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The Effects of Individualized Tutoring on the Thesis Statement Writing
Skills of College Students with Learning Disabilities
Melissa Van Epps
University of Wisconsin Stout
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Table of Contents
List of Tables……………………………………………………………………………………...4
List of Figures……………………………………………………………………………………..5
Introduction………………………………………………………………………………………..6
Statement of Problem……………………………………………………………………...6
Context of the Problem……………………………………………………………………6
Purpose of Study…………………………………………………………………………..7
Research Questions and Study Variables…………………………………………………7
Literature Review………………………………………………………………………………….8
Learning Disabilities………………………………………………………………………9
Definitions………………………………………………………………………………....9
Legislation……………………………………………………………………………......10
College Writing Expectations……………………………………………………………10
Types of Writing………………………………………………………………………....11
The Need for Tutoring…………………………………………………………………...12
Instructional and Assessment Strategies………………………………………………....13
Efficacy and Results…………………………………………………………………......15
Gaps in the Literature…………………………………………………………………….15
Methodology……………………………………………………………………………………..16
Setting…………………………………………………………………………………....16
Subjects………………………………………………………………………………......17
Procedure………………………………………………………………………………...17
Instrumentation………………………………………………………………………......19
Data Collection…………………………………………………………………………..20
Data Analysis………………………………………………………………………….....21
Limitations……………………………………………………………………………….22
Summary…………………………………………………………………………………22
Findings………………………………………………………………………………………….23
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Demographics……………………………………………………………………………23
Item Analysis: Thesis Statement Writing………………………………………………..23
Results……………………………………………………………………………24
Anecdotal Data……………………………………………………………….......25
Item Analysis: Thesis Statement Writing Confidence…………………………………..26
Results…………………………………………………………………………....27
Discussion………………………………………………………………………………………..29
Limitations……………………………………………………………………………….30
Conclusions………………………………………………………………………………31
Recommendations………………………………………………………………………..31
References………………………………………………………………………………………..33
Appendix A………………………………………………………………………………………36
Appendix B………………………………………………………………………………………37
Appendix C………………………………………………………………………………………38
Appendix D………………………………………………………………………………………39
Appendix E………………………………………………………………………………………40
Appendix F……………………………………………………………………………………….41
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List of Tables
Table 1: Individual Raw Pre and Post Test Scores ........................................................................24
Table 2: Class Mean Pre and Post Test Scores ..............................................................................25
Table 3: Tutor Observation Notes ..................................................................................................25
Table 4: Student Confidence Questionnaire Raw Data .................................................................27
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List of Figures
Figure 1: Instructional Sequence for Tutoring Thesis Statement Writing……………………….18
Figure 2: Student Confidence: Pre and Post Study Numbers…………………………………....28
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Introduction
College students should be equipped with all the tools necessary to assist them in
attaining the highest level of academic achievement possible; this should include college students
with learning disabilities (LD). Due in part to federal legislation such as the Individuals with
Disabilities Act (IDEA), there are an increasing number of students with learning disabilities
attending college nationwide (McGregor et al., 2016). In a perfect world, all university students
would be naturally motivated to achieve to their fullest potential, complete their assignments,
and fulfil their course obligations and expectations. In order to assist students with learning
disabilities achieve their academic goals, colleges and universities often offer academic
assistance such as professional tutoring services provided by professional staff where students
can receive tutoring and counseling that is customized for their specific educational requirements
and learning disability
Problem Statement
The researcher tutors at a university learning center that provides services for students
with learning disabilities, and currently tutors 5 female, college-age students of differing
academic levels and with different learning disabilities. 3 out of 5 of these students did not know
how to write a full thesis statement for a college course paper.
Context of Problem
The learning center where the researcher tutors provides individual tutoring services for
college students with learning disabilities. Each tutoring session is student driven in that
instruction is based on the educational needs of the individual student and the courses in which
the student is enrolled at the time of tutoring. Thus, the curriculum and assignments originate
from the student’s course of study, the area of study’s department and professor; and the final
assessment of the student’s learning is based on those course objectives, rubrics, and expected
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outcomes. The tutor provides assistance with the student’s assignments as requested by the
student, and utilizes instructional methods that the tutor determines will be the most effective.
Each of the researcher’s students received tutoring for paper writing and had papers due
throughout the semester. The researcher had worked with these particular students since the
beginning of the semester and was familiar with the writing proficiency level of each student. 3
out of 5 students required instruction on the basics of how to write a proper thesis statement for a
college term paper. The remaining 2 students required additional assistance on thesis statement
writing in order to reach proficiency. Students generally attend at least one hour of tutoring per
week and each session is organized according to the requirements of the student’s assignment
and the specific educational needs of the student, as per the learning center directive.
Individualized tutoring allows the tutor to employ instructional strategies and assessments that
address each student’s specific educational goals, academic abilities, course assignments, and
learning disability in order to assist students with learning disabilities achieve the same academic
outcomes as their non-disabled peers.
Purpose of the Study
The purpose of this action research study was to ascertain whether or not providing skill
specific tutoring instruction would improve the thesis statement writing of college students with
learning disabilities. The researcher also endeavored to determine whether or not said instruction
altered the student’s confidence level regarding their thesis statement writing. More precisely,
the researcher inquired about how effective a flexible thesis statement writing lesson would be in
improving student’s thesis statement writing proficiency and confidence in writing thesis
statements.
Research Question and Study Variables
The research questions specifically addressed in this action research study are:
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1. Will college students with learning disabilities write more effective thesis statements
after receiving tutoring instruction?
