RAWRMinimal Level 110 23 marksBasic Level 2 2435 marksProficiencyLevel 3 3647 marksExcellenceLevel 44860 marks

framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriateThe framing of the images are excellent and appropriate to the task.

using a variety of shot distances as appropriateThe magazine uses multiple shots such as mid-shots and long-shots. They look professional and are well taken.

shooting material appropriate to the task setThe images taken work well with the task as they include props like the guitar to emphasise it is a music magazine.

selecting mise-en-scne including colour, figure, lighting, objects and settingThe colour scheme works well as the yellow, red and blue stand out. The dull lighting works well as it cools the magazine down and reflects the genre well.

manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizingThe images are appropriate to the task and the magazine, overall, is well presented and laid out clean and readable. The images have been cropped and sized well.

accurately using language and registerThe language and register used work well with the genre as it is standard to keep the level of professionalism, but slightly informal to reflect the genre.

appropriately integrating illustration and textThe text and images are laid out well and dont clash. They are clear and work well together.

showing understanding of conventions of layout and page designThe creator shows a good understanding of how to lay out their magazine and they have designed it well according to the genre of music they are aiming at.

showing awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text sizeThe magazine uses different font sizes such as a larger font for the title and subheadings and smaller for other pieces of information. However, the font is slightly harder to read and could be clearer.

using ICT appropriately for the task setThe creator seems to have a good knowledge of programs such as Photoshop to help them make their magazine and layer the pieces together.

Summary Comment: The magazine looks good, however some changes could be made to the fonts to make it clearer. The genre has been shown clearly and the colour scheme works well throughout; making it look professional. MEDIA STUDIES AFL 2016