Poem
Freedom
Freedom from pain, Freedom from hunger
Freedom to learn, freedom to teach
Freedom to laugh and so can you cry
Freedom from freedom
My messages is important because freedom is a very important concept in life, and in my poem, I'm trying to deliver that messages to the audience, I'm trying to deliver the idea of freedom, by showing what freedom can be capable of, in this poem I used repetition in parts like “ freedom from pain, freedom from hunger”, and I used diction in parts like “freedom from freedom” I think I’m successfully delivering my message, because the poem is very interesting to read, and it means something.
Diamante
Freedom
u n c h a i n e d h o p e f u l
h o p i n g p r o t e c t i n g l i m i t i n g
l i m i t s e n d s a f t e r m a t h w i l l
K i l l i n g r e g r e t t i n g t e r r o r i z i n g
D e a t h r e g r e t
W a r
In this poem, im trying to compare the differences between freedom and war, I used word choice, for the whole poem, I had the rights, to choose related words, I came out with words like : “unchained, regret, killing, protecting…”. I know this poem would success fully deliver a message, because little kids don’t like long poems, they would like short, and more “shaped” poem. I think it is important because to express freedom in different ways, it would be more effective
limerick
There was a young wild bird
Who always whistle of the unheard
Freedom whistles but no one listened
more he tried more it blurred
His whistles were louds and clear
In this poem I’m trying to say that, freedom is not perfect, and that the concept of
freedom, is very had to apply, I used contrast in such parts like “who always whistles of the unheard” and comparison when I compare a human trying to fight for freedom
to a bird. I think my poem is successfully delivering the message, because limericks has a pretty neat rhyme scheme, I think it is important because freedom is very
important in life, and it is needed in life.
ABC poem
Although it is not perfect
But it is unchained and hopeful
Continue the path, the path of freedom
Do not give up
Even when its hard
Freedom will always be in bound
I this poem I'm trying to explain that, fighting for freedom is hard, and freedom is not completely all good, similar ideas to the earlier limerick poem, in this I used contrast in parts like “ unchained; hopeful” I think my message is successfully delivered because the form of poem I choose, is very different from other types, and it would be fun to read.
It is very important, because I'm trying to express freedom in a more fun way
Found poem
Change will not come
if we wait
for some other person
or some other time.
We are the ones
we've been waiting for.
We are the change
we seek.
In this poem im trying to express that freedom can change, I used enjambment. I emphasize some words, I know it is successfully delivering the messages
because it is short, and fun to read, I think my message is important because it is quoted out from an actual speech.
“Rosenberg, Simon. ""We Are the Ones We've Been Waiting For"" NDN. Ndn.org, 2 July 2008. Web. 01 Apr. 2013.”