2. Will college students with learning disabilities experience any change in confidence in
their own thesis writing after receiving individualized tutoring in thesis writing?
The independent variable in the study was the tutoring instructional sequence presented
during the student’s tutoring sessions. There were two dependent variables for this study; the
thesis writing proficiency levels of the students and the confidence levels of the students.
Literature Review
The learning center where the researcher tutors has an overall mission to provide
individualized assistance to students with learning disabilities based on their specific educational
needs as dictated by their courses, assignments, educational goals and learning disabilities.
College students with learning disabilities often struggle with academic deficits that impede their
ability to achieve to the same academic standard as their non-disabled peers (McGregor et al.,
2016). University tutoring centers may be able to assist these students in rectifying those
academic deficits to enable students with learning disabilities to participate on a level academic
playing field. Writing skills are absolutely necessary for all college students, but some learning
disabilities specifically affect students’ ability to plan, develop, and write a proper thesis
statement. There are instructional strategies that can be used to help student’s work with and/or
around their learning disabilities and assessment strategies that can support this instruction in
order to assist students with learning disabilities master thesis statement writing. A review of the
literature served to inform the structure of the researcher’s action research, define relevant terms,
prevalence rates, procedures and methods, examine current instructional strategies for teaching
writing, as well as report gaps in the literature and limitations of existing research regarding
teaching academic paper writing skills to college students with learning disabilities.
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Learning Disabilities
Overall, students with learning disabilities account for about 50 percent of all students
with disabilities who receive special education services (Cullen-Pullen, 2016). Some common
types of learning disabilities include those that affect reading such as dyslexia and those that
impede mathematical skills such as dyscalculia (Cullen-Pullen, 2016). A number of conditions
that are considered processing disorders affect auditory and visual processing deficits which
weaken students’ ability to comprehend what they see and hear. Disorders such as attention
deficit hyperactivity disorder can result in hyperactivity, inattention and distractibility (Cortiella
& Horowitz, 2014). Other disorders that can also impede a student’s ability to focus on studies
are anxiety, obsessive compulsive disorders, and panic disorders. More and more students with
learning disabilities are accessing higher education opportunities (McGregor et al., 2016) and
colleges often provide services to ensure that these students and their specific educational needs
are addressed via tutoring, testing and assignment accommodations.
Definitions
Learning disabilities do not have a long history of recognition and accommodation.
Samuel Kirk coined the term and defined learning disabilities in 1963 to describe the condition
wherein a student of normal intelligence struggles to attain normal achievement (Cullen-Pullen,
2016). According to The Learning Disability Association of America (2019), “Learning
disabilities are neurologically-based processing problems that can interfere with learning basic
skills such as reading, writing and/or math; and can also interfere with higher level skills such as
organization, time planning, abstract reasoning, long or short term memory and attention.”
Simply stated, learning disabilities can be defined as a varying group of disorders that are caused
by neurological impairments and cause cognitive deficits within the learning domains of reading
and writing, speaking and listening, linguistic and mathematical reasoning (McGregor et al.,
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2016). The actual individual disorders may affect one or more of these learning domains and
ultimately hinder the affected student’s ability to learn in the same ways that typical, non-
disabled students learn.
Legislation
Due to government legislation regarding individuals with disabilities and their rights to
equal educational opportunities, more students with learning disabilities are seeking post-
secondary academic opportunities. The individuals with Disabilities Act (IDEA) of 1990
promoted a higher level of inclusion and acceptance at institutions of higher learning for students
with learning disabilities (McGregor et al., 2016). The IDEA’s 1997 amendment and 2004
reauthorization further solidified to need for specialized services for students with learning
disabilities to transition from high school to college (McGregor et al., 2016). Another important
piece of legislation that impacts regulations surrounding students with learning disabilities and
the services to which they have access is the Americans with Disabilities Act (ADA) of 1990
which provides for mandated access to public facilities, educational services and allows for
educational accommodations for students who possess certain physical and/or mental
impairments, and prohibits discrimination based on those impairments (ADA). These key pieces
of legislation ensure that all students have access to equal educational opportunities and provide
services for disabled students that allow them to achieve to the same academic levels as their
non-disabled peers.
College Writing and Expectations
The discrepancy in skills and readiness account for why students falter in college. This is
even truer for writing skills, which are crucial for student success in almost every college level
course regardless of the major area of study. According to Conley (2007), only 35 percent of
students entering college from high school who study for a bachelor’s degree finish in four years,
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and only 56 percent finish in six years; and the key reason for this is the discrepancy between
their secondary and post-secondary expectations. The skills students are acquiring and learning
in high school are not serving them well enough once they enter college. Research papers are the
prevalent type of extensive college writing assignments across all genres, subjects, and majors.
Traditional college research papers are “informative in function, logical, thesis-driven, and
objective” (Metzler, 2009, p. W252). Other than grammar and syntax abilities, the skills
students need in order to write successful college research papers include, research skills, reading
and comprehension skills, critical thinking and organizational skills, creativity and the ability to
synthesize information and present it in their own words (Irvin, 2010,p.8-9). When students
arrive at college without a solid grasp on each of these skills, they fail to meet college writing
expectations and their overall academic achievement falters.
Types of Writing
While not in every single assignment, most of the time college writing is an argument.
