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    HOW TO WRITE A LITERAR A!AL"I" E""A

    The purpose of # liter#ry #n#lysis ess#y is to c#refullye$#mine #nd sometimes e%#lu#te # work of

    liter#ture or #n #spect of # work of liter#ture& As with #ny

    #n#lysis' this re(uires you to )re#k the

    su)*ect down into its component p#rts& E$#mining the

    di+erent elements of # piece of liter#ture is

    not #n end in itself )ut r#ther # process to help you )etter#ppreci#te #nd underst#nd the work of

    liter#ture #s # whole& ,or inst#nce' #n #n#lysis of # poem

    might de#l with the di+erent types of

    im#ges in # poem or with the rel#tionship )etween the form

    #nd content of the work& If you were to

    #n#ly-e .discuss #nd e$pl#in/ # pl#y' you might #n#ly-e the

    rel#tionship )etween # su)plot #nd the

    m#in plot' or you might #n#ly-e the ch#r#cter 0#w of the

    tr#gic hero )y tr#cing how it is re%e#led

    through the #cts of the pl#y& An#ly-ing # short story might

    include identifying # p#rticul#r theme

    .like the di1culty of m#king the tr#nsition from #dolescence

    to #dulthood/ #nd showing how the

    writer suggests th#t theme through the point of %iew from

    which the story is told2 or you might #lso

    e$pl#in how the m#in ch#r#cter3s #ttitude tow#rd women is

    re%e#led through his di#logue #nd4or

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    #ctions&

    RE5E5BER6 Writing is the sh#rpened' focused e$pression of

    thought #nd study& As you de%elop

    your writing skills' you will #lso impro%e your perceptions#nd incre#se your critic#l #)ilities&

    Writing ultim#tely )oils down to the de%elopment of #n ide#&

    our o)*ecti%e in writing # liter#ry

    #n#lysis ess#y is to con%ince the person re#ding your ess#y

    th#t you h#%e supported the ide# you

    #re de%eloping& 7nlike ordin#ry con%ers#tion #nd cl#ssroomdiscussion' writing must stick

    with gre#t determin#tion to the speci8c point of

    de%elopment& This kind of writing dem#nds

    tight org#ni-#tion #nd control& Therefore' your ess#y must

    h#%e # centr#l ide# .thesis/' it must

    h#%e se%er#l p#r#gr#phs th#t grow system#tic#lly out of the

    centr#l ide#' #nd e%erything in it

    must )e directly rel#ted to the centr#l ide# #nd must

    contri)ute to the re#der3s

    underst#nding of th#t centr#l ide#& These three principles #re

    listed #g#in )elow6

    9& our ess#y must co%er the topic you #re writing #)out&

    :& our ess#y must h#%e # centr#l ide# .st#ted in yourthesis/ th#t

    go%erns its de%elopment&

    ;& our ess#y must )e org#ni-ed so th#t e%ery p#rt

    contri)utes

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    something to the re#der3s underst#nding of the centr#l ide#&

    THE ELE5E!T" O, A

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    The Introduction

    The introduction to your liter#ry #n#lysis ess#y should try to

    #rouse interest in your re#der& To

    )ring immedi#te focus to your su)*ect' you m#y w#nt to use# (uot#tion' # pro%oc#ti%e (uestion' #

    person#l #necdote' # st#rtling st#tement' or # com)in#tion

    of these& ou m#y #lso w#nt to include

    )#ckground inform#tion rele%#nt to your thesis #nd

    necess#ry for the re#der to underst#nd the

    position you #re t#king&In #ddition' you need to include the title of the work of

    liter#ture #nd n#me of the #uthor&

    The following #re s#tisf#ctory introductory p#r#gr#phs which

    include #ppropri#te thesis st#tements6

    A& Wh#t would you e$pect to )e the person#lity of # m#n

    who h#s his wife sent #w#y to

    # con%ent .or perh#ps h#s h#d her murdered/ )ec#use she

    took too much ple#sure in the

    sunset #nd in # compliment p#id to her )y #nother m#nG It is

    *ust such # m#n >> #

    Ren#iss#nce duke >> th#t Ro)ert Browning portr#ys in his

    poem D5y L#st =uchess&

    Through wh#t he s#ys #)out himself' through his #ctions'#nd through his interpret#tion of

    e#rlier incidents' the =uke re%e#ls the #rrog#nce' *e#lousy'

    #nd m#teri#lism th#t #re his

    most conspicuous tr#its&

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    B& The 8rst p#r#gr#ph of Al)erto Al%#ro Rios3s short story

