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DOUBLE PAGE DRAFTS AND FEEDBACK
Cameron Tubb
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Draft 1
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feedback
Change background colour from white. Add more info in bottom right corner. Add writing somewhere in the middle to
split the page up.
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Draft 2
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Feedback
Add a box around article to separate it form the rest of the page.
Add a letter W in the box to make it look more professional.
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Draft 3
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NEW IDEA
I have decided to completely restart my double page spread as I wasn’t happy with the result. I’m going to try and go in a more simplistic and clear look. I want my magazine to look professional and slick but so it fits in perfectly with the rest of the magazine.
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FINAL DOUBLE PAGE
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Final Evaluation
I think my final double page spread looks extremely professional. This is because it uses simplistic colours and a sharp and bold layout which gains the audiences attention.