This is true for research papers across curriculums and subject areas. For many college writing
assignments, the student is tasked with writing a paper that requires them to make a claim and
support that claim with evidence from research. Writing thesis statement can be challenging for
new college students because it requires concrete argumentation skills and the ability to connect
arguments to evidence in a convincing way (Garcia-Gorrostieta & Lopez-Lopez, 2018, p. 3037).
Some of the common types of writing assignments students are asked to complete at the college
level are; closed writing assignments where the student is asked to address a specific question,
the semi-open writing assignment where the student are offered a topic and then must propose
their own focus or claim, and finally the open writing assignment where the student must
formulate the topic and claim for the subject matter presented (Irvin, 2010, p. 11-13). Regardless
of the type of academic paper, the students must compose a thesis statement; whether it is based
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on the research and their opinion about that research, or whether is it based solely on the
information presented to them by an instructor.
The Need for Tutoring
The more students with learning disabilities that are accepted to, and enroll in, university
and college programs, the greater the need is for specialized academic services to address these
students’ specific academic issues. There is an increase in reported learning disabilities;
“Learning disabilities are the most common type of disability reported by postsecondary students
in the U.S.” and at this education level, 31% of students with general disabilities have some type
of learning disability (McGregor et al., 2016). Often, these students do not have a solid writing
foundation on which to master college level skills. Argument writing, which is the style of most
undergraduate papers, is difficult because it requires intricate linguistic and cognitive skills
(Campbell, & Filimon, 2018). Many students are not equipped for this type of writing when they
enter college. According to Mason, Harris, & Graham (2011), students with learning disabilities
do not get time practicing the academic writing process while in school and often focus on
mastering “low-level transcription skills such as handwriting, spelling, capitalization, and
punctuation” (21). While it is crucial for students to master these low-level skills, it does not
fully prepare them for the rigors of college writing courses. Typical students do not fare much
better where their writing skills are concerned. Data indicates that 88% of eighth grade students
and 82% of twelfth graders in the United States score only at the most rudimentary level of
writing skill mastery and 50% of college freshman do not write at the college level (Plakhotnik
& Rocco, 2016). The implications for these students include impending academic problems
when they reach college and the implications for instructors are just as troubling.
When a college student is unable to write at college level, then the onus is on the college
instructor to ready these students to write for success. According to Forrest & Moquett (2016),
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college students were unprepared to execute college level writing skills such as effective thesis
statement writing, composing paragraphs, using evidence to support theses and writing proper
introductions and conclusions. While there seems to be an overall writing skills crisis, students
with learning disabilities often struggle with additional academic, psychological, or physical
challenges that may exacerbate their inability to write, and these variables must be thoughtfully
considered when planning and providing instruction.
Instructional and Assessment Strategies
The more assessment and instructional strategies that an instructor has in their toolbox
and the more skill that instructor has in applying those strategies, “the better the teacher will be
able to create lessons that optimize student learning” (Marzano, 2017, p. 2). Instructing students
with learning disabilities requires the teacher or tutor to be able to adjust instruction quickly, and
being prepared with as many strategies as possible makes this task easier for the teacher and
more effective for the student. Along with providing engaging instruction, teachers should be
diagnosticians who are able to determine the most appropriate instructional strategies to apply in
order to provide the best possible instruction for each student (Tomlinson, 2014, p. 4).
Differentiating instruction, scaffolding and ongoing assessment is crucial in teaching any level or
ability of student, and more so when instructing students with learning disabilities.
There are an abundance of instructional strategies that can be applied in the classroom or
tutoring session that are meant to improve student writing skills, including thesis statement
writing. Rubrics are ubiquitous in college classrooms and when properly utilized, this assessment
tool can also be a powerful instructional tool. In their research, Forrest & Moquett (2016)
discovered that using rubrics in each phase of the writing process increased mastery as the
phases progressed. The way that students felt about their grade and how they surveyed all of
their errors changed due to the use of the rubrics also. “Previously, students would look at the
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mistakes that pulled their grades down. Now, due to the use of rubrics in the revision process,
students are viewing initial errors as positive opportunities to learn how to improve their own
writing” (Forrest & Moquett, 2016, p. 183). When used properly through each step of the writing
process, rubrics can motivate and assist students to improve their writing skills.
Another instructional strategy that has been geared specifically toward students with
learning disabilities is “self-regulation” which involves a process of mindful analysis, goal-
setting, planning, self-examination and motivation to increase students’ writing abilities (Garcia,
& Fidalgo, 2010, p.118). This type of reflective educational environment encourages meta-
cognition which allows students to think about how they learn, why they have made mistakes,
and how they can participate in the improvement process. The study revealed that self-regulation
is an effective method for improving writing skills and that these strategies are useful when
instructing students with learning disabilities to become competent and self-aware academic
writers (Garcia, & Fidalgo, 2010). The goal of self-regulation is that it ultimately empowers
students to fully participate in the learning process and construct new knowledge, which
motivates students to achieve to their full potential.
Assessment should be tied to instruction in all instructional situations. Formative
assessment is the ongoing discussion or feedback cycle that enables students to continually grow
academically and help the instructor to adjust lessons as those students grow (Tomlinson, 2014).
The effective and convenient fact about formative assessment is that almost any task can be used
for the purpose of assessment, thus allowing formative assessment to permeate the classroom.