    DThe "ecret Lion presents #

    twel%e>ye#r>old )oy3s %iew of growing up >> e%erything

    ch#nges& As the n#rr#tor tells us'when the m#gici#n pulls # t#)lecloth out from under # pile of

    dishes' children #re #m#-ed #t

    the Dst#y>the>s#me p#rt' while #dults focus only on the

    t#)lecloth itself .:/& Adults h#%e

    the )ene8t of e$perience #nd know the trick will work #s

    long #s the techni(ue is correct&

    When we Dgrow up we g#in this e$perience #nd knowledge'

    )ut we lose our innocence #nd

    sense of wonder& In other words' the price we p#y for

    growing up is # perm#nent sense of

    loss& This tr#deo+ is centr#l to DThe "ecret Lion& The key

    sym)ols in the story reinforce its

    m#in theme6 ch#nge is ine%it#)le #nd #lw#ys #ccomp#nied)y # sense of loss&

    C& The setting of ohn 7pdike3s story DA J F is cruci#l to our

    underst#nding of "#mmy3s

    decision to (uit his *o)& E%en though "#mmy knows th#t his

    (uitting will m#ke life more

    di1cult for him' he instincti%ely insists upon re*ecting wh#t

    the A J F represents in the story&

    When he rings up # D!o "#le #nd Ds#unterKs out of the

    store' "#mmy le#%es )ehind not

    only # *o) )ut the rigid st#te of mind #ssoci#ted with the A J

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    F& Although "#mmy is the

    centr#l ch#r#cter in the story #nd we le#rn much #)out him'

    7pdike seems to in%est #s

    much e+ort in descri)ing the setting #s he does "#mmy& Thetitle' #fter #ll' is not Douthful

    Re)ellion or D"#mmy Muits )ut DA J F& In f#ct' the setting

    is the #nt#gonist of the story

    #nd pl#ys # role th#t is #s import#nt #s "#mmy3s&

    The Body of the Ess#y #nd the Import#nce of Topic

    "entencesThe term regul#rly used for the de%elopment of the centr#l

    ide# of # liter#ry #n#lysis ess#y is the

    )ody& In this section you present the p#r#gr#phs .#t le#st ;

    p#r#gr#phs for # ?@@>?@ word

    ess#y/ th#t support your thesis st#tement&

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    The purpose of the topic sentence is

    twofold6

    9& To tie the det#ils of the p#r#gr#ph to your thesis

    st#tement&

    :& To tie the det#ils of the p#r#gr#ph together&

    The su)st#nce of e#ch of your de%elopment#l p#r#gr#phs

    .the )ody of your ess#y/ will )e the

    e$pl#n#tions' summ#ries' p#r#phr#ses' speci8c det#ils' #nd

    direct (uot#tions you need to support

    #nd de%elop the more gener#l st#tement you h#%e m#de in

    your topic sentence& The following is

    the 8rst de%elopment#l p#r#gr#ph #fter one of the

    introductory p#r#gr#phs .C/ #)o%e6

    TOFIC "E!TE!CE

    ENFLA!ATIO!" A!=

    TENT7AL EI=E!CE

    "#mmyPs descriptions of the A J F present #

    setting th#t is ugly' monotonous' #nd rigidly

    regul#ted& We c#n identify with the uniformity

    "#mmy descri)es )ec#use we h#%e #ll )een inch#in stores& The 0uorescent light is #s )l#ndly

    cool #s the Qchecker)o#rd green>#nd>cre#m

    ru))er tile 0oorQ ./& The Qusu#l tr#1c in the

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    store mo%es in one direction .e$cept for the

    swim suited girls' who mo%e #g#inst it/' #nd

    e%erything is ne#tly org#ni-ed #nd c#tegori-ed

    in tidy #isles& The dehum#ni-ing routine of this

    en%ironment is suggested )y "#mmyPs o+h#nd

    references to the typic#l shoppers #s Qsheep'Q

    Qhouse sl#%es'Q #nd Qpigs&Q These regul#r

    customers seem to w#lk through the store in #

    stupor2 #s "#mmy tells us' not e%en dyn#mite

    could mo%e them out of their routine .?/&

    This p#r#gr#ph is # strong one )ec#use it is de%eloped

    through the use of (uot#tions' summ#ry'

    det#ils' #nd e$pl#n#tion to support the topic sentence&

    !otice how it rel#tes )#ck to the thesis

    st#tement&

    The Conclusion

    our liter#ry #n#lysis ess#y should h#%e # concluding

    p#r#gr#ph th#t gi%es your ess#y # sense of

    completeness #nd lets your re#ders know th#t they h#%e

    come to the end of your p#per& our

    concluding p#r#gr#ph might rest#te the thesis in di+erentwords' summ#ri-e the m#in points you

