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    b ; . . ~ - . J : . OCCUP TION L

    :ec ENGLISH

    ;;;,

    TEST

    n

    overview

    of

    the

    Occupational

    English

    Test

    purpose of the Occupational English Test

    OET)

    is to evaluate the English

    language

    competence of

    people

    who have trained

    as medical

    health practitioners in

    one

    country

    and

    wish to

    gain

    provisional registration to practise their profession in

    an

    English-speaking context.

    most

    cases,

    applicants are subsequently required by their professional

    board

    or council

    to

    sit a test

    of

    professional knowledge.

    for the OET are from 12 health professions: dentistry,

    speech

    pathology,

    veterinary science. Nursing, dentistry and medicine currently

    the largest numbers of

    candidates.

    test is administered by the OET Centre, a business unit of the

    for Adult

    Education CAE] in

    Melbourne, Australia, which

    responsibility for the test in 2004.

    four language skills are tested -lis tening, reading, writing and

    with

    an

    emphasis

    on

    contextualised communication

    The Speaking

    and

    Writing sub-tests are

    each

    profession, while the Listening and Reading sub-tests

    common to all candidates.

    test is currently used

    by

    the governing bodies of the professions

    state

    and

    national level

    in Australia and New

    Zealand

    and

    25 points by the Australian Department of Immigration

    Citizenship

    OIAC). Each

    board or council determines the

    of the

    OET

    result necessary for candidates to meet language

    demands ofthe professional workplace.

    OET

    uses

    a secure test

    bank from

    which materials are selected

    OET Statements of Results include ascaled band score grade) for

    each

    of the four sub-tests. Scores

    are

    considered valid for two

    years

    by most professional regulatory bodies.

    The

    OET

    Centre does

    not currently set a limit

    on

    the number of

    times a candidate may present for testing. Many candidates

    may

    re-s

    it the sub-tests for which they do not obtain a satisfactory grade

    without re-sitting those for which the grade is satisfactory.

    Some

    professional regulatory authorities,

    however,

    require candidates to

    obtain satisfactory grades on all four sub-tests at one administration

    ofthetest.

    Frequency and location

    The

    OET

    is currently administered 10 times a year in up to 40

    locations around the world. The largest testing centres are in Australia.

    Security

    Test

    materials are sent to test venues by secure

    courier. All

    staff

    involved in administering the test

    sign

    a confidentiality agreement.

    All test materials are returned to the OET Centre in Melbourne

    by

    secure courier and

    accounted

    for.

    each

    administration. The only past test materials available are Administrators

    by the OET Centre. Listening and reading test materials The OET

    is

    administered at each

    venue

    under the direction of a trained

    developed for the OET Centre by staff at the Language Testing Venue Co-ordinator. Detailed instructions explaining the required

    Centre

    LTRC)

    of the University of Melbourne.

    LTRC

    staff also administration procedures

    are

    included with the test materials

    and

    oft st data. From time to time specialist test Co-ordinators check that all standards required by the

    OET

    Centre are

    are engaged to devise further test materials in line with

    met.

    Interviewers

    have

    native

    or

    native-like competence in

    English.

    same

    technical processes.

    and

    Speaking

    materials for the test

    are

    written in consultation

    or with experienced

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    Assessment

    Assessors must have a tertiary qualification or equivalent and a

    TESOL

    qualification. A post-graduate qualification

    in language

    testing

    is

    desirable. Assessors undergo specific training

    in

    OET assessment

    methodology.

    Assessment is conducted at the

    OET

    Centre in

    Melbourne

    and

    preceded

    by training and standardisation for assessors to achieve

    optimum consistency of standards.

    Assessment

    of

    he Listening sub-test

    The Listening sub-test is assessed against a detailed marking guide

    prepared

    by

    the test designers. Problematic scripts are dealt with

    as

    a group by

    an

    experienced assessor and all critical borderline scripts

    are double-marked.

    Assessment

    of he Reading sub test

    art

    A

    Part A s a Summary reading task. This requires test-takers to skim

    and scan

    3-4 short texts

    a

    total of about 650 words) related to a

    single topic and to complete a summary paragraph by filling in the

    missing words.

    Part A s marked by a small group of

    experienced

    assessors in

    Melbourne.

    Test-takers write short-answer (

    1 3

    word] responses

    which

    are

    marked according to a detailed marking

    key

    prepared by

    the test designers.

    Assessment

    of

    the Reading sub-test - Part B

    Part 8 is a computer marked multiple-choice

    MCO)

    test. It is initially

    analysed by the University of New South

    Wales

    and then further by

    the University of Melbourne for performance of individual items.

    Assessment

    of

    the Writing

    and

    Speaking sub-tests

    Writing scripts and Speaking interviews are rated twice, with

    aberrant

    and

    unusual cases marked a third time. Assessors use a

    set of criteria to rate candidates performance. Analysis of assessor

    consistency

    and

    severity is conducted using multi-faceted

    RASCH

    analysis.

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    Registration procedures

    All

    test applications are submitted online through the

    OETwebsite.

