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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
AFL
Evaluating PeerWork
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
7/25/2019 Afl Cwork Yr12
2/14
YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
Name: Ellie Emmett
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
7/25/2019 Afl Cwork Yr12
3/14
YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
Activity 1
Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces ofwork. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible youshould use a best fit model this means that you take an overall view rather thanharshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples
and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the!"#$%! &'(')$"!
NON STOP POP
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
Framin! not
done well#
model not
ma&in! eye
contact wit"camera'
$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
(sed ew
di)erent s"ot
distances#
li!"tin! in
pict$res is not
!ood' Pict$res
"ave *een
ta&en at "ome
and don+t loo&
proessional'
s"ootin! materialappropriate to t"e
tas& set
Pict$res omodel loo& a
*it li&e a
popstar'selectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!
colo$r# .!$re#
li!"tin!# o*/ects
and settin!
0"e $se o t"e
pin& ma&es it
loo& li&e a pop
ma!aine'
manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t orpresentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!
Front cover
p"oto too *i!
and te%t is too
lar!e' P"oto isalso *l$rry and
*een positioned
at a *ad an!le'acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
Appropriate
interview or a
pop ma!aineappropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
Pict$res laid o$t
in *ad order'
0e%t is airly o&'
s"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
Pa!e n$m*ers
*een $sed#
most o te%t is
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
in line'
s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t sie
0e%t on ront
cover to *i!
and ta&e $p
most o pa!e
$sin! 30appropriately or
t"e tas& set
(sed s&ills romP"otos"op'
S$mmary 3omment: 0"is ma!aine is in *and 2'
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
7/25/2019 Afl Cwork Yr12
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
FLAW&
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
Front cover
rame is !ood#
model ma&in!
eye contact# no
need or ot"er
model in t"e
rame t"o$!"'$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
Mid s"ot or
s"ot# distance
is !ood's"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas& set
Props $sed#
!$itar wor&s
wit" !enre'selectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!
colo$r# .!$re#
li!"tin!# o*/ects
and settin!
4ac&!ro$nd
pict$re on
contents .ts
t"e mise en
scene# *asic
colo$r sc"eme'manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!
3over p"oto
cropped and
do$*le pa!e
model
*ac&!ro$nd c$t
o$t'
acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
3ontent .ts
!enre
appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
0e%t *old and
reada*le
s"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions olayo$t and pa!e
desi!n
Space on pa!e#
laid o$t o&'
s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t sie
Fonts 5$ite
lar!e# lot
amo$nt o te%t
$sin! 30
appropriately or
t"e tas& set
P"otos"op s&ills
$sed to crop
p"otos'
S$mmary 3omment: 0"is ma!aine is "i!" *and two6low *and t"ree'
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
STACK
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
Front coverramed well#
p"oto o *and
mem*er at
concert'$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
S"ots in many
di)erent places
s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas& set
ma!es $sed to
descri*e !enre'
selectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!colo$r# .!$re#
li!"tin!# o*/ects
and settin!
Li!"tin! in
s"ots 5$itedar colo$r
sc"eme 5$ite
plain'manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!
Pict$res on
do$*le pa!e
*een c$t o$t
and placed over
eac" ot"er#
s"owin!
di)erent s&ills'acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e andre!ister
Lots o
inormationwit"in !enre'
appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
0e%t is !ood
sie# reada*le'
s"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
Laid o$t well
desi!n
innovative'
s"owin!
awareness o t"eneed or variety in
onts and te%t sie
0e%t placed
w"ere t"ere iseno$!" space
or ima!es'$sin! 30
appropriately or
t"e tas& set
P"otos"op $sed
well'
S$mmary 3omment: 0"is ma!aine is in *and t"ree'
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
7/25/2019 Afl Cwork Yr12
7/14
YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
DUBZONE
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
S"ot ramed*adly# an!le
wron!# te%ts
"ides model
$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
No variety#
s"ots loo&
similar's"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas& set
S"ots $sed not
close to !enre
at all# model
needs to *e
wearin!di)erent
clot"in!'selectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!
colo$r# .!$re#
li!"tin!# o*/ects
and settin!
Li!"tin! and
settin! o s"ots
is *ad# props
$sed don+t
connect wit"
!enre'manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!