Tomlinson (2014) claims that a teacher is always aware of their students changing abilities, and
is a habitual observer of the learning process. This constant feedback loop in the classroom
informs both the student and the teacher. The students understand what is expected and how they
are performing and the teacher is shown what lessons are effective and which are not. According
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to Evans, Zeun, & Stanier (2013), by taking students on a “formative assessment journey,”
instructors can “…improve student learning through familiarizing students with the levels of
learning required, informing them about gaps in their learning and providing feedback to guide
the direction of learning.” Regardless of the instructional environment, ongoing assessment is an
invaluable tool to ensure that students get all that they can from a lesson and that the teacher has
the flexibility to change those lessons based on this feedback.
Efficacy and Results
Overall, data indicates that students who seek additional tutoring outside of their normal
course schedule tend to have slightly higher grades that those students who do not seek tutoring
(Hendriksen, Yang, Love & Hall, 2005, p. 61). According to Zeng, Ju, & Hord (2018), tutoring
assistance is an effective “one-on-one instructional strategy that allows students to review and
discuss specific course material with a professional...” (p.164). Zeng, et al., (2018) go on to posit
that students who attend regular tutoring sessions experienced positive effects on their overall
motivation to work, their accountability for that work, and their grade point average.
Additionally, and more specifically, those students who seek additional assistance with tutoring
in writing have higher success rates in that task. Research indicates that students who regularly
attend session at college writing centers scored higher on college composition assignments than
those students who did not seek help (Williams and Takaku, 2011, p. 13). While there seems to
be a general consensus is that tutoring is effective in increasing writing skills of college students,
there are areas that require additional research and study.
Gaps in the Literature
The overall results of research regarding the student outcomes of tutoring and specifically
the effectiveness of writing tutoring on college students indicates that when students seek
tutoring assistance their grades improve, but there is room for more study. There are gaps in the
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literature and many instances for addition research—especially regarding college students with
learning disabilities. One issue was that the nature of tutoring often only allows for data that is
student driven; meaning that it is up to the student to determine whether or not tutoring was
effective (Hendriksen, Yang, Love & Hall, 2005, p. 61). Another problem that occurs in tutoring
environments is that the tutor often does not have knowledge of their students final grade and
how tutoring actually affected that final grade. According to Hendriksen, et al. (2005), while
studies indicate that tutoring is helpful, it is difficult to measure how helpful. There are also
issues of the generalizability of studies aiming to determine the efficacy of tutoring because no
two writing centers or tutors are alike. Thus the individualized nature of instruction in a tutoring
situation makes it difficult to generalize any research results. The same can be said about the
criteria that measures writing ability (Williams & Takaku, 2011, p. 5). Proficient writing ability
seems to vary which makes it difficult to define and generalize. Thus researchers agree that there
is need for additional research on the topic of tutoring college students, tutoring writing and
tutoring students with learning disabilities.
Methodology
Setting
The researcher tutors in a tutoring center of a small private women’s university in the
southeast of the United States with a total undergraduate enrollment of approximately 1800
students. The tutoring center provides specialized, professional tutoring and accommodation
services to the university students who have been diagnosed with learning disabilities,
international students whose second language is English, and if availability allows,
traditional/typical students. The center offers tutoring in a wide range of typical and specialized
undergraduate and graduate subjects; these include courses such as English, literature, paper
writing, mathematics, business, hard and social sciences, art, interior design, nursing and
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occupational therapy. The center services approximately 150 students each semester. Tutoring
sessions are private, individual and customized for each student depending on subject,
assignment, educational need and learning disability. The tutoring center also provides
counseling services and instruction in time management and study skills.
Subjects
Due to the organization of the services the center provides, the researcher tutors a limited
number of students on a one-on-one basis for one to two sessions per week, for up to an hour
each session. Thus, the subjects able to participate in this action research study consisted of 4
undergraduate students that the researcher tutored during the spring semester. Each student is
female between the ages of 18 and 22 and is pursuing an undergraduate degree. The participating
students each have a different learning disability that allows them to receive tutoring and those
disabilities include; Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder, audio processing disorder, anxiety,
and dyslexia. Each student received individualized tutoring by request, in part due to their
specific learning disability. Each student has requested assistance with a paper writing
assignment in one or more of their spring semester courses.
Procedures
Each student receives English or writing tutoring specifically for paper writing skills and
has experienced difficulties writing a proper thesis statement for their papers. The researcher
implemented instruction and formative assessment strategies designed to teach the student how
to plan and write a proper thesis statement based on the student’s specific assignment, textual
sources and course materials. The researcher implemented an instructional sequence (Figure 1)
of which was altered according to each students needs as the lesson was occurring and took
place over the course of three weeks; or approximately 3 tutoring sessions. The objectives of the
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instructional sequence were based on the course objectives and assignment rubric. Formative
data was collected throughout the sequence to determine if instruction needed to be adjusted.
The researcher had the students complete a pre-study questionnaire to measure their
thesis writing confidence level prior to the study. Then, the researcher facilitated a thesis writing
pre-test to establish a baseline score. The instructional sequence was then presented. The
researcher observed and recorded anecdotal evidence throughout the presentation of the
instructional sequence. After the lesson was completed, the researcher gave the students a post-
test to determine any changes in thesis statement writing proficiency from the pre-test. Finally,
the students completed a post-study questionnaire that was designed to measure if thesis writing
confidence levels changed from the pre-study questionnaire. The researcher recorded each
student’s score data using non-identifiable information in order to protect the participants’
privacy.
Assignment Objective: Write an arguable thesis statement Learning Targets :
Absorb Activity Do Activity Connect Activity Assessments
Analyze paper topic to isolate details.