    Candidate photos

    are uploaded

    to the website

    and

    payment is taken

    online by credit

    card. When

    applying, candidates must

    also

    give the

    exact details of the identity document they will provide when sitting

    the test. The

    OET

    Centre only accepts passports

    as

    proof of identity

    but makes an exception for candidates with a national identity

    card, provided they are sitting the test in the country that issued it.

    Candidates undergo a rigorous

    1

    check

    upon

    initial registration

    on

    the test

    day

    and before each sub-test. The

    1

    check procedures have

    DIAC

    approval.

    Communication with candidates is

    by

    email and

    via

    the website.

    Candidates can access sample materials. Specific details for

    particular venues and timetables for the individual sub-tests

    are provided two weeks prior to the day of the test. Candidate

    information, including photo and identity document number, is sent

    to the venues for identity verification

    on

    the test

    day.

    Special provision

    Candidates

    with special needs are provided for. Specifications for test

    venues are given in detailed instructions to

    Venue

    Co-ordinators.

    All

    test venues must comply with

    local

    requirements for meeting the

    needs of people with disabilities.

    The

    OET

    Centre makes all reasonable arrangements to accommodate

    special

    visual or auditory

    needs,

    including enlargement of print texts

    and special auditory equipment.

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    istory

    of

    the

    t st

    Occupational English Test

    was

    designed by Professor Tim

    ofthe University of Melbourne under contract to the

    Federal

    Government.

    part of the annual intake of refugees

    and

    immigrants, hundreds

    were

    entering Australia

    by

    mid to late 1980s. The majority were medical practitioners but a

    groups were

    also

    represented.

    process

    o

    registration to practise

    in

    most health professions

    stages of assessment: English language

    cy, a multiple

    choice

    test of profession-specific clinical

    and

    a performance-based test of clinical competence.

    ction with the results of existing

    language

    tests led to

    researched

    specifications for a

    icative, contextualised test. The OET

    has been

    frequently

    reviewed and analysed in the literature over the past 25 years.

    McNamara

    ( 1996)*

    1

    gives a full account ofthe development of the

    test

    and

    associated validation research.

    The

    initial development

    o

    he test specifications involved:

    a.

    extensive consultation with expert informants, including clinical

    educators, ESL teachers offering

    language

    support

    in

    clinical

    settings, and overseas-trained professionals

    who were

    completing

    or had

    completed a clinical bridging program.

    b.

    literature search.

    c. direct observation of the workplace.

    tages of Test Development, presentation

    by

    ProfTim McNamara August 2007

    2

    * :McNamara, T [1996] Measuring Second Language Performance.

    London:

    Longman.

    *

    2

    :

    McNamara T [2007]

    Stages

    ofTest Development. OET Forum.

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    escription

    of the

    O T

    Test format

    The

    OET assesses listening, reading, writing and speaking.

    There is a separate sub-test for each skill area. The Listening and

    Reading

    sub-tests are designed to assess the ability to understand spoken

    and written English

    in

    contexts related to

    general

    health

    and

    medicine.

    The

    sub-tests for Listening and

    Reading

    are not specific to any single

    profession but

    are

    based on topics and tasks common to all professions.

    The Writing and Speaking sub-tests are specific to

    each

    profession and are designed to assess the ability to use English appropriately in a

    relevant professional context.

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    Listening Sub-test

    The Listening sub-test consists of two parts: a recorded, simulated professional-patient

    consultation with note-taking questions Part A],

    and

    a

    recorded

    talk or lecture

    on

    a

    health-related topic with short-answer/note-taking questions Part B), each about

    15 minutes of recorded

    speech.

    A set of questions

    is

    attached to

    each

    section and

    candidates write their answers while listening. The original recording is edited with

    pauses

    to allow candidates time to write their answers.

    The format for

    Part

    A the consultation) requires candidates to produce case notes

    under relevant headings

    and

    to write

    as

    much relevant information

    as

    possible.

    Most questions in

    Part

    B the lecture) indude indications

    on

    the number of points

    a candidate is expected to indude.

    Reading Sub-test

    The

    Reading sub-test consists of two parts:

    Part

    A

    s

    a summary reading task.

    This

    requires candidates to skim

    and scan

    3-4 short

    texts

    (a

    total of about

    650

    words) related to a single topic and to complete a summary

    paragraph

    by

    filling in the missing words. Candidates

    are

    required to write responses

    for

    25-35

    gaps

    in

    total, within a strictly monitored time limit of 15 minutes.

    Part A

    s

    designed to test the reader s ability to source information from multiple texts,

    to synthesise information in a meaningful way and to assess skimming and scanning

    ability under a time limit.

    In

    Part B candidates are required to

    read

    two passages 600-800 words

    each)

    on

    general

    medical topics and answer

    8-10

    multiple choice questions for

    each

    text

    (a

    total

    of 16-20 questions) within a time limit of

    45

    minutes.

    Part

    B

    s

    designed to test the

    reader s

    ability to

    read

    in

    greater detail general

    and

    specific information for comprehension.

