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Zak, paragraph 1, 1 st draft (red sticker)and 2 nd draft (amber sticker). Correct work is highlighted.

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Zak paragraph 1, 3 rd draft (green sticker).

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Zak 2 nd paragraph, 1 st draft (red sticker)

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2 nd draft (amber sticker), correct work highlighted, success criteria sticker.

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Michaela Paragraph 1 1 st draft

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2 nd draft, typed up for homework using the French spell- checker. Correct work highlighted. 2 questions asked.

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3 rd draft, improvements made in school green pen!

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Marking and feedback strategies 3 drafts identified by red, amber and green stickers Correct work highlighted Success criteria/feedback stickers WWW EBI ask questions Green pen for corrections