September 23, 2009AP Question of the Day

• Pass up Homework

Groups = Must be done at end of Period• You will be assigned a section• You need to read your section. – Take notes– Pull out the main ideas– Causes and effects– Which country(ies) are discussed in the reading– Major and Important people

• You will break up into groups– Write on a piece of paper the main and important

information/people/events in that section.– You will then ask me to approve the main important

information/people/events in that section on apiece of paper– You will then write the information on a big piece of paper I

give you!

Groups = Must be done at end of Period• You will break up into groups– Write on a piece of paper the main and important

information/people/events in that section.– You will then ask me to approve the main important

information/people/events in that section on apiece of paper

– You will then write the information on a big piece of paper I give you!

Stop

Thesis

• A thesis statement is a statement of an argument that you intend to prove.

• A good thesis statement makes the difference between a thoughtful essay and a simple retelling of facts.

• An easy and simple way to start is by using although.

• The thesis for an AP essay must answer all parts of the question along with the position you will prove.

• Was it right for Kanye West to interrupt Taylor Swift at the VMA’s? Explain your answer.

Example of a Good Thesis

• Although Kanye West believed that Beyonce’s video was better, his interruption during Taylor Swift’s speech was inappropriate. What three prompts can you add here?

– Body paragraphs should discuss three reasons why it was

inappropriate. – I did NOT restate the thesis.

• Kanye West’s statement at the VMA’s was valid, because Beyonce’s Video was entertaining, catchy, and

• The thesis statement is typically located at the end of your opening paragraph. (The opening paragraph serves to set the context for the thesis.)

• The thesis statement is the “engine” which drives the entire essay.

• Remember, your reader will be looking for your thesis. Make it complete, clear, strong, and easy to find.

Attributes of a good thesis:

• It should be contestable, proposing an arguable point with which people could reasonably disagree.

• A strong thesis takes a stand and justifies the discussion you will present

• Which school is better Pacifica High School or Oxnard High School?

• It is specific and focused. • A strong thesis proves a point without

discussing everything.• Instead of music, think “American jazz in the 1930s” and your argument about it

Thesis

• It provides the reader with a map to guide him/her through your work.

• It avoids vague language (like “it seems”).• It avoids the first person. (“I believe,” “In my

opinion” or You)

How do you know if you have a solid thesis?

• Does the thesis answer all parts of the question?

• This is the most important fact to remember because an incomplete thesis results in an incomplete answer to the question, and an inadequate essay, which will receive a low grade.

• Would a reasonable reader NOT respond with “Duh!” or “So what?” or “Gee, no kidding!” or “Who cares?”

• Does the thesis avoid general phrasing and/or sweeping words such as “all” or “none” or “every”?

• Does the thesis lead the reader toward the topic sentences (the subtopics needed to prove the thesis)?

• If you cannot answer “YES” to these questions, you will need to make changes in order for your thesis to pass these tests.