    h#%e m#de' or m#ke # rele%#nt comment #)out the liter#ry

    work you #re #n#ly-ing' )ut from #

    di+erent perspecti%e& =o not introduce # new topic in your

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    conclusion& Below is the

    concluding p#r#gr#ph from the ess#y #lre#dy (uoted #)o%e

    .A/ #)out BrowningPs poem Q5y L#st

    =uchessQ6

    If the =uke h#s #ny redeeming (u#lities' they f#il to #ppe#r

    in the poem& BrowningPs

    emph#sis on the =ukePs tr#its of #rrog#nce' *e#lousy' #nd

    m#teri#lism m#ke it #pp#rent th#t

    #nyone who might h#%e known the =uke person#lly would

    h#%e )#sed his opinion of him onthese three person#lity Q0#ws&Q 7ltim#tely' our opinion of the

    =uke is not # f#%or#)le one'

    #nd it is cle#r th#t Browning me#nt us to feel this w#y&

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    The Title of our Ess#y

    It is essenti#l th#t you gi%e your ess#y # title which is

    descripti%e of the #ppro#ch you #re t#king in

    your p#per& ust #s you did in your introductory p#r#gr#ph'

    try to get the re#derPs #ttention& 7sing

    only the title of the liter#ry work you #re e$#mining is

    uns#tisf#ctory& The titles th#t follow #re

    #ppropri#te for the p#pers .A' B' C/ discussed #)o%e6

    Ro)ert BrowningPs =uke6 "o Wh#tPs to LikeG

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    The A J F #s # "t#te of 5ind

    QThe "ecret LionQ6 ItPs H#rd to > to tell wh#t cert#in elements of

    the work me#n in rel#tion to your centr#l ide# .thesis/& When

    you m#ke references to the te$t of

    the short story' poem' or pl#y' you #re doing so in order to

    remind your #udience of something they

    #lre#dy know& The principle emph#sis of your ess#y is to

    dr#w conclusions #nd de%elop

    #rguments&

    7"I!< TENT7AL EI=E!CE

    The skillful use of te$tu#l e%idence >> summ#ry' p#r#phr#se'

    speci8c det#il' #nd direct

    (uot#tions >> c#n illustr#te #nd support the ide#s you #re

    de%eloping in your ess#y& Howe%er'

    te$tu#l e%idence should )e used *udiciously #nd only when it

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    directly rel#tes to your topic& The

    correct #nd e+ecti%e use of te$tu#l e%idence is %it#l to the

    successful liter#ry #n#lysis ess#y&

    "umm#ry

    If # key e%ent or series of e%ents in the liter#ry work support

    # point you #re trying to m#ke' you

    m#y w#nt to include # )rief summ#ry' m#king sure th#t you

    show the rele%#nce of the e%ent or

    e%ents )y e$plicitly connecting your summ#ry to your point&

    Below is #n e+ecti%e summ#ry .withits rele%#nce cle#rly pointed out/ from the ess#y #lre#dy

    (uoted #)o%e on QThe "ecret LionQ .B/6

    The )oys 8nd the grinding )#ll' )ut l#ter #ttempt to )ury it

    ."755AR/& Burying it is

    their futile #ttempt to m#ke time st#nd still #nd to preser%e

    perfection

    .RELEA!CE/&

    F#r#phr#se

    ou c#n m#ke use of p#r#phr#se when you need the det#ils

    of the origin#l' )ut not necess#rily the

    words of the origin#l6 p#r#phr#se to put someone elsePs

    words into your own words& Below is #n Reprinted with

    permission from Bucks County Community College

    ?

    e$#mple .#lso from the p#per on QThe "ecret LionQ/ of how to

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    Qtr#nsl#teQ origin#l m#teri#l into p#rt

    of your own p#per6

    Origin#l6 QI w#s twel%e #nd in *unior high school #nd

    something h#ppened th#t we didnPt

    h#%e # n#me for' )ut it w#s nonetheless like # lion' #nd

    ro#ring' ro#ring th#t

    w#y the )iggest things do&Q

    F#r#phr#se6 E#rly in the story' the n#rr#tor tells us th#t when

    he turned twel%e #nd st#rted

    *unior high school' life ch#nged in # signi8c#nt w#y th#t he#nd his friends

    couldnPt (uite 8nd # n#me for&

    "peci8c =et#il

    #rious types of det#ils from the te$t lend concrete support

    to the de%elopment of the centr#l ide#

    of your liter#ry #n#lysis ess#y& These det#ils #dd credi)ilityto the point you #re de%eloping&

