Assess the Successes and Failures of Mussolinis Domestic Policy

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A definition of what Mussolini meant by 'fascist' is used well here to convey his aims before assessing his success.

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Key areas for discussion are set out well here, providing the reader with signposting.

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The author ends the introduction by putting forward a convincing argument; a strong start.

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By being precise about measures and dates, the author displays that they have sound knowledge.

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Since the anti-semitic policy was not adopted until 1938, it cannot account for the decline in relations throughout the 1930s.

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A comparative judgment is an excellent way to introduce the next topic area.

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Excellent attention to detail here, making the author's points more convincing.

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The author is correct to note that the appearance of control on the outside did not accurately reflect the picture within.

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The linking of ideas between paragraphs allows the essay to flow very well.

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Another excellent paragraph, where the author explains the policy in detail and then uses concrete evidence to assess its success.

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Historiography is used well to support points.

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This could have been a stronger first paragraph if the author had advanced an argument about success, not just Mussolini's aims in this area.

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Sensible analysis, although it is probably worth making the point that it is very difficult to assess how genuine commitment to the regime actually was, since people lived in fear of the state.

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These two paragraphs would be better combined so the author can assess the success of financial policies whilst describing them.

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The author's evaluation is very strong here because the economic policies are assessed in context and the impact on the majority of Italian citizens is considered.

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The author explains a key point here; the assumption of total power was not enough to ensure Mussolini's success.

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A judgment is offered here but it is a little one-sided; the author could also allude to some of the achievements discussed in the main body of the essay.

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This is a very strong response which demonstrates excellent subject knowledge. It was well structured, with good support from historians and plenty of relevant evaluation. The conclusion could have been extended to reflect the quality of ideas in the essay itself. 5 out of 5 stars.

Assess the Successes and Failures of Mussolinis Domestic Policy

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