Assignment 11 draft 5 part 4

Time Scene Shot Description Location Character Art Dept/ Prop Costume Notes

1-9 Laura walking to her house holding bags

Establishing shot of her house

Ealing Laura Costumes- Wig Props- Face paint, Shopping bags

Light blue jeans/pink top, coat and black shoes

10 Laura opening the door

Close-up shot of her hand


Light blue jeans/pink top ,coat and black shoes

11 Seeing her opening the door

Over the shoulder shot of her opening the door



12 She walks in Long shot of her coming in



14 She takes her shoes off.

Close-up shot of her shoes



16 She walks to the cupaboard

Long-shot of her walking to the cupboard Ealing Laura Costumes- Wig

Props- Face paint, Shopping bags


18 She takes the book out of the bag.

Long mid- shot of her taking the book out . Ealing Laura Costumes- Wig

Props- Face paint, Shopping bags


19-23 She see’s a note A close-up shot of the note Ealing Laura Costumes- Wig Props- Face paint, Shopping bags


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Time Scene Shot Description

Location Character Art Dept/ Prop

Costume Notes

24 She looks all confused

Close-up shot of her face



25 She gets scared

A extreme-close up shot her face



26 She drops the book on the floor he

A close-up shot of the book



27-29 She walks to the cupboard

A long shot of her walking to the cupboard



30 She is looking scared

Close-up shot of her face in fear



31 She is about to open the cupboard

¾ shot of her about to open the cupboard



32-33 Her holding the door handle

Close-up shot of her holding the door handle



34-35 She looks relieved




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Costume Notes

36-37 She looks at herself in the mirror

Over the shoulder shot of her looking in the mirror



38 She does her hair




39 Still doing her hair




40-42 She see’s two people behind her




43 She gets frightened

Extreme-close up of her face



44-45 she hides underneath the sheets

Close-up shot of her underneath the sheet



46-47 she is scared and worried

Extreme-close up of her face



48 She gets shocked

Close-up shot of face



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Costume Notes

49 You see these two people again

Close-up shot of their faces



50-52 They run to the cupboard

Full shot of them running to the cupboard



53 The cupboard is closed

Close-up shot of the cupboard



44-45 Laura looks scared




46 -47 She then gets up

Full shot of her getting up




Close-up of her legs walking




Long shot of her walking to the cupboard



55-56 She look scared

Close-up of her face Ealing Laura Costumes- Wig Props- Face paint, Shopping bags


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Costume Notes

57 The door opens by itself

Full shot of the cupboard



58 She is terrified




59-60 She sees' a noted and goes inside to pick it up

Mid-shot of her picking up a note



61 The door closes and shuts her in

Close-up shot of her face and the two people behind her.



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LKaya Enigma - How did they do it?

Insidious opening sequence

Mysterious observerThey show a point of view of someone walking around the house at night with a shadowed hint on the window

Mysterious/scary reflectionThey show a refection of the female making the audience want to know who she is and why she is there at night watching over people

Credits and shotsDuring the credits they show shots of things for example the inside of the house making the audience watch more in why these are significant and the titles because they portray ghost like things making the audience want to see more about ghosts

Enigma

How are we creating enigma in our opening sequences…

• By not telling the audience why these girls are haunting this room so their audience will want to find out more

• The audience will want to watch more to see what relevance the dolls have to this closet/house and why they’re always coming back

• At the ending of the opening sequence we build a climax to a sudden shock/scare getting the audience excited to watch more

• Finally to see what happens to Laura in the closet and further of how the ghosts disturb her

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How have we improved from draft 1?...

• Since draft one we have improved greatly on how we can create enigma.

• We have gone through many ideas and various genres to create a very creative and versatile mind to what excited and interests our target audince

• By creating a questionnaire for our target audience to see what they find interesting and what they don’t

• Researching type of films and themes or concept grabs the audiences attention to watch more

• Watching many different genre of films opening sequences to understand what makes enigma and realising what does not

Target AudienceAge – 15 – 17

Gender – Female and Male

Ethnicity – British

Location – United Kingdom

Interests/Hobbies – local groups, precious memories

Lifestyle – Social, attends college/school, quite open minded

Why would our target audience be interested in our idea/plot?• Its based on real life, in London, so it will be familiar with the audience• Our target audience will be interested to learn about how spirits can play with our mind

throughout the film and interested of being scared.• The film is based in modern time and youth culture, use of slang in a closed narrative so they

can connect and relate to what they see in the film and leave thinking about the consequences

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Why would our target audience be interested in our film because of its form?• The use of editing in building up tension will interest the target audience, they may find

interesting when something is about to occur.

• The use of suspension type music will keep the audience at the edge of their seat imagining themselves in certain situations

Why would your target audience be interested in your film because of genre/conventions?• The target audience would be interested in how different spirits can act and play with

your mind so hopefully it would be interest them.

• The thrill of watching it would constantly keep the target audience interested at the edge of their seats

• The target audience could hopefully relate to the character while being interested imaging themselves in them kind of situations

Target AudienceSanel

Zoe

Sanel and Kaya

Feedback we received from our target audience

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Sinead

Sanel and Kaya


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Xheni

Sanel and Kaya


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Sayana

Sanel and Kaya


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Susan

Sanel and Kaya


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Marcin

Sanel and Kaya


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Overall most of them do enjoy watching thriller films as they like the thought of being scared. Also they find it interesting to see what the spirits will do next to the character in while film. Also none of our audience thought that our opening sequence was complicated and they liked our theme concept. However some said that would like us to film in the dark.

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Characters How have you developed your characters since draft 1?

• We developed our character to be less dark and a lot more relatable to a wider range of our target audience

• We made the character one age rather than a variety so its less confusing

• The clown and doll have been developed into a spiritual characters who rather than look like the dolls to 2 girls with a doll and clown toys.

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Characters Kaya

Actor 1:Sanel Homer

Age:17

Character 1:Laura Hibbitt

Age:19

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CharactersCostume and props

Kaya

MascaraBlush

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Blue jeans Pink top

Ghost book

CharactersMise –en-scene

Kaya

Name – Laura Hibbit

Gender – Female

Age – 19

Costume –jeans, top

Props – None

Make-up – Mascara, tired eyes, blush

Stereotype – Normal smart girl, average

Facial expression – Scared, shock

Body language – Gentle, awkward

Representation – Typical teenage youth. A smart girl who’s abit popular around her area

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Characters Kaya

Actor 2:Gia Alveranga

Age:17

Character 2:Cilia Elizabeth Carter

Age:73

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Pale white face with black circles around eyes

Kaya

Maids dress

CharactersInspirational pictures


Kaya N

£3.19- White

£1.99Maid dress


Kaya

Name – Cilia Elizabeth Carter

Gender – Female

Age – 73

Costume – White dress

Props – None

Make-up – Pale black eyes

Stereotype – Little girl Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling

Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face

Representation – A dead woman from the 1800’s

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Characters Kaya

Actor 3:Rahel Fasil

Age:16

Character 3:Mary Elizabeth Carter

Age:52

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Pale white face with black circles around eyes

Kaya

Maids dress

CharactersInspirational pictures


Kaya N

£3.19- White

£1.99 Maids dress


Kaya

Name – Mary Elizabeth Carter

Gender – Female

Age – 52

Costume – White dress

Props – None

Make-up – Pale black eyes

Stereotype – Little girl Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling

Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face

Representation – A dead woman from the 1800’s

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