of ad2ecti)es and)er$s. &owever, I*ve alsoidenti)ed where he has used a
short sentence in the
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7o% do the
language&eatures help to
shape meaning
and $uild
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+he verb hit connotes )iolence and con8ict. +his indicates to
us that #oe $impson*s collisionwith the slope has put him indanger.
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+he adective shattering su''ests that the collision has
had a disastrous impact on #oe$impson-s knee. +his createstension because, at this sta'e,
we don*t know if he has lost
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+he short sentence on thepenultimate line of the para'raph
slows the pace of the narrative. +his helps to rein&orce theserious, dramatic tone that
was established in the openin'
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ith a partner, makes notes
on the A paper provided andprepare to feedback. (se theanal"tical )er$s.
im to put &or%ard at
least &our separate
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9mplies mpli5es Clari5es
7ighlights Co)e"s Esta$lishes
Suggests Emphasises !e)eals
9ndicates 9n&orms !epresents
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Spea0 clearl"'
Listen
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Lesson.
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Eplore ho% Joe Simpson is a$le tosuccess&ull" create tension in theetract &rom Touching the Void'
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&ow can we use our notes to construct a %rittenresponse"
hat are the &eatures of successful anal"tical
%riting"
hat are the 0e" %ords"
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4uic0recap:
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(hat are the
&eatures o&success&ulanal"tical
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(hatare the
0e"
Short
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EllipsisShort
sentenced2ecti)e
Ver$ d)er$ !epetition
3etaphor Eclamation 4uestion
9mplies mpli5es Clari5es
7ighlights Co)e"s Esta$lishes
Suggests Emphasises !e)eals
9ndicates 9n&orms !epresents
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&ow is #oe $impson able to
successfully create tensionin the e!tract from Touchingthe Void"
Statement 4uote nalysis
Development
#oe $impson uses t%o eclamation
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S #oe $impson uses t%o eclamationmar0s at the end of the secondpara'raph. At this sta'e, the reader is an
aware of the e!act nature of his inury.
4u $impson writes, /3" leg; : 3" leg;*
+he e!clamation marks used by $impson
ampli&"his sense of distress at the pain he isunder. +he serious nature of his inury,and the dan'er he is in, is clearly
signi5ed.
D
+he ellipsis used by $impson helps toadd to this e0ect his thou'ht process is
&ragmented, highlighting that he can
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Is the writin' technical accurate"
Is the writin' precise"
Are the points rele)ant and credi$le"
Are the points epansi)e enou'h"
Are the quotations appropriate"
&ow does the work compare to yours"
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