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    coring

    the

    t st

    OET

    grades

    are reported on an official report form, the Statement of

    Results. Aband score is reported for each of the sub-tests.

    These

    band

    scores range from A (highest) toE (lowest].

    They

    are derived

    differently for the sub-tests for the productive skills (Writing

    and

    Speaking] and receptive skills (Listening and Reading).

    Writing and

    Speaking

    The Writing and Speaking sub-tests are marked by trained,

    experienced

    assessors

    based

    in

    Melbourne. Each

    candidate s

    performance is marked by two assessors, who mark independently

    of

    each

    other and without knowledge of a candidate s performance

    on the

    other sub-tests.

    The

    Writing

    and Speaking

    sub-tests

    are each

    graded against five criteria; each criterion has six grade levels,

    1-6,

    with level 6 representing a

    very

    strong response.

    The criteria for each sub-test are:

    Writing

    Overall Task

    Fulfilment, Appropriateness

    of

    Language,

    Comprehension of Stimulus, Linguistic Features (Grammar

    Cohesion),

    Presentation Features (Spelling, Punctuation

    Layout)

    The data are analysed using multi-faceted RASCH analysis McNamara

    1996*

    1

    ] with

    FACETS

    software (Linacre 19B9*

    2

    ;

    candidate and

    assessor

    are

    facets in the analysis.

    All

    candidates who are found to

    have

    unexpected responses in the

    data

    analysis

    are

    third

    marked. To

    compensate for

    any

    differences in

    assessor severity,

    band

    scores

    are

    derived from the single fair score

    generated

    by

    FACETS,

    rather than from

    averaged

    raw scores.

    These

    fair scores are then converted to

    bands as

    follows:

    Conversion to band scores range 1-6)

    Band A: 5.6

    and above

    Band

    B: 4.B 5.5

    Band C: 4.2 4.7

    Band 0: 3.4 4.1

    Band E: 3.3 and below

    Speaking

    Overall

    Communicative Effectiveness, Intelligibility,

    Fluency, Appropriateness of

    Language,

    Resources of

    Grammar

    and

    Expression

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    Reading and Listening

    The Reading sub-test consists of a short answer reponse (summary

    completion] test (Part A] and a multiple-choice questions

    MCO)

    test

    (Part B). Candidate answer sheets for Part Aare marked

    by

    trained

    assessors and

    score

    sheets for Part Bare computer scanned. The

    item-level data are analysed using a

    RASCH

    analysis programme,

    OUEST, for overall internal consistency and item quality.

    Any

    items

    found to

    be

    performing unacceptably i.e., with fit of above 1.3

    or

    with discrimination levels of less than .25)

    are

    removed from the

    subsequent analysis.

    The

    Listening sub-test is marked by a small group of experienced

    assessors

    in Melbourne.

    The test consists of short-answer questions

    and

    is marked according to detailed marking guidelines prepared by

    the test designers.

    In

    order to ensure consistency of marking, prior to

    the marking session at each administration assessors are trained in

    how to interpret and apply these guidelines. As for the Reading sub

    test, the item-level data are analysed using OUEST for overall internal

    consistency and item quality. Again, any items found to be performing

    unacceptably (i.e., with fit of above 1.3 or with discrimination levels of

    less than .25) are removed

    from

    the subsequent analysis.

    Band cut-scores i.e., the boundaries between the band scores) are

    re-set for the Listening and Reading sub-tests at every administration

    regardless

    of

    whether they are new tests, re-constituted tests using

    two texts/parts which have not previously been used in combination,

    or previously-used tests.

    This

    is

    because

    for

    every

    administration, reliability of measurement

    is maximised

    by

    removing from the analysis those items which are

    found to

    be

    performing unacceptably for that cohort.

    This means

    that,

    for the same test version or individual text/part, the number of items

    may vary from administration to administration, although experience

    has found that

    no more

    than one item is usually removed.

    Cut-scores

    for

    each band

    level

    on

    the Listening

    and

    Reading sub-tests

    are

    set on the basis ofthe percentage distribution of candidates into

    band levels using the

    average

    of the Writing and Speaking sub-tests.

    This

    assumes that normally these criterion-referenced sub-tests

    should be equivalent

    in

    difficulty

    and

    that distribution into grades

    across the sub-tests should therefore be similar for the whole cohort.

    It does not assume that individuals will get the

    same

    grade

    on

    each

    sub-test. The proportion of candidates falling into in

    each

    grade is

    generally very similar for the Writing

    and

    Speaking sub-tests.)

    1

    : McNamara, T [19961 Measuring Second Language Performance. London: Longman.

    *

    2

    :

    Linacre,

    J [1989] FACETS: a

    computer

    program for

    many-faceted

    Rasch

    measurement. Chicago: MESA Press.

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    What

    is

    the

    Writing

    sub test?

    The

    Writing sub-test takes 45 minutes. It is profession specific. You take this part of the

    O T

    using materials specifically for your profession- a

    nurse does the task for nursing, a dentist

    does

    the task for dentistry, and so

    on.