P"otos in *ad
placin!'P"otos not
*een cropped#loo&s
$n.nis"ed'
acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
nterview loo&s
s"ort'
appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
0e%t "ard to
read on yellow
*ac&!ro$nd on
contents pa!e's"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
0e%t not in
col$mns# loo&s
$ntidy'
s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t sie
Spacin! on
pa!es $sed
*adly# te%ts too
*i!'$sin! 30
appropriately or
t"e tas& set
P"otos"op $sed
*adly'
S$mmary 3omment: t"is ma!aine is in *and 1'
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
Task 2
"ow using the skills youve ac*uired in task + evaluate yo! o"# "o!k a#$ t%e#
t"o pieces of "o!k f!om classmates. Use the space provided to give specificexamplesand write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.
&a'a(i#e title) T! So#$ * +ack ,o!#e &a'a(i#e
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
Framed well#
*ot" models
ma&in! eye
contact'
$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances asappropriate
7nly $sed t"ree
s"ots
s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas& set
Models don+t
loo& indie#
wearin! wron!
sort o clot"in!'selectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!
colo$r# .!$re#
li!"tin!# o*/ects
and settin!
No mise en
scene# no
props# cover
p"oto 5$ite
dar&'manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s asappropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!
No croppin!#
little editin!#5$ite *asic $se
o s&ill'
acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
Little
inormation#
interview s"ort'appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
0e%t on do$*le
pa!e spread is
too *ri!"t *l$e
colo$r so is"ard to read'
s"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
Layo$t is *asic#
needs more
editin!'
s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t sie
0e%t to *i!# not
eno$!" o it#
little on
contents pa!e'$sin! 30
appropriately ort"e tas& set
(sed *$t not
correctly needsmore s&ill'
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
S$mmary 3omment: t"is ma!aine is in *and level 1'
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
7/25/2019 Afl Cwork Yr12
10/14
YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
&a'a(i#e title) -#te!val * E$ie &!!ay ma'a(i#e.
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
Yes#appropriate
model loo&in!
at t"e camera'
$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
Yes# $sed a
variety o 8
di)erent
ima!es's"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas& set
Models in
normal clot"es#
ront cover
moreappropriate'
selectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!
colo$r# .!$re#
li!"tin!# o*/ects
and settin!
Model on ront
cover loo&s
indie .ttin! in
wit" !enre#
colo$r sc"eme
red# w"ite and
*lac& contrasts
well'manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"econte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!
ma!e on
do$*le pa!e#
cropped# *eensied well'
acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
Yes# lan!$a!e
!ood# lots
writtenappropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
Yes# $sed some
te%ts over
ima!es'
s"owin!$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
Pa!es laid o$twell# te%ts in
line and pa!e
$rnit$re $sed
correctly's"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t sie
Lots o di)erent
onts# some a
little lar!e'
$sin! 30
appropriately or
t"e tas& set
Yes# *ee $sed
wit" s&ill on
p"otos"op'
S$mmary 3omment
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
7/25/2019 Afl Cwork Yr12
12/14
YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
&a'a(i#e title)
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! ande%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriates"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas& setselectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!
colo$r# .!$re#li!"tin!# o*/ects
and settin!manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!isterappropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%ts"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!ns"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t sie$sin! 30
appropriately or
t"e tas& set
S$mmary 3omment
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
7/25/2019 Afl Cwork Yr12
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
'ask 3 'arget setting
(se t"e eed*ac& rom yo$r classmates to set tar!ets to improve yo$r wor&'(se t"e !rid *elow to oc$s yo$r areas or improvement' 0ry to *e as speci.c
as possi*le and w"ere possi*le create one tar!et or eac" area o t"e mar&sc"eme' Remem*er to *e realistic# t"at means ma&in! s$re yo$r tar!ets areac"ieva*le and realistic or yo$r a*ility'
&a'a(i#e title)
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!elements as
appropriate$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriates"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas& setselectin! mise,en,
sc-ne incl$din!
colo$r# .!$re#
li!"tin!# o*/ectsand settin!manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resiin!acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
appropriatelyinte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%ts"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!ns"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t sie$sin! 30
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
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YR 12 Media AFL Activity Print
appropriately or
t"e tas& set
AS Print Level Descriptors Level awarded
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