    Below is # list of some of the det#ils which could h#%e )een

    used in the de%elopment#l p#r#gr#ph

    from the p#per on ohn 7pdikePs short story QA J FQ .see the

    p#r#gr#ph #g#in for which det#ils

    were used #nd how they were used/&

    Qusu#l tr#1cQ

    Q0uorescent lightsQ

    Qchecker)o#rd green>#nd>cre#m ru))er>tile 0oorQ

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    Qelectric eyeQ

    shoppers like Qsheep'Q Qhousesl#%es'Q #nd QpigsQ

    ne#tly st#cked food

    dyn#mite

    7sing =irect Muot#tions

    Muot#tions c#n illumin#te #nd support the ide#s you #re

    trying to de%elop& A *udicious use of

    (uoted m#teri#l will m#ke your points cle#rer #nd more

    con%incing& As with #ll the te$tu#l

    e%idence you use' m#ke sure you e$pl#in how the e%idence

    is rele%#nt >> let the re#der know

    wh#t you m#ke of the (uot#tions you cite& Below #re

    guidelines #nd e$#mples th#t should help

    you use (uot#tions e+ecti%ely6

    9& Brief (uot#tions .four lines or fewer of prose #nd three

    lines or fewer of poetry/ should )e

    c#refully introduced #nd integr#ted into the te$t of your

    p#per& Fut (uot#tion m#rks #round

    #ll )rie0y (uoted m#teri#l&

    Frose e$#mple6

    As the Qm#n#gerQ of the A J F' Lengel is )oth the gu#rdi#n

    #nd enforcer of Qpolicy&Q When

    he gi%es the girls Qth#t s#d "und#y>school>superintendent

    st#re'Q we know we #re in the

    presence of the A J FPs %ersion of # dre#ry )ure#ucr#t who

    QdoesnPt miss muchQ ./&

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    5#ke sure you gi%e p#ge num)ers when necess#ry& !otice

    th#t in this e$#mple the

    p#ge num)ers #re in p#renthesis #fter the (uot#tion m#rks

    )ut )efore the period&Foetry e$#mple6

    ,rom the )eginning' the =uke in BrowningPs poem gi%es the

    re#der # sense of how

    possessi%e he re#lly is6 QTh#tPs my l#st =uchess on the w#ll' 4

    Looking #s if she were #li%eQ Reprinted with permission from

    Bucks County Community College

    .9>:/& We c#nPt help notice how' e%en though the =uke is

    t#lking #)out her portr#it' his m#in

    concern is th#t she )elongs to him& !otice th#t line S 9 is

    sep#r#ted from line S : )y #

    sl#sh& 5#ke sure you gi%e the line num)ers when necess#ry&

    :& Lengthy (uot#tions should )e sep#r#ted from the te$t of

    your p#per& 5ore th#n four lines

    of prose should )e dou)le sp#ced #nd indented ten sp#ces

    from the left m#rgin' with the

    right m#rgin the s#me #s the rest of your p#per& 5ore th#n

    three lines of poetry should )e

    dou)le sp#ced #nd centered on the p#ge& !ote6 do not use(uot#tion m#rks to set o+

    these longer p#ss#ges )ec#use the indent#tion itself

    indic#tes th#t the m#teri#l is

    (uoted&

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    Frose e$#mple6

    The 8rst p#r#gr#ph of QThe "ecret LionQ introduces the

    n#rr#tor #s someone who h#s *ust

    entered #dolescence #nd isnPt (uite sure wh#t to m#ke of it6

    I w#s twel%e #nd in *unior high school #nd something

    h#ppened th#t we didnPt h#%e #

    n#me for' )ut it w#s there nonetheless like # lion' #nd

    ro#ring' ro#ring th#t w#y the

    )iggest things do& E%erything ch#nged& ust th#t& Like the

    rug' the one th#t getspulled >> or )etter' like the t#)lecloth those m#gici#ns pull

    where the stu+ on the t#)le

    st#ys the s#me )ut the g#sp from the #udience m#kes the

    st#ying>the>s#me p#rt not

    m#tter& Like th#t& .9>:/ 5#ke sure you gi%e p#ge num)ers

    when necess#ry&

    !otice in this e$#mple th#t the p#ge num)ers #re in

    p#renthesis #fter the

    period of the l#st sentence&

    Foetry e$#mple6

    The =uke seems to o)*ect to the f#ct th#t his Ql#st =uchessQ

    is not discrimin#ting enough

    #)out )estowing her #+ection& In the following lines from the

    middle of the poem' the =uke

    lists e$#mples of this Qf#ultQ6

    "ir' Ptw#s #ll one 5y f#%or #t her )re#st'