Read sources
Complete pre-test Complete multi- section T-chart
Create sentence level introduction outline
T-chart and discussion
Sequence topic details in order of significance.
Direct Instruction-video or instructor lecture https://study.com/academy/lesson/organizational-patterns-for-writing-purpose-and-types.html
Create sequence chart
Summarize most important details in a written paragraph
Sequence chart and/or discussion
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Organize problem/issue and details into workable thesis statement.
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Complete thesis post-test
Write usable thesis statement
Thesis post-test and completed thesis statement
Figure 1: Instructional sequence for tutoring thesis statement writing
Instrumentation
Prior to the beginning of the study, the researcher utilized a pre-study questionnaire
(Appendix B) to gauge how confident the students were about their thesis statement writing
abilities. The questionnaire employed a Likert scale to measure the student’s opinions by posing
five statements on which they rated their agreement or disagreement. The researcher then
administered a pre-test (Appendix C) to gage the students’ knowledge about writing thesis
statements prior to the beginning of the study in order to establish a baseline score. After the
study, the researcher gave the students a post-test (Appendix D) to measure if the students’
knowledge of thesis writing had changed from the pre-test scores. At the beginning of the study,
the researcher reviewed the thesis writing rubric/checklist (Appendix E) with the students and
explained the instructional sequence (Figure 1) objective and learning targets. The researcher
then facilitated the instruction during the set time of the study; over the course of regular, weekly
scheduled tutoring sessions. During the study, specifically during the pre and post –tests, the
researcher noted any relevant, anecdotal data that was observed during the instruction. After the
completion of the study, a post-study Likert scale questionnaire (Appendix F) was given to the
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students in order to measure any changes in their attitude or confidence levels in their thesis
statement writing ability after they participated in the research study.
Data Collection
Students were assessed prior to and after the execution of the tutor designed instructional
sequence. The instructional sequence and the sequence learning targets were based on the
English department’s analytical writing rubric and the student’s course and assignment
instructions. Test score data was collected based on tutor created and administered pre-tests and
post-tests (Appendix C and D), tutor observation during instruction based on any formative
adjustments in instruction that were required, and tutor-created pre and post study questionnaires
(Appendix B and F) that were administered to the students prior to the beginning of the study
and again after the conclusion of the study and recorded how the students felt about their thesis
writing ability—it measured their confidence levels.
The first questionnaire asked students to rate their own confidence in their thesis writing
on a Likert Scale. The pretest was administered at the first tutoring session and was designed to
measure the students’ initial proficiency level at writing a proper thesis statement. During the
study, the researcher recorded observations regarding the students’ progress, challenges, and any
time instruction needed to be adjusted based on assessments. After the completion of the
instructional sequence, the post-test was given to check if the students were able to recognize and
write a complete thesis statement. A researcher-created Likert scale questionnaire designed to
record the student’s opinion regarding their confidence level in their thesis writing knowledge
was also administered at the conclusion of the study, after the post test was completed.
By the end of the study, the researcher compiled data on the student’s perceived
confidence levels before and after the study, the pre and post test scores, and any tutor-recorded
observations. The pre and post tests were scored and a percentage grade was assigned. The thesis
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writing portion of each test was graded according to a thesis writing rubric/checklist that the
students utilized during the instructional sequence, so they were familiar with the criteria that
was used to grade their thesis statements.
Data Analysis
The researcher utilized an inferential data analysis approach to the quantitative data
produced during the study by taking the thesis statement writing pre-test baseline percentage
scores and calculating the mean for all participants. Due to the small sample size of 4
participants, the median and mode was not calculated for the totality of the participants. Then the
researcher recorded the post-test raw percentage scores for each student and calculated the mean
scores and compared the scores to those from the pretest. The researcher then noted any high or
low changes in student’s scores from pre to post test and reported the data in a table to illustrate
any increase or decrease in scores. By analyzing the change in raw scores, as well as comparing
the means from pre to post test, the researcher was able to gain insight about the research
question: Will college students with learning disabilities write more affective thesis statements
after receiving tutoring instruction?
The Likert scale style questionnaires were analyzed utilizing the raw data as a score due
to the small sample size for this study. The responses from the pre and post study questionnaires
were compiled and the occurrence of each response for each statement was compiled and
analyzed to determine any changes in data from the pre to post questionnaires. Questionnaire
data was analyzed, recorded and charted to compare results in response from pre to post
questionnaire. By utilizing questionnaires and analyzing the collected data, the researcher
acquired more clarity about the students’ confidence regarding their thesis writing abilities by
answering the research question: Will college students with learning disabilities experience any
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change in confidence in their own thesis writing abilities after receiving individualized tutoring
in thesis writing?
Any relevant qualitative data was analyzed using narrative procedures. The observational
data that was recorded by the researcher during the study was summarized according to patterns,
themes, and commonality and reported narratively in order to accompany the quantitative data
and add context for any student progress or regression, and provide further insight to the overall
study research questions.
Limitations
Some of the limitations of this research study were that tutoring is done on a voluntary
basis; therefore, the students are not required to attend every tutoring session—or not at all. This
altered the timing of the instructional sequence for most of the participants. For example; if a
student did not show up for one of their sessions, the instructional sequence had to be condensed
during the following session. Additionally, the voluntary basis of the tutoring program limited
the number of students who were available to participate in the study due to conflicts with their
athletic team obligations and other scheduling conflicts. Thus, one of the main limitations of this
research study, which affected the data analysis and the ability to generalize certain findings, was
the small sample size.
