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DO YOU
THINK, ANYONE CAN LOVE YOU MORE THAN ME?
LOVE HURTS MORE WHEN YOU KNOW IT REALLY HURTS
AND STILL KEEP ON FALLING IN IT
BY: - AMANDEEP SINGH
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INTRODUCTION
This story is based on an imagination, however like every
other story this story also relates in one or any other
manner with some true living beings and so it resembles a
part of mine too………….
My name is Amandeeep Singh, native place Karnal
writing about my dream in the words of the following story.
The story consists of two main characters, a boy named
Amandeep Singh (yeah it’s me!) and a girl named Kritika
saini. Both are best friends from childhood and trust each
other until one of them has fallen in love with other.
And the story begins
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CHAPTER
ONE
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It was the time of summer and they had just completed
their schooling. He met Kritika at the admission counter
in an engineering college, at that point of time he never
thought he would ever fall in love with her. They
exchanged greetings and then moved ahead for their
works. He remembered when she met him there her face
just lightens with joy and asked “you are also taking
admission in the same college!” He just smiled and
replied “no I am here to meet my uncle”.
After one month they got admissions in different colleges
and in different streams, she joined computer science
engineering and he joined electronics and
communication engineering. But they kept their selves in
contact with messages. And one day he didn’t know what
actually happened but her brother called him and tried to
threaten him. In the act of agony he called her and said
“forget me and make yourself believe that nobody with
my name ever existed in you life”. He don’t know how she
felt at that moment but a feeling of guilt occurred in his
heart but his ego took over it and one long year passed
away and both of them never talked to each other. In the
mean time whenever he was alone in his room he
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reminisced and read her text messages on his cellphone.
In that period of time he found himself missing her in his
life. And one day he mistakenly sent her an email
(actually he was new to internet and he didn’t know that
the mail would be forwarded to all his contacts). She
replied “hello the link that you had sent is not working”,
and he replied her back with an apology that it was
mistakenly sent to her. From that day they started talking
via emails and he didn’t know about her but he eagerly
started to wait for her reply. He told his friends about her
emails and found them not interested. But to him it had
become a routine work.
It was the time of early spring when he informed her
about the demise of Anil sharma’s father and asked her
along with his other two friends, Onam and Chitra, to visit
him and console him. That was the second occasion in
two and half years when he saw her in real. He still
remembered those seventy five rupees that he used to
buy them ice creams from milk parlor. She asked him to
take the contribution from their side but he said it will be
compensated next time. From that time the era of get
together started and they started meeting at least two
times a month. They exchanged numbers and text each
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other every day. But Kritika and he started to chat via
messages and soon get to know each other personally.
One day she asked him about the five things that he loved
in his life. He said first his parents second his love third
his love fourth his friends and fifth again his love. He was
surprised to hear that she knew about the two his loves
but she asked him about the third one, and he changed
the discussion. Next day she again asked him the same
question and he some how get him away with it. But her
childish nature forced him to tell her the third name. So
he said “It is you”. The reply to this message took more
than fifteen minutes. He didn’t know what happened at
her side but he thought he had lost her with just one
stupid reply. He should have told her a lie, then why
wouldn’t he? Actually he wanted her to know the truth.
Everything went fine, and she let that all go. From then he
started talking about love with her and she listened and
replied her patiently. Though she had her on views on
love but she never tired to break his faith. But those long
talks became obsessions for him. And started to love her
more than anything in the world. One day at his room he
cut his arm and scribed her initials on it. When he told
her about that she got scared of that and made her mind
that he was a psycho. So she started avoiding him.
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It was twenty third of Octobers he was drunk and called
her again and again to invite her on his birthday. She
accepted the invitation and his wait for that day started
from the very moment. Thirty first October time eight
past twenty she called him and wished him “HAPPY
BIRTHDATY”. But she refused to meet her and said would
have party some other day. Next day he had some false
talk with his parents and took some sleeping pills that
night and sent her a message regarding that it would be
his last and final message to her. She got scared that if
something happened to that idiot then she would be
taken into account as his last message was sent to her
number. She didn’t even think about the safety of that guy
but started to ponder about herself. Fortunately the next
day that idiot survived. He called her and she said that
she don’t want to keep any kind of contact with him so I
would be better for both of them to go separate ways. It
was easy to say for her because she never felt the same
way as the guy did. But he kept on trying and one day on
his way to Bangalore she finally talked to him and they
talked on internet everyday. But happiness never last for
Aman for long.