    In each test, there is

    one

    task set for each profession based on

    a typical workplace situation and the demands of the profession.

    The task is to write a letter, usually a letter of referral. Sometimes, and particularly for some professions, a different type of letter

    is

    required:

    e.g.

    a letter of transfer or discharge, or a letter to advise or inform a patient, carer or

    group.

    With the task instructions, you receive stimulus material case notes and/or other related documentation) which includes information to use

    in

    your response.

    The first five minutes of the test is reading time. During this time,

    you

    may study the task and notes but may not write, underline or

    make

    any notes.

    For

    the remaining 40 minutes you

    may

    write your response to the task.

    You

    receive a printed answer booklet

    in

    which

    you

    must write your

    response. This

    also has space

    for

    rough

    work.

    You

    may write in

    pen or pencil.

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    Test

    taker s

    guide

    to

    the

    Writing

    sub-test

    Do

    Take time to understand the task requirements

    Use your own

    words

    to paraphrase or summarise longer

    pieces

    of information from the case notes

    Make

    sure you understand the situation described in the

    case

    notes

    Think about

    how

    best to organise your letter before you start

    writing

    Use

    the space provided to plan your letter (though a draft is not

    compulsory)

    Use the five minutes reading time effectively to understand the

    task set

    What is your role?

    Who is your audience (the intended reader)?

    What

    is

    the current situation?

    How

    urgent is the current situation?

    What is the main point you must communicate to the

    reader?

    What supporting information

    is

    necessary to give to the

    reader?

    What background information is useful to the reader?

    What information is unnecessary for the reader?

    Why

    is it unnecessary?

    Explain

    the current situation at the start of the letter (perhaps in

    an emergency situation)

    Use the names and addresses given

    Set out the names, addresses, date and other information to

    start the letter clearly

    As you write, indicate each new paragraph clearly, perhaps by

    leaving a blank line

    Don t

    Include everything from the case notes select information

    relevant to the task

    Simply copy chunks of text from the case notes

    Write notes

    or

    numbered points

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    General

    Have a spare

    pen and pencil ready

    just in

    case

    Fill

    in

    the cover

    pages

    for the task booklet

    and

    the answer

    booklet correctly

    Fill

    in

    your personal information

    on

    the answer sheet correctly

    Take a sample test under test conditions beforehand

    so

    you

    know what it feels like

    Practise

    writing clearly

    if you

    have poor handwriting

    Write

    clearly

    and

    legibly

    Checking at the

    end

    Make sure your letter communicates what

    you

    intend

    Make sure you meet the basic task requirements:

    length of the body of the text approximately 180 200

    words

    full sentences, not note form

    appropriate letter format

    Check for any simple grammarand spelling errors that you

    may

    have made

    If a page is messy, use clear marks e.g., arrows, numbers)

    to show the sequence in which the parts of your text should

    be read

    E

    oss Otlt clearly anything you

    do

    not want the assessors to read

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    ow

    can

    I further

    prepare

    for

    the

    Writing

    sub test?

    Your

    letter

    is assessed against five criteria:

    Overall task fulfilment

    includ ing whether the response is

    of

    the required length

    Appropriateness of language

    includ ing the use of appropriate vocabulary and tone in the response, and whether it is organised appropriately

    Comprehension

    of

    stimulus

    including whether the response shows you have understood the situation and provided relevant rather than unnecessary informat ion to

    your reader

    Control

    of

    inguistic features

    [grammar

    and cohesion)

    how effectively you communicate using the grammatical struc tures and cohesive devices

    of

    English

    Control

    of

    presentation features [spelling, punctuation and layout)

    how these areas affect the message you want to communicate

    Overall task

    fulfilment

    Write enough so

    the

    assessors have a sufficient sample o your

    writing

    the task requires approXimately 180 200 words in the body

    of the letter.

    Don t wr ite too much you may need to select content carefully to

    keep

    to

    the required word count.

    Use

    your own words

    as

    much

    as possible

    don t simply copy sections

    from the case notes.

    Avoid

    using a formulaic

    response

    if you include elements that

    do

    not

    fit

    the task,

    it

    indicates a lack

    of

    flexibility in your writing.

    Don t include information that

    the intended reader clearly knows

    already (e.g., if you are replying to a colleague who has referred a

    patient to you).

    Appropriateness

    of

    anguage

    Organise

    the

    information

    clearly

    the sequence

    of

    nformation in the

    case notes may

    not

    be

    the

    most appropriate sequence

    of

    nformation

    for your letter.

    Highlight the main purpose of your etter at the start this provides

    the context for the information y u include.

    Be

    clear about the level

    of

    urgency

    for

    the communication.

    Always keep in mind the reason for writing don t

    just

    summarise the

    case notes provided.

    Focus on impor tant in formation and

    minimise

    incidental detail.

    If t will help, be explicit about the organisation

    of

    your letter: e.g.

    First I will ou tline the problems the patient has, then I will make some

    suggestions for his treatment .

    Consider using dates and other time references (e.g., three months

    later, last week, a year ago) to give a clear sequence

    of

    events where

    necessary.

