Page 1 No matter how you spell it, It’s still the same.

No matter how you spell it,It’s still the same

• It's the essence of journalism: the key facts told in the most concise way.

• First (sometimes second) paragraph of a story.

• Journalism leads are like first impressions.

• You want to make sure they're good.

• The way journalists report the news may be changing, but having a strong story opening remains as important as ever.

• Give readers the main points of the story

• Gets readers interested in reading the story

• Accomplish both “a” and “b” in as few words as possible

• No longer than 30 to 35 words.

• Why so short?

• Readers want their news delivered quickly.

Hard NewsJournalists use the 5W’s & H

– Who who is the story about? – What what is the story about? – Where where did the event

you’re writing about occur? – When when did it occur? – Why why did this happen? – How how did this happen?

• Collect all your facts.• Sum it up. Boil it down.• Prioritize the Five W's.• Rethink. Revise. Rewrite.

9 Types

1. Summary2. Narrative 3. Descriptive 4. Direct Quotation5. Question6. Exclamatory7. Contrast8. Suspended Interest9. Allusion

From Sue Barr

“With a change from previous years, spectators came alive with spirit, making athletic events rock with noise and enthusiasm of the ’50s and ’60s.”

“Money wasn’t everything, even to perpetually broke students, as they gave their time and energy to volunteer in the community.”

“Using their own ideas to promote healthy thinking, Students Against Drunk Driving found creative and fun ways to show the importance of not using drugs and intoxicants.”

“At a time when technology and computers were bywords, students still flocked to learn sewing, cooking, child psychology and financing through home economics classes.”

From Sue Barr

Great for News

Great for News

“It was hot. It was Friday. It was unexpected. The kids were unprepared. The teachers only had two hours to get ready to be normal again. Everyone was shocked...the strike was over.”

“The Axemen inbounded the ball and passed to senior Karen Freeman in the corner. Freeman lobbed the ball inside to senior Sonia Wagoner less than five feet from the basket. Wagoner’s shot, virtually uncontested, gave South its first women’s state basketball title and also a first for District 5AAA, which had not advanced a team as far as the semifinals before.”

From Sue Barr

Great for Soft News or

Features


Features

“Meeting in an unused Industrial Arts room and an abandoned nursery school area with large fairly tale figures painted on the walls, International High School students learned about cultures the world over in its initial year.”

“The fragrance of chicken filled the air. Yellow broth trickled down from a stained white table onto a candy wrapper covered floor. The custodian scoffed at the mess, then wiped it away into an already full garbage can. Just another day in the cafeteria.”

From Sue Barr

Great for FeaturesGreat for Features

“Meeting in an unused Industrial Arts room and an abandoned nursery school area with large fairly tale figures painted on the walls, International High School students learned about cultures the world over in its initial year.”

“The fragrance of chicken filled the air. Yellow broth trickled down from a stained white table onto a candy wrapper covered floor. The custodian scoffed at the mess, then wiped it away into an already full garbage can. Just another day in the cafeteria.”

From Sue Barr


Features


Features

“I wish I could get more money for less work,” confessed senior Amanda Weller about her position at Safeway. It was a feeling expressed by many, with students expenses rising and limited working time available.”

“‘Sorry for the interruption. We have just one small announcement,’ blares the public address system. The teacher glares at the noisy box and class is disrupted one more time.”

“When I was in high school, everyone attended the baccalaureate,” remarked counselor Barbara Craig. “It was a serious, somber occasion. Now there’s so little information and understanding, you find only 20 kids attending.”

From Sue Barr

Use Sparingly

“Rating albums ‘R’ or ‘PG’? A practice unheard of, yet it almost became a reality when 25 recording companies agreed to comply — to a limited extent — with the wishes of the Parent Music Resource Center.”

“Homework? Why spend time learning about the Korean war when M*A*S*H is on in the next room? Why waste precious hours studying the functions of a city police force when Hill Street Blues is right at your fingertips?”

From Sue Barr

Avoid Using — Lazy man’s lead

“Life just kept getting more and more expensive.”

“State. A popular word among many South athletes, no matter what sport.”

From Sue Barr

“There were no chemicals, but there certainly was chemistry. There were no test tubes, but for sure there was experimenting. And a lot of mixing — and learning — took place in these labs. Jazz labs, that is.”

“The district cellar in 1987. State champs in 1988.”

From Sue Barr

“Tradition proved a powerful mainstay, to the dismay of Henry Hosfield, wrestling coach.”

“Working during school. Working after school. Spending free periods working. Doesn’t sound like a very fun club, does it? It’s called publishing a newspaper, a job that is challenging, ongoing and not always fun, but rewarding when the final product is distributed.”

“A purple principal, a hallway close to a quarter of a mile long, new workloads and new peers.” (Copy on new freshman class.)

“The Hult Center got a facelift, one that people didn’t see unless their eyes were on their feet.”

From Sue Barr

“The old saying, ‘It’s not whether you win or lose but how you play the game,’ was a lesson quickly learned by the JV volleyball team.”

“The eyes had it in 1987. The focus ranged from dazzling makeup to colored contacts.”

From Sue Barr

Always check these

Does the first word or phrase tell the most important idea in the story?

Does the lead begin with specific, interest-arousing words?

Is the WHO told, with the full name and a descriptive title or phrase included?

Is the WHAT and WHAT HAPPENED up to date, emphasizing the current or future angle?

Are the WHEN and WHERE answered in the lead but subordinated to more important information?

Are the HOW and WHY given a prominent place in the lead, if appropriate?

If the lead is 30 words or more, has it been broken into two sentences or paragraphs for easier reading?

Does the lead catch the spirit of the story? Does it create the proper tone, such as serious or light?

Is the lead free from spelling, style and grammar errors?

Are all names spelled correctly?

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