FeedbackCover Design: The way I have laid out the front cover is to have it in sections, having the title, the main part of the photo and the smaller/brief information at the bottom. Using the leading lines from the photo as organisation was something said to improve the cover and is something which could be possible, and could be effective if I were to change the covers layout, it would depend on what would be in place of the pathway to make it all readable.

Photographs: Instead of having one big image as the front cover criticism said that I could use smaller images to fill up the page instead of the one big one, which could work with the idea behind the magazine, possibly having a small preview of edits or camera equipment to add a bit more to the cover instead of one big image being the main/only attraction to draw people to the magazine.

Text and Font: The text at the bottom of the cover page in big and in a nice font, however the darkness from the photo seems to make it a bit harder to read than I would like, so it is something I would change if I were to redo the magazine so that there wouldn’t be any kind of problems when people go up to it.

Magazine Content: The content of the magazine is said to be very brief so with this in mind I would add more to what I have, more information and more photos in order to give people useful information they have paid for.

Double Page Spread Design: On the double page there is information on a simple and easy way to add filters to an image in Photoshop to bring out some more of the colour and potential from the photo, however in criticism it said that the writing merges into each other and may not be clear what is mean for each step, so I would space them out more to make it clear which step is first to last and what information goes with it.

Photographs: On one of the pages I have framed the images to make them stand out, however I didn’t do it on the other page, which is something I would change if I remade the double page, filling the photo more with the boarders.

Text and Font: The different use of font on the two double pages changes, on the first page it’s slanted and slightly more difficult to read also floating in a white space, to change this I would make it the same font as the other page and put a slight grey background to take it out of the white space. On the other page the font changes to make it easier to read and allow people to see the steps for Photoshop with easy instead of having difficulties reading it and work with Photoshop at the same time. If I did remake the double page I would have it as the same font and make it easier to read all over instead of having the font change.

Article Content: As a full article no criticism was given, comments said it was generic and appropriate so as a whole the magazine worked but some things could be changed to take it to its full potential.