    Remember that all professional letters are written in a relatively

    formal style.

    Avoid informal language, slang, colloquialisms and spoken idiom

    unless you are sure this is appropriate (e.g., use Thank you rather

    than Thanks a lot ).

    Avoid

    SMS

    texting

    abbreviations in a formal le tter (e.g., use you not

    u ]

    Give the correct salutation: if you are told the recipient s name and

    title , use them.

    Show awareness

    of

    your audience by choosing appropriate words

    and phrases: if you are writing to another professional, you may use

    technical terms and, possibly, abbreviations; if you are writ ing to a

    parent or a group of lay people, use non-technical terms and explain

    carefully.

    Comprehension

    of stimulus

    Demonstrate in your response that you have understood

    the

    case

    notes fully.

    Be

    clear what

    the

    most relevant issues for the reader are.

    Don t let the main issue become hidden by including too much

    supporting detail.

    Show clearly

    the

    connections between information in the case notes

    if hese are made; however, do not add information that is not given in

    the notes (e.g., a suggested diagnosis). part icularly

    if

    he reason for

    the letter is to

    get an expert opinion.

    Take

    relevant information from the case notes and transform it to fit

    the task set.

    If he

    stimulus material includes questions tha t require an answer

    in your response, be explicit about this don t hide the relevant

    information-in a general summary of

    the

    notes provided.

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    Control

    of

    inguistic features (grammar and cohesion)

    Show

    that

    you can use

    language accurately

    and

    flexibly

    in

    your

    writing.

    Make

    sure you demonstrate a range of

    anguage

    structures

    use complex

    sentences

    as well as

    simple ones.

    Split a long sentence into two or three sentences if

    you

    feel

    you are

    losing control of t.

    Review areas of grammar to ensure

    you

    convey your intended

    meaning accurately- particular areas to focus on might include:

    articles

    a/an, the (e.g., She

    had

    an operation. ,

    on

    the internet )

    countable and uncountable nouns

    (e.g., some evidence,

    an

    opinion,

    f t

    asthma]

    verb forms

    used

    to indicate past time and the relationship

    between events

    in

    the past and now [past simple, present

    perfect, past perfect]

    adverbs that

    give

    time references (e.g., two months previously

    is different from two months ago ]

    prepositions following other

    words (e.g., Thank

    you very

    much te

    see for seeing

    ..

    , sensitivity

    ef

    to pressure , my examination

    ft

    ofthe patient , diagnosed with cancer )

    passive forms (e.g., The J3atieAt s h e ~ ~

    lei

    aelviseel te

    rela>< ,

    He-

    iA t eiveel iA aAaeeieleAt. for He was involved

    in

    an accident. )

    Use

    connecting

    words

    and phrases ( connectives ] to link ideas

    together clearly [e.g.,

    however,

    therefore, subsequently].

    Create

    a

    ~ n t a l

    checklist of

    problems

    that you

    have

    with grammar

    and go through this

    when

    you review your response towards the

    end

    of the test: particular areas to focus

    on

    might include:

    number agreement, e.g.

    The

    test result shows that .. ,

    There

    is

    no evidence ... , He lives ..

    ,

    one of the side effects

    complete sentences, i.e., the main clause includes subject

    and verb ,

    e.g.,

    OA eMaFAiAatieA she,.,.eef tl tat ... should be

    Examination

    showed

    that

    ..

    or On examination it

    was

    found that

    gender

    agreement,

    e.g.

    Mr Jones and h r daughter

    tense agreement,

    e.g.,

    Examination

    on

    15

    May

    2006

    revealed

    s h ~ overweight. [creating confusion

    over

    whether she is still

    overweight at the time of writing]

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    Control of presentation features (spelling, punctuation and layout)

    Take

    care

    with the placement of commas

    and

    full stops.

    Make

    sure there are enough- separating ideas into sentences.

    Make

    sure there are not too many keeping elements of the text

    meaningfully connected together.

    Leave a blank line between paragraphs to

    show

    clearly the overall

    structure of the letter.

    Don t write

    on

    every other l ine this does not assist the reader

    particularly.

    Check for spelling mistakes and for spelling consistency through your

    writing

    (e.g.,

    with a patient s name).

    Remember that many of the words you write are also in the case

    notes

    check that the spelling you use is the

    same.

    Be consistent in your spelling: alternative spelling conventions (e.g.,

    American or British English) are acceptable as long as your use is

    consistent.

    Don t

    use symbols as abbreviations in formal letters.

    Avoid creating any negative impact on your reader through the

    presentation of the letter.

    Use a clear layout to avoid any miscommunication.

    Make

    sure poor handwriting

    does

    not confuse the

    reader

    over spelling

    and meaning.

    Write legibly so the assessor can grade your response fairly using the

    set criteria.

