WORD TRASH “WORD TRASH” – words, phrases and habits that should not find their way into your...

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WORD TRASH WORD TRASH” – words, phrases and habits that should not find their way into your formal academic writing.

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WORD TRASH

“WORD TRASH” –words, phrases and habits that should not find their way into your formal academic writing.

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WORD TRASH

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

Be careful! Even commonly usedwords such as “guy”

are too slangfor academic writing!

(It’s “man” or “character.”)

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

It’s OK to use shorthandsymbols in your notes,

but edit them out of your draft!

(You may use symbols IF theyare included in a direct quote.)

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

First person POV includesI, me, my, us, our, we, etc.

It’s perfectly fine to use fora personal essay or opinion

writing–but not OK in most academic writing.

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

Instead of first personpronouns, use something like

“readers” or “the reader.”

“The reader can see thatFitzgerald intended his

protagonist to appear…”

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

This is a COMMONproblem. Make sure to

edit this out of your writing.

“When you pick up abook by Fitzgerald,

you notice…”

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

Use something like“the reader” or “one” to fix it.

“When one picks upa book by Fitzgerald,

one notices…”

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

This habit makes yourwriting sound immature.

A related problem:“The following quote

will show…”

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

This habit makes yourwriting sound weak; itappears as if you arenot very confident.

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

You might be shocked tosee how many English

students let this habit slip into their academic papers!

2 ≠ to 4 ≠ for u ≠ you r ≠ are

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

vague descriptors(“good” “bad” etc.)

Use descriptors that…youknow…describe. What

do you MEAN by “good” or “bad”?

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

vague descriptors(“good” “bad” etc.)

“things”/ “stuff”

Use a specific,precise, descriptive noun.

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

vague descriptors(“good” “bad” etc.)

“things”/ “stuff”

“big”

Do not use “big” (or “large”or “huge”) when you reallymean “important,” “key,”“influential,” or “main.”

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

vague descriptors(“good” “bad” etc.)

“things”/ “stuff”

“big”

“majorly”

“Majorly” isa slang use that hasbecome common in

speech, but is not OKin formal writing.

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

vague descriptors(“good” “bad” etc.)

“things”/ “stuff”

“big”

“majorly”

These are vague adverbs.Replace them with more

precise, descriptive words.

very hungry = famishedreally tired = exhausted

very honest = candid“very” / “really”

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

vague descriptors(“good” “bad” etc.)

“things”/ “stuff”

“big”

“majorly”

“very” / “really”

etc.…Do not end a sentence

or list of items with etc. or an ellipsis (…).

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WORD TRASH

slang terms

symbols instead of

words(ex: & or @)

first person POV(unless it’s a

personal essay)

“you”(second person POV)

talking about the paper IN the paper

(“This essay will show…”)

email & text jargon

lame, weak commentary(“In my opinion…”

“I think that…”)

vague descriptors(“good” “bad” etc.)

“things”/ “stuff”

“big”

“majorly”

“very” / “really”

etc.…