DO NOW

Entry Task – Critique YOUR work

• Take out your planning page from yesterday

• Use it to create a quote sandwich for your Entry Task Quiz!!

Introduce the quote

In chapter _______, ___________

Analyze the quote

This shows that _____________

On page __________ it says, “________________________________________________________________________”

LyddieLearning Objectives

I can critique my partner’s use of evidence using criteria from the Lyddie argument rubric.

I can revise my work by incorporating helpful feedback from my partner.

I can write an organized argument essay about Lyddie.

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Peer Critique• What is it?

• When did we do it before?

• Anyone remember rules for critiquing a classmate’s work?

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Peer Critique RULES:

Be KINDBe SPECIFIC

Be HELPFULPARTICIPATE!

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Peer Critique• Pick a friend you trust

• Exchange your Entry Tasks…quote sandwiches!

• Use your worksheets to track what your partner says TO YOU

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Peer Critique• As you read, think:

1. Does the introduction of the quote give enough background information to understand it?

2. Did he/she punctuate & cite the quote?

3. Does the explanation of the quote make sense?

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Peer Critique = REVISE!• Write out your partner’s critique

• Then…time to revise your quote sandwich!

• Rewrite it incorporating your partner’s suggestion(s)

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WRITING THE ESSAY!?!

• Use the ideas & evidence in the

planners

• Be sure to quote sandwich EVERY

quote!

• Will have today & tomorrow to finish

• I will comment/ correct and return to

you

LyddieLearning Objectives

I can critique my partner’s use of evidence using criteria from the Lyddie argument rubric.

I can revise my work by incorporating helpful feedback from my partner.

I can write an organized argument essay about Lyddie.

Turn & talk… which one of these

did you do best today?

LyddieHomework

Homework• Chapters 20-23 due in TWO DAYS!!

• Read & fill in Reader’s Notes…