    Candidates are assessed on their abil ity to;

    Select, transform and organize information in the case notes into

    a coherently structured letter

    Include relevant information to

    explain the patient s condition, history

    and

    reason for

    referral,

    explain a problematic situation,

    OR

    outline drug information

    Use

    appropriate conventions of letter format [including

    addressee s details,

    date,

    opening

    and

    closing moves)

    Use

    register, tone and vocabulary appropriate to the professional

    context

    Show adequate control of a range of grammatical structures and

    cohesive devices

    Show adequate control of spelling and punctuation

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    Practice test

    1

    Please

    print

    in BLOCK LETTERS

    Candidate number

    Family name

    Other name(s)

    City

    Date

    o

    test

    Candidate s signature

    The

    OET

    Centre

    GPO Box

    372

    Melbourne VIC 3001

    Australia

    OETCentre

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    WRITING SUB-

    TEST

    PHARMACY

    TIME ALLOWED: READING TIME: 5 MINUTES

    WRITING TIME: 40 MINUTES

    Read the case notes and complete the writing task which follows.

    UMi

    You are a pharmacist in a rural community pharmacy. A teacher at the local primary school approaches you about an

    outbreak of head lice at the school. She asks you to write a letter to parents educating them about head lice. The teacher

    explains that parents are either not detecting the head lice or not telling the school when their child has head lice.

    Therapeutic guidelines from a reference ook

    Head lice Pediculus humanus var. capitis):

    Presentation:

    Diagnosis

    of

    active lice

    infestation:

    Method:

    Treatment:

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    Head lice common in school-age children, essentially harmless.

    Crawling insects approx size of a sesame seed; live on scalp, lay eggs on hair.

    Infestation

    not

    indicator

    of

    poor hygiene.

    Acquired by direct head-to-head contact.

    Specific human pathogen; most cases asymptomatic.

    Eggs (nits) noticed attached to the hair

    or

    problem itching of the scalp and nape

    of

    the neck.

    Possibly excoriations and papules around the occiput and nape, and

    lymphadenopathy with or without secondary bacterial infection.

    Observation of live moving louse on scalp.

    Apply generous amount hair conditioner to dry hair; stuns lice for approx 20 mins.

    Wet comb hair with fine-toothed

    comb

    {'nit combs' available pharmacies).

    Detangle hair, divide into 3-4cm sections, comb each.

    Wipe

    comb

    on paper towel, check for lice and nits. Repeat twice for diagnosis.

    Approx 40 success rate from wet combing every day for 10 to

    14

    days until no

    lice found.

    Topical insecticides. Currently recommended products:

    1

    Maldison

    (Malathion)

    OR

    Permethrin

    OR

    3

    Pyrethrins

    0.5 or 1 topically, leave for

    8

    hours

    (not to be used in children

    1 Scm from the scalp

    =

    previous, not active, infestation.

    A

    1

    Repeat treatment using another insecticide (see above)

    R

    Wet combing method

    (see above)

    Combing

    easier with shorter hair styles,

    but

    shaving head

    not

    necessary

    If this fails,

    use

    B

    Trimethoprim + sulfamethoxazole (child:

    2+

    1

    Omglkg up

    to)

    80+400mg

    orally, 12-hourly

    for 3 days. Repeat after 10 days.

    NB: effectiveness

    of

    trimethoprim+sulfamethoxazole thought to be

    due

    to

    the

    destruction of symbiotic bacteria

    in

    the

    gut of the

    lice.

    Using the information provided, prepare a letter

    for

    parents

    at the

    local school, Riverside Primary School, educating them

    about head lice and ways

    of

    treating them. Start

    the

    letter

    Dear

    Parent .

    In your answer:

    Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences

    Do not use note form

    Use letter

    fonnat

    The body of the letter should e approximately 180 2 words.

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    WRITING

    SUB TEST:

    SAMPLE REPSONSE:

    Parents

    Riverside Primary School

    10.03.10

    Dear Parent

    PH RM CY

    LETTER

    Head lice have been found on a number of children at school. These small insects are common and do not indicate poor

    hygiene. They live on the human scalp and lay eggs nits) on the hair close to the scalp. People can catch head lice by

    direct head-to-head contact.

    A common symptom

    is

    itching and the easiest way to confirm head lice is to see a moving louse on the scalp. To treat

    initially, apply a large amount of any conditioner to dry hair then section and comb the hair thoroughly with a fine-tooth

    comb. omb each section of hair twice, wiping the comb onto a paper towel and checking each time. The conditioner

    stuns the lice allowing them

    to be

    combed out. This process should be repeated at regular intervals.

    Sometimes repeated wet combing will eradicate head lice, but often it is necessary to treat with chemicals, such as

    maldison

    or

    permethrin. Suitable products are available at the pharmacy. It is important that the school and other contacts

    are notified.

    It

    is important

    to

    wash pillowcases, brushes and combs in hot soapy water and not

    to

    blow-dry hair.

    All treatments must be repeated after 7 to 10 days. Wet combing should be performed the day after each treatment,

    and weekly for several weeks. If there are still lice after this, you can repeat treatments or see the pharmacist for another

    product.