Summary
The researcher implemented an instructional sequence that was designed to instruct
students with disabilities on thesis statement writing in the time allotted for three tutoring
sessions spread out over the course of three weeks. The goals were to determine the efficacy of
the tutoring instruction on the students’ thesis writing and thesis writing confidence levels. The
instruction occurred at the researcher’s tutoring office with four participating college students
with learning disabilities.
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Findings
Tutoring data indicated that the researcher’s college students with learning disabilities
were less than proficient in writing thesis statements. The purpose of this action research study
was to identify the effects of tutoring on the thesis statement writing skill of college students
with learning disabilities and the effects of tutoring on student’s thesis statement writing
confidence levels. The study aimed to measure the thesis statement writing and confidence levels
of students before and after the facilitation of an instructional sequence designed to provide
instruction on the processes and procedures for writing a strong, arguable thesis statement. Pre
and post-tests and a rubric were utilized to measure the students’ thesis statement writing scores,
and pre and post-questionnaires were used to collect data on student confidence levels regarding
their thesis statement writing.
Demographics
The subjects of this study were female college students enrolled full-time at a private
university in Georgia, USA. Each student is enrolled in a bachelor degree program and is
working on different majors. Each of the researcher’s students who participated in the study have
at least one learning disability. A total of four students participated in the research study over the
course of three tutoring sessions and span the length of three weeks to perform the entire study.
Item Analysis: Thesis Statement Writing
The first research question that was addressed in this study aimed to determine the effects
of tutoring on the thesis statement writing of college students with learning disabilities; more
specifically, will college students with learning disabilities write more effective thesis statements
after receiving tutoring instruction? The students’ baseline score was determined via a thesis
writing pre-test. After receiving tutoring instruction designed by the researcher to instruct on
thesis statement writing, the students completed a post-test. Both the pre-test and the post- test
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consisted of five questions and one thesis statement writing prompt. The student’s thesis
statements were graded using a self-assessment rubric (Appendix E). Each question on both tests
were assigned a point value that cumulatively equaled 100 %. Each student’s pre-test and post-
test were graded and given a percentage score.
Results
Each of the students’ raw scores indicate an increase from the pre-test to the post-test.
Two out of four students scored fairly high on the pre-test and two of four received middling
scores on the pretest. All four of the students scored higher on the post-test than they did on the
pre-test; even if the score increased only marginally. Those who scored lower on the pre-test
achieved a higher overall increase in grade from the pre-test to the post-test—ultimately
matching, if not surpassing those students who scored higher on the pre-test.
Table 1: Individual Raw Pre and Post Test Scores
The researcher examined the pre-test and post-test means (Table 2) to determine the
significance of the change in scores from pre to post test. The mean scores further illustrate an
overall increase in student scores from pre-test to post-test:
Students
Pretest Score Posttest Score Difference
S 1 91 95 +4
S 2 92 93 +1
S 3 84 100 +16
S 4 85 95 +10
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Table 2: Class Mean Pre and Post Test Scores
Anecdotal Data
The researcher recorded qualitative data in the form of observational notes as illustrated
in Table 3. During the presentation of the pre-test and the post-test, the researcher recorded
observational notations for each student in order to highlight any student issues with the process,
procedure, and/or assignment in an attempt to isolate any patterns or commonalities that might
further inform the research study.
Students Tutor Comments
S1 Had no problems recognizing proper thesis statements—high score on tests. Pre: Was able to write a topic sentence, but not a full thesis statement with significance statement. Was unsure of how to organize statement. Post: Better overall thesis statement with significance statement, but thesis statement a bit vague.
S2 Had no problem recognizing proper thesis statements—high score on tests. Pre: Was able to write a good thesis statement, but struggled with sentence structure/organization and grammar. Post: Thesis statement was more specific, but still suffered from sentence structure and grammar issues.
S3 Had trouble recognizing proper thesis statements—middling score on pretest. Pre: Was able to write a full thesis statement. Post: Had no trouble recognizing proper thesis statements. Wrote a full thesis statement.
S4 Had no problem recognizing proper thesis statements—middling score on pre-test. Pre: Was able to write a topic sentence, not a full thesis statement. Post: Was able to write a fuller thesis statement. Struggled with small sentence structure issues.
Table 3: Tutor Observation Notes
Pre-Test Mean Post-Test Mean Mean Difference
88 95.75 +7.75
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Half of the participants seemed fairly at ease while taking the pre and post texts and those
students’ scores were fairly high on both tests. The other half seemed to struggle slightly with the
pre-tests and made lower scores—but scored high on the post test. Three of the participants were
able to recognize a correct thesis statement when given an option of two thesis statements from
which to select on the pretest and one struggled. However, all the participants expressed
understanding of, and comfort with, the post-test questions and were able to complete it
satisfactorily.