It was fifteenth of January, in the midnight Aman took a
cake to her house and wished her “HAPPY BIRTHDAY”
but he was taken for granted and invited to the party on
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the next day just because Aman had said her that she
wouldn’t invite him to her birthday party. And she had a
habit of doing reverse of him. Then they didn’t talk to
each other for one month and finally when they talked
she put so many restrictions on him. But Aman only
wants a piece of pure love from her side so
unintentionally he got to the same tone each and
everyday. He didn’t know what was in her mind because
when she went to her cousin’s house she borrowed a sim
card to talk to him.
That was strange!!!!
But she must have some love for him that she had kept in
the dark chambers of her heart.
And now it’s been two months and seven days since they
last talked to each other. Aman is still trying to find a spot
in her heart but as she says she have a pacemaker instead
of a heart he had not succeeded even to feel her heart
beat.
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Up till now one can thoroughly understand that it was
just a one sided love. One thing that is not revealed yet is-
----- “WHAT WENT WRONG?” In spite of all the love
shown by the guy why did she refused to go along with
him?
To find the answer to the above question lets
precede………
In the beginning it felt like both of them like each other
but one day everything turned around. They were
discussing about the intercast marriage and a small
speech given by Aman rested inside her heart. Kritika
became afraid of the consequences of this bond. So she
decided to leave him alone. And on asking why? She said
she don’t like Sikh in that way. Now the question arose if
this was what she thought then why she played with that
boy. Anyways Aman keeps on having dreams about her,
and asked for a time in which he might be able to settle
down the entire situation so as to convince her parents.
At that point of time she said “It’s ok but if her parents
asked him for a favor she would never deny them”, so the
things were all set but on one condition “that Aman
would never show his love and importance to her”
because according to her if they carry on with this then
their later life would be miserable as they must expect
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same kind of feeling and importance from the guy or girl
they would marry, if nothing went like Aman planned.
Well a discussion without feelings becomes monotonous,
and Kritika started to ignore him as she had already
decided to do so. In her views time would heal all the
wounds. But she forgot scars remain even on the
toughest stones. So did they leave an intense effect on
Aman’s heart.
Now it has been two months since they talked to each
other.
One question that he always asked her …………
DO YO THINK ANYONE CAN LOVE YOU MORE THAN ME?
Just remains a question…………..
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END OF…..
CHAPTER
ONE
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CHAPTER
TWO
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As few great men has spoken that love is not preplanned
it just happens. And this is what went with Aman.
The story ahead is totally fictious. Nothing like this has
ever happened.
It was the month of January, and it was her birthday
again, and it has been six months they didn’t even meet
each other. On that day she met a small accident and
fortunately Aman was present there to help her. She fell
unconscious there so he took her to the nearest hospital.
Aman always wanted to be with her, and he decided to do
something that no one has ever tried before. He thought
to keep his love alive and to be always close to her he had
to do something. So he paid the doctor some bucks and
took or you can say stole some reproductory eggs from
her uterus. The idea behind that was to create a replica of
her so he raised a test tube baby. When that baby born it
was a girl and he named her after Kritika and his own
name and called her “AMIKA”.
The day after Amika born he took her to Kritika because
he wanted Amika to see how she would look like when
she would be a grown up. That was the most awesome
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day they were meeting after a long year. The moment
they saw each other it felt like flash back of the time
when both of them were together and how they
separated. But leaving all those things behind Kritika
welcomed him like she used to do when everything was
fine between them. Aman showed her his daughter and
she smiled and took her in her arms, and unintentionally
few words came out her mouth “WOW SHE LOOKS JUST
LIKE ME”, and he must be wishing that that moment just
stops there forever, but it wouldn’t. She asked for her
mother and he told her “she is holding her at present” But
everything was so sudden that no one bothered to have
an argument on that, probably the first time.
From that span of time Aman took Amika often to her
house, and Amika started to believe that Kritika was her
mother in real. Time just passes like wind and Amika had
grown up. She called Kritika her mother and she had also
created some bond with her that she let her call herself
mother. It was going great between those unnatural
mother daughters but Aman had something different in
his mind. He still loves her more than anyone in his life
and was waiting for the time that he took from her to ask
her parents.