    Regards

    Pharmacist

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    English

    Test

    Writing sub test

    Practice test

    2

    Please print in BLOCK LETTERS

    Candidate number

    Family name

    Other name(s)

    City

    Date of test

    Candidate s signature

    The OET Centre

    GPO Box 372

    Melbourne VIC 3001

    Australia

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    ROM

    THE TEST ROOM.

    Telephone:

    613

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    WRITING SUB-TEST PHARMACY

    TIME ALLOWED: READING TIME: 5 MINUTES

    WRITING TIME: 40 MINUTES

    Read the case notes and complete the writing task which follows.

    I ~ M J

    Today, 1 March 2010, Mrs Daniels, a 78-year-old customer, has come to your community pharmacy asking for something

    to treat an itchy rash which has been troubling her for the past few days. The rash is quite evident, consisting

    of

    large,

    raised areas which are not red, except where Mrs Daniels has recently scratched them. The rash is mainly on her trunk

    with some involvement of the upper arms and legs. Mrs Daniels mentions that she has not been gardening, is not prone

    to rashes, and has no idea about the cause

    of

    the rash. When questioned, she says that she has not changed her diet or

    used different washing powders, soaps, deodorants

    or

    perfumes in the last few months.

    You note that Mrs Daniels started taking a recently released ACE inhibitor, 'Drug X', about

    two

    weeks ago after suffering

    side effects with verapamil, which she was taking for hypertension.

    Medication history for Mrs Daniels:

    17/02/10

    11/02/10

    26/01/10

    09/01/10

    'Drug

    X'

    lndapamide

    Verapamil

    Nitrazepam

    5mg

    2.5mg

    80mg

    5mg

    1bd

    d

    1bd

    1n

    I

    Piloouc:r

    iNFoRNiA iiN FoFi

    ;oiluci'x;

    Description: 'Drug X' is a highly specific competitive inhibitor of angiotensin I converting enzyme, the enzyme responsiblel

    Pharmacology:

    Indications:

    Warnings

    Precautions

    Adverse Reactions

    Presentation

    The mechanism of action of 'Drug X' has not yet been fully elucidated; however, it appears to

    lower blood pressure through suppression of the renin-angiotensin-aldosterone system. This

    results in a decrease in angiotensin II, subsequent to ACE inhibition,

    and

    an increase in plasma

    renin activity.

    Hypertension

    Cardiac failure

    Cough - a persistent, non-productive cough reported in some patients.

    Hypotension may occur occasionally within first three days

    of

    therapy.

    Hypersensitivity reaction

    -

    rashes,

    often associated with pruritis

    and

    occasionally

    fever,

    may occur.

    Impaired renal

    function

    - increases

    in

    BUN and

    serum

    creatinine have

    occured during

    treatment.

    More common reactions:

    Hypotension.

    Dermatological - Rash occurred

    in

    10 of patients. Usualypruiti and macro-papular, but

    rarely

    urticarial.

    Generally

    occurs during the first fourweeks of treatment

    Usually

    self-limited and

    reversible

    and

    may

    respond to

    antihistamine therapy

    Gastrointestinal - A small number

    of

    patients reported loss oftaste sensation.

    Gastrointestinal

    -

    Nausea,

    vomiting,

    pain

    and constipation

    may

    occur.

    Other - Paraesthesia of the

    hands.

    5mg 1Omg

    oral tablets

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    You suspect an ADR adverse drug reaction)

    to

    the ACE inhibitor and decide

    on th

    following course of action:

    Writing

    task

    Advise Mrs Daniels to visit her doctor as

    soon as possible.

    Notify

    Mrs

    Daniels doctor, Dr J Sotto, of Newtown.

    Provide

    immediate treatment

    with half

    percent hydrocortisone

    cream.

    Report

    the suspected

    DR

    to the relevant authority: the Adverse

    Drug Reactions Data

    Bank,

    P

    Box 112,

    Centreville.

    Write a letter

    to

    th

    Registrar of the Adverse Drug Reactions Data Bank, reporting the suspected ADR and

    all

    relevant

    information.

    In your answer:

    Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences

    Do not use note form

    Use letter format

    The body

    of th

    letter should be approximately

    18

    - 200 words.

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    WRITING SUB TEST:

    SAMPLE RESPONSE:

    1 March 2010

    The Registrar

    PHARMACY

    LETTER

    Adverse Drug Reactions Data Bank

    PO ox 112

    Centreville

    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am a pharmacist in

    community practice. I am writing to report what appears

    to

    be an adverse drug reaction to the ACE

    inhibitor, Drug X .

    Earlier today, a customer of mine, Mrs Daniels, sought treatment for a troublesome rash. The rash had been apparent for

    two or three days and

    is

    severely pruritic; it is macro-papular in appearance. It

    is

    mainly located on her trunk, with some

    patches on the upper limbs.

    I noted that Mrs Daniels had commenced therapy on Drug X on 17 February 2010. She is taking the Smg tablets twice

    daily.