Item Analysis: Confidence Levels
The second and final research question that was addressed by this action research study
aimed to measure any effects of tutoring on the thesis statement writing confidence levels of
college students with learning disabilities: specifically, will college students with learning
disabilities experience any change in confidence in their own thesis writing after receiving
individualized tutoring in thesis writing?. A Likert scale style questionnaire was given to the
students before and after their tutoring session. The questions gauged how the students felt about
their thesis statement writing prior to, and then after completing a thesis statement writing
instructional sequence. The questionnaires utilized five questions and provided a Likert scale
from one to five with the following values:
• 1 = Strongly Agree
• 2 = Agree
• 3 = Uncertain/Do not Understand the Question (Neutral)
• 4 = Disagree
• 5 = Strongly Disagree
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The pre-lesson and post-lesson questionnaire posed statements with which the students
would select a level of agreement or disagreement as illustrated by the Likert scale. The
statements on which the students made comments are:
• Question 1 (Q1). I do not know what a thesis statement is
• Question 2 (Q2). I am unsure how to start writing a thesis statement
• Question 3 (Q3). I cannot write an arguable thesis statement
• Question 4 (Q4). I cannot organize all necessary points of a full thesis statement
• Question 5 (Q5). I am very confident that I can write a full, arguable thesis
statement
Results
While there was not a huge overall shift in the students’ thesis writing confidence levels
from pre-questionnaire to post-questionnaire, each student did indicate an increase in confidence
from the pre to post questionnaire; even if it was just a marginal. Table 4 illustrates the raw score
data for each students’ rating of each statement/question (Q1-Q5) for both pre and post
questionnaires.
Students Questionnaire Q 1 Q 2 Q 3 Q 4 Q 5
S 1
Pre-Questionnaire:
Values for each
question
5 4 5 4 2
S 2 5 5 4 2 2
S 3 5 4 4 4 1
S 4 4 2 1 3 5
S 1
Post-Questionnaire:
5 5 5 4 2
S 2 5 5 5 4 2
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S 3 Values for each
questions
5 5 5 5 1
S 4 5 4 4 4 2
Table 4: Student Confidence Questionnaire Raw Data
The participant percentages for each question/statement (Q1-Q5) for the pre and post-
questionnaire break down illustrates that there was an overall increase in student thesis writing
confidence levels as illustrated in figure 2
Figure 2: Students Confidence: Pre and Post Study Numbers
The pre-study questionnaire revealed that all four of the participants were confident in
their ability to recognize and know what a thesis statement is, while only two were confident in
their ability to begin writing one. Three of the participants felt confident in making their thesis
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statement arguable, creating a full thesis statement, and being able to write a full, arguable thesis
statement, while only one was not confident in these processes. The post-study questionnaire
indicated that all four participants felt confident in performing each of the thesis statement
writing procedures on which they were asked.
While the small sample size and time constraints imposed by the setting of a tutoring
practice limited the design and scope of the research, the overall results for this study—based on
this sample size—indicated an increase in score and confidence level after the implementation of
tutoring for thesis statement writing. Due to the small sample size, it may be warranted to
perform the research study on a larger sample size in order to better determine the efficacy of the
instructional sequence. However, the results of this limited study encouraged the researcher to
utilize thesis writing instruction in order to assist students in their thesis statement writing
practice and to help elevate their confidence in doing so.
Discussion
The purpose of this study was to determine the effectiveness of focused tutoring on the
thesis statement writing skills and thesis statement writing confidence levels of college students
with learning disabilities. The process of this study included pre-assessments, facilitation of a
focused and flexible instructional sequence, and ended with post-assessments. Pre-assessments
were key in establishing a baseline score for evaluating the effectiveness of the lesson, as well as
assessing and developing students’ prior knowledge of the topic of thesis statement writing
according to the instructional sequence. According to Mason, Harris, and Graham (2011),
accessing a writing student’s prior knowledge is a crucial strategy for writing instruction and
evaluation. By administering pre-tests and post-tests, the researcher intended to test the efficacy
of the instructional sequence in raising (or lowering) thesis statement writing scores. The
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researcher also utilized pre and post-study questionnaires to rate the students’ confidence in their
thesis statement writing skills before and after the instructional sequence.
The researcher utilized anecdotal data collected via observation during the
implementation of the instructional sequence. The collection of qualitative data was meant to
round out the limited availability of the quantitative data in order to increase the validity of the
research, as per Newton and Burgess (2008), “…action research is ready to attain the level of a
mature research approach within a qualitative research paradigm (p. 27). The researcher utilized
a combination of quantitative data in the form of pre and post test scores, and qualitative data in
the form of observational narrative to extract as much information as possible from the small
research sample size. The pre and post test score results of this study indicate an increase in
thesis writing scores and an increase in student confidence in their own thesis statement writing
skills.
The results of the pre and post study questionnaires regarding student confidence levels
indicated an increase in thesis statement confidence. These results were in agreement with
another study that indicated tutoring increases confidence in the subject that is being taught and
raises LD students’ academic self-efficacy (Michael, 2016, p.355). While the results of this study
indicate an increase in both areas of writing and confidence, it would be prudent to perform
further research to determine the extent of the effectiveness of tutoring for college students with
learning disabilities and to possibly increase the validity and generalizability of the study
findings.
Limitations
The main limitation of this research study was the small sample size of the participant
group. The small number of available participants was not adequate to provide enough data to
make a definite determination as to the effect of the tutoring on the thesis statement writing skills
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and/or confidence levels of students with learning disabilities. Another limitation was the nature
of the voluntary tutoring program at the researcher’s university. The voluntary nature of the
tutoring sessions allow for student absences, which made it difficult to administer the instruction
on a schedule that was consistent for each participant. While the results attained are useful to
help inform the researcher’s practice, the concern is that these limitations could affect the
validity and generalizability of the study.
Conclusions
The key conclusion of the research indicates that additional research that includes a larger
sample size needs to be performed in order to be able to make stronger connections between the
effectiveness of the instructional sequence on the thesis statement writing outcomes. However,
the conclusions based on the small sample size that was available for the current study are
helpful in informing the researcher’s current tutoring practice and act as a base for additional
research. Based on the findings of this research study, the following conclusions were drawn:
• There was some level of increase in thesis writing score for each participant of
this study.