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One year passed………It was the time of winters Amika
had grown up to two years and everything was going as
usual until her parents had her marriage proposal from a
very good family. As she said earlier she won’t go against
her parents, she accepted the proposal. Aman’s heart was
shattered on the floor and he talked about that with her.
But she said that she never loved her.
Three weeks passed………..
Kritika called Aman and asked him to meet her. So they
met at some distant place. Aman was glad, he thought she
might have changed her decision. But it was the other
way around. She just attacked him with verbal assaults
and said he used Amika to gain her sympathy and tried to
makeover with me. Those words hit like a bullet passing
through his heart twice. She asked him to leave her sight
forever and wished that he would get his deserving
punishment. She took off from the place and didn’t even
turn around to see them again.
Well that was a disaster for not only for Aman but Amika
also lost her mother that day. Aman got an offer from a
Brazilian company and moved to that place along with his
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daughter and no information was available from Kritika’s
side.
And Aman had only one Question in his mind……..
DO YO THINK ANYONE CAN LOVE YOU MORE THAN ME?
Just remains a question………….
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END OF…..
CHAPTER
TWO
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CHAPTER
THREE
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It had been two years that Aman along with her daughter
Amika was living in Brazil. One day his friend Anil
Sharma called him and invited him to his wedding. So
they took next flight to India and reached straight to the
wedding hall. There both of them met with tears in their
eyes and hugged each other. They spent their whole day
talking. On the next day, the wedding day, Aman found
out that all his friends were there except Kritika. So he
asked Chitra, one of her best friend that how was she and
why didn’t she come? Chitra replied that she was fine and
she was not at her home that is why she didn’t come.
Then she just moved to the dinner hall and left him alone
standing there. The marriage was successfully completed
and from there Aman along with her daughter boarded
for his parents house in Karnal. Just when he stepped out
side the bus stand in Karnal he met another friend of
Kritika. They talked for a while and when it comes to
Kritika she started to cry. Aman asked him the reason
then she told him the whole story.
She told him that she had gained a bone marrow disease
and her fiancé left her because he found that her disease
was incurable as none of her parents bone marrow
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matched with her. She said that the doctors told her that
she had only a year left. Listening to her words filled
Aman’s heart with tears and he decided to go and meet
her. But he remembered that she never wanted to see
him again. So he let Amika to meet her and waited
outside the ICU. Amika was just like her in looks so it
didn’t take long for Kritika to recognize her. She asked
about Aman and Amika told her that he was outside the
ICU. She asked more about Aman and Amika told her “he
lives in a room full of her posters and pictures”. Both of
them started to have a conversation and in the
meanwhile Aman asked the doctor if there is any chance
to save her. The doctor replied that there would be a
chance if she had a child and probably his bone marrow
matched with hers. Listening to doctors words Aman
found out that one last chance. That one last chance was
“AMIKA”. So he decided to help her with her own
daughter’s bone marrow. The doctors told her that she is
fortunate enough to have a donor and she had her
operation fit and fine. The day she discharged from the
hospital she saw Aman and Amika were also leaving from
the hospital. She went close to them and said to Aman “so
this is your love, waiting outside the ICU and not even
getting to know if i was alright or not. You know what
you never deserve me and thank god I didn’t say yes to
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you”. After that she just moved on with her parents and
didn’t even try to find anything about the donor. Aman
and Amika took off for their parent’s house and were
staying there for a week.
In the meanwhile Kritika was feeling lucky to have that
second chance. Her friends were visiting her and greeting
her wishes. One day while looking for something in the
wardrobe she found her report and she stared checking
it. She found Amika’s name in the donor’s column and
astonished to learn that only some one in her blood
relation could help her. She wanted to find the answer
that how she could be able to help her. She went to
Aman’s and his parents told her the whole truth. Knowing
all the truth she just couldn’t face her but she was flared
up that why he did that to her? She called Aman and met
him and asked the same question why he did that to her?
He just smiled and said because he loved her and wanted
her in any form of life.
But nobody knows what was going in her mind and she
hit him with a keen stone in to the head and he fall on the
ground slowly crawling into his grave in the graveyard of
love that he found in his entire life.
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Last words that came out of his mouth were………..
DO YO THINK ANYONE CAN LOVE YOU MORE THAN ME?
And you know what this still remains a question…….
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THE END
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