    Mrs Daniels could offer no explanation for her rash and mentioned that she had not been in contact with anything she

    believed could have caused it. She has not changed her diet in any way nor used any new personal products, such as

    washing powders, soaps, deodorants or perfumes. It is therefore possible that Mrs Daniels could be suffering an adverse

    drug reaction to the tablets.

    In

    addition to advising your office, I have notified Mrs Daniels doctor and recommended that she visit her as soon as

    possible. Her doctor is Dr Sotto of Newtown.

    Yours faithfully

    Pharmacist

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    Test

    Writing sub test

    Practice test

    3

    Please print in BLOCK LETTERS

    Candidate number

    Family name

    Other name(s)

    City

    Date

    of

    test

    Candidate s signature

    The

    OET

    Centre

    GPO

    Box37

    Melbourne

    VIC 3001

    Australia

    OETCentre

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    O T

    MATERIAL FROM TH TEST ROOM.

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    WRITING SUB TEST PHARMACY

    TIME ALLOWED: READING TIME: 5 MINUTES

    WRITING

    TIME

    40 MINUTES

    Read the case notes and complete the writing task which follows.

    You are a pharmacist

    in

    a community practice. Recently 3 February 201 0) you dispensed a prescription for 'Drug X' for

    Mrs Ellen White.

    Mrs White brought the medication back to the pharmacy shortly after it was dispensed because it was out of date. The

    manufacturer's expiry date on the cardboard carton was 'December 2009'. You apologised, and immediately replaced it

    with current sto k from your shelves. However, Mrs White said that she would complain to the Pharmacy Board about the

    incident.

    The Pharmacy Board is the authority which registers and administers affairs regarding pharmacists

    in

    the state in which

    you live. Its role

    is to

    ensure safety and fairness for the public. Complaints against pharmacists are directed to

    the

    Board.

    In your logbook you wrote these notes for 3/2/1 0.

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    : :

    i NeW

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    : ; : l e : ; , : : ~ < r pM{ l

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    :

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    on ttLblen dispensed t tL customer [

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    doesn't

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    You have received the following letter from the Pharmacy Board.

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    Pharmacist

    l

    j

    City Pharmacy l

    6 Main Road

    Newtown

    : :

    j

    10 February 201 0 i

    :

    :

    l

    J Dear Pharmacist

    II

    The Board has received a complaint from Mrs E White regarding the supply

    of

    some out-of-date

    I

    j 'Drug X' tablets. j

    She claims that, on 3 February 2010, you supplied

    fifty

    'Drug X' tablets

    to

    her from a prescription written by

    Dr Williams of the Newtown Central Medical Clinic. She further claims that the tablets supplied had expired in

    j

    December 2009.

    j

    I You are requested to explain to the Board: J

    j

    whether you dispensed out-of-date medication

    to

    Mrs White.

    the action you took when Mrs White returned

    to

    the pharmacy with the tablets.

    the action you have taken to ensure that out-of-date stock is detected and not supplied

    to

    the public again.

    Your response is required in writing

    by

    10 March 201

    0

    and will be considered

    by

    the Board at its next meeting.

    Yours sincerely

    MsASeabom

    Director, Pharmacy Board

    Writing task

    Write a letter to the Board. Include a response to each item the Board has requested information about. Address your

    letter

    to

    Ms Anne Seaborn, Director, Pharmacy Board, Newtown.

    In your answer:

    Expand

    the

    relevant notes into complete sentences

    Do not use note form

    Use letter format

    The body of the let ter should

    be

    approximately

    18

    200 words.

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    WRITING SUB TEST:

    SAMPLE RESPONSE:

    6 March 2010

    Ms

    Anne Seaborn

    Director

    Pharmacy Board

    Newtown

    Dear Ms Seaborn

    PHARMACY

    LETTER

    I am writing in response to your letter of 1 February 2010 regarding the dispensing of some out-of-date Drug X tablets

    to Mrs White.

    I dispensed some Drug X tablets to Mrs E White on 3 February 2010. Unfortunately, the tablets expiry date was

    December 2009.

    Mrs White returned the tablets

    to

    the pharmacy soon after they were dispensed. I immediately replaced the tablets for her

    and apologised. Mrs White said that she would complain to the Pharmacy Board. I admitted that I had made a mistake,

    and rectified it as soon as I could.

    I regret that the incident occurred. I did not check the expiry date before I dispensed the package of tablets. February

    3 was a very busy

    day

    and, in addition, a

    new

    member of staff had started that day.

    In

    future, I will always check expiry

    dates before dispensing medication.

    We have implemented new procedures to ensure that this does not happen again. The stock in the dispensary is

    now

    checked each month. Red stickers are placed on short-dated items to alert the dispensing pharmacist.

    Yours sincerely

    Pharmacist

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    Further

    Practice

    There are resources for English-language learners

    on

    the Web which can help you develop the general writing skills involved e.g., formal letter

    writing, general grammar practice). Some possible sources are:

    Online Writing Lab

    at

    Purdue University

    http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/ new homepage

    http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/esl/eslstudent.html older, but useful, writing resources

    list

    Englishmed com

    http://www.englishmed.com/ English learning resources with a medical focus

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