• Those students who scored lower on the pre-test achieved a higher increase on the
post-test than those students who scored high on the pre-test.
• It appears that instruction does increase students’ confidence levels.
Recommendations
Based on the findings of this research study, the following are recommended actions to
be taken:
• The researcher should pursue the use of tutoring instruction that focuses on thesis
statement writing skills due to the results indicated by this preliminary study.
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• The researcher should perform additional action research on a larger sample size
in order to expand the data set and strengthen the validity of the study.
• The researcher should inform tutoring supervisor of results and recommended
actions
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Appendix A
Literature Review Outline
I. Introduction
II. Learning Disabilities
A. Definitions
B. Legislation
C. College Writing and Expectations
D. Types of writing
III. The Need for Tutoring
A. Statistics/Prevalence rates
B. Implications
IV. Instructional and Assessment Strategies
A. Differentiation
B. Rubrics
C. Self-Regulation
D. Assessment
V. Efficacy and Results
A. Gaps in the Literature
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Appendix B
Pre Study Student Questionnaires
Thesis Writing Student Questionnaire: Pre-Study
Identify how confident you are in writing thesis statements
Strongly Agree Agree
Uncertain/ Do Not
Understand Question
Disagree Strongly Disagree
1. I do not know what a thesis statement is
2. I am unsure how to start writing a thesis statement
3. I cannot write an arguable thesis statement
4. I cannot organize all necessary points of a full thesis statement
5. I am very confident that I can write a full, arguable thesis statement
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Appendix C
Thesis Writing Pre-Test
Directions: Read the questions about thesis statements and choose the best answer.
1. Why is it important to write a well-crafted thesis statement?
a. So your paper has enough detail.
b. So it is clear to you and your reader what your paper is about.
c. So your instructor knows that you read the material.
2. Why should your thesis statement have multiple “prongs?”
a. So your paper will be long enough.
b. So you can organize your paper by sub-topic as written in your thesis statement.
c. What are prongs?
Directions: Read the sample thesis statements and circle the best arguable thesis statement.
1. Edgar Allan Poe uses dark imagery to create a feeling of dread and loneliness in the poem,
“The Raven.” –or— Edgar Allan Poe’s poem, “The Raven” is dark and frightening.
2. Nurses should be paid more because nursing is a difficult and important job. –or— Nurses
should be paid the same as doctors because nurses are on the frontline of the healthcare crisis.
3. Jayne Eyre is one of the most complicated characters in literature because she lived in
Victorian times. –or— Jayne Eyre exhibits the complicated lives that women were living during
Victorian times because she went against the accepted social norms of the day.
Directions: Write a full, arguable thesis statement based on the prompt: Describe an
accomplishment that sparked a period of personal growth and understanding of yourself.
1.
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Appendix D
Thesis Writing Post-Test
Directions: Read the questions about thesis statements and choose the best answer.
1. 1. Why should your thesis statement have multiple “prongs?”
a. So your paper will be long enough.
b. So you can organize your paper by sub-topic as written in your thesis statement.
c. What are prongs?
2. Why is it important to write a well-crafted thesis statement?
a. So your paper has enough detail.
b. So it is clear to you and your reader what your paper is about.
c. So your instructor knows that you read the material.
Directions: Read the sample thesis statements and circle the best arguable thesis statement.
1. Smoking is bad for people’s health because it causes cancer and other deadly diseases. –or—
E-cigarettes are a healthy alternative to smoking and can assist those who smoke traditional
cigarettes to quit smoking permanently.
2. Mrs. Ramsey from Woolf’s “To the Lighthouse” is a paradoxical character because of her
competing ideas of traditional family life and the roles of men and women in society. –or—The
character of Mrs. Ramsey from Virginia Woolf’s “To the Lighthouse” is one of the most
complex characters in modernist literature because her ideas are strange.
3. T.S. Eliot’s poems are the best example of modernist thought because he expresses the horrors
of World War I. –or— T.S. Eliot’s poem “The Wasteland” illustrates a modernist shift in
societal attitude from one of carefree living to one of hopelessness and innocence lost through
his use of World War I imagery and metaphors.
Directions: Write a full, arguable thesis statement based on the prompt: Describe a talent or
skill that makes you feel confident and helps you achieve your personal goals.
1.
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Appendix E
Thesis Writing Rubric/Self-Assessment Checklist
4 = Exemplary 3 = Meets 2 =Just Misses 1 = Deficient
1. My thesis statement is arguable 4 3 2 1
2. My Thesis statement clearly makes my claim. 4 3 2 1
3. My thesis statement has enough 4 3 2 1
“prongs” or evidence.
4. My thesis statement answers a question. 4 3 2 1
5. My thesis statement tells the reader 4 3 2 1
the significance of the subject matter.
6. My thesis statement is the roadmap of my paper. 4 3 2 1
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Appendix F
Post Study Student Questionnaires
Thesis Writing Student Questionnaire: Post-Study
Identify how confident you are in writing thesis statements
Strongly Agree Agree
Uncertain/ Do Not
Understand Question
Disagree Strongly Disagree
1. I do not know what a thesis statement is
2. I am unsure how to start writing a thesis statement
3. I cannot write an arguable thesis statement
4. I cannot organize all necessary points of a full thesis statement
5. I am very confident that I can write a full, arguable thesis statement