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    The drooping of the d#ylight in the west'

    The )ough of cherries some o1cious fool

    Broke in the orch#rd for her' the white mule

    "he rode with round the terr#ce >> #ll #nd e#ch

    Would dr#w from her #like the #ppro%ing speech& .:?>;@/

    5#ke sure you gi%e line num)ers when necess#ry&

    ;& If #ny words #re #dded to # (uot#tion in order to e$pl#in

    who or wh#t the (uot#tion refers to'

    you must use )r#ckets to distinguish your #ddition from theorigin#l source&

    E$#mple6

    The liter#ry critic ohn "tr#uss #sserts th#t Qhe Koung

    righteous #nd disillusioned&Q Br#ckets #re used here

    )ec#use there is no w#y of

    knowing who QheQ is unless you #dd th#t

    inform#tion&Reprinted with permission from Bucks County

    Community College

    Br#ckets #re #lso used to ch#nge the gr#mm#tic#l structure

    of # (uot#tion so th#t it 8ts into

    your sentence&

    E$#mple6

    "tr#uss #lso #rgues th#t H#wthorne QpresentKs oung

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    light&Q Br#ckets #re used here to #dd the QsQ to the %er)

    QpresentQ )ec#use otherwise

    the sentence would not )e gr#mm#tic#lly correct&

    & ou must use ellipsis if you omit #ny words from theorigin#l source you #re (uoting&

    Ellipsis c#n )e used #t the )eginning' in the middle' or #t the

    end of the (uot#tion'

    depending on where the missing words were origin#lly&

    Ellipsis is formed )y either three

    or four periods with # sp#ce )etween e#ch period&Origin#l6 QE#rly to )ed #nd e#rly to rise m#kes # m#n

    he#lthy' we#lthy #nd wise&Q

    E$#mple .omission from )eginning/6

    This )eh#%ior Q& & & m#kes # m#n he#lthy' we#lthy' #nd wise&Q

    Ellipsis formed )y three

    dots #fter the (uot#tion m#rks&

    E$#mple .omission from middle/6

    This m#$im cl#ims th#t QE#rly to )ed & & & m#kes # m#n

    he#lthy' we#lthy' #nd wise&Q Ellipsis

    formed )y three dots used in pl#ce of the words Q#nd e#rly

    to rise&Q

    E$#mple .omission from end/6

    He s#id' QE#rly to )ed #nd e#rly to rise m#kes # m#n

    he#lthy & & & &Q Ellipsis is formed )y

    four dots )efore the (uot#tion m#rks >> the fourth dot is

    re#lly # period which ends

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    the sentence&

    ?& 7se # single line of sp#ced periods to indic#te the

    omission of #n entire line of poetry&

    E$#mple6

    The =uke seems to o)*ect to the f#ct th#t his Ql#st =uchessQ

    is not discrimin#ting enough

    #)out )estowing her #+ection6

    & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & & &

    The drooping of the d#ylight in the West'

    The )ough of cherries some o1cious fool

    Broke in the orch#rd for her' while the white mule

    "he rode #round the terr#ce >> like #nd e#ch

    Would dr#w from her #like the #ppro%ing speech& .:>;@/

    Functu#ting =irect Muot#tions

    ou will )e #)le to punctu#te (uoted m#teri#ls #ccur#tely ifyou o)ser%e the following con%entions Reprinted with

    permission from Bucks County Community College

    used in writing #)out liter#ture6

    9& When the (uoted m#teri#l is p#rt of your own sentence'

    pl#ce periods #nd comm#s insidethe (uot#tion m#rks&

    E$#mple6

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    The n#rr#tor of QThe "ecret LionQ s#ys th#t the ch#nge w#s

    Qlike # lion&Q The period is

    inside the (uot#tion m#rks&

    :& When the (uoted m#teri#l is p#rt of your own sentence')ut you need to include #

    p#renthetic#l reference to p#ge or line num)ers' pl#ce the

    periods #nd comm#s #fter the

    reference&

    E$#mple6

    The n#rr#tor of QThe "ecret LionQ s#ys th#t the ch#nge w#sQlike # lionQ .9/& The

    period is outside the (uot#tion m#rks' #fter the p#renthetic#l

    reference&

    ;& When the (uoted m#teri#l is p#rt of your own sentence'

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    & H#%e you used tr#nsition#l words where necess#ry within

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