DPS DRAFTS

CHOSEN

IMAGE

EDITED

IMAGE

• I used colour variation to improve the

colours and make them brighter.

• I then removed all colour from the

background leaving Patrick and the

phone box in colour, this subtly

makes the object stand out in way that

is almost 3D.

1ST DRAFT

• I have created a divide where the lamp post is and created a background to type my text into.

• I used another image I took of scooters and set the transparency so that it makes a good background

• I created a title and text.

2nd DRAFT

Improvements

• I removed the complicated background

as I found it distracts the reader from the

text and makes the text harder to read, it

also makes the page look clustered. I

replaced it with a white background.

• I changed the text to size 11 as I thought

it was more appropriate when I reviewed

example magazines.

Improvements

• I also centered the image differently, I moved it to the left as I thought that the big black division (From the lamp post) was too harsh, I created a subtler division by copying a section of the picture and using the blur tool.

• I’ve changed the colour of some of the text from pink to red as it fits in with the colour scheme.

3rd DRAFT

Improvements

• I have removed the division and instead I have created a new layer and created a gradient using the colours white and transparent. This layer merges my image and text background in a subtle and professional way.

• I have also added more text

Improvements

In order to submit a final draft I will

have to:

• Neaten up the edges

• Write more context so that it fills up

the page

• Add a few pull quotes