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Week 5
4/03/2010
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Quiz 4
• Take quiz• Check together
• Announcement: Easter Party! Today: 4ish? • * Egg dyeing• * Easter presentation—what is Easter? What do
we do? Why do we celebrate?• * Egg salad sandwiches• * Easter candy
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Misplaced modifiers
• What are the double meanings of these sentences?
– “Wanted: Young Man – To Open Oysters with References”
– Clyde and Charlotte decided to have two children on their wedding day.
– The students no longer like the math instructor who failed the test.
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Word placement
• How could we clarify the following sentences?
– Tony bought an old bicycle from a crooked dealer with faulty breaks.
– I nearly earned two hundred RMB last week.
– Bill yelled at the howling dog in his underwear.
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Misplaced Modifiers
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I saw mountains of uncollected trash walking along the city
streets.
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I almost had a dozen job interviews after I sent out my
resume.
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Bill swatted the wasp that stung him with a newspaper.
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Jill decided to live with her grandparents when she attended
college to save money.
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Charlotte returned the hamburger to the supermarket that was
spoiled.
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Roger visited the old house still weak with the flu.
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The phone almost rang fifteen times last night.
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My uncle saw a kangaroo at the window under the influence of
whiskey.
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We decided to send our daughter to college on the day she was
born.
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Fred always opens the bills that arrive in the mailbox with a sigh.
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I noticed a crack in the window walking into the deli.
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A well-worn track shoe was found on the locker bench with holes in
it.
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I almost caught a hundred lightning bugs.
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Dave found a television set in a secondhand store that had been
stolen from me last month.
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There were four cars parked outside the café with Suzhou
license plates.
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Longfellow wrote that rainbows are the flowers that have died
and gone to heaven in a poem.
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I almost filled an entire notebook with biology lab drawings.
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The apprentice watched the master carpenter expertly fit the
door with envious eyes.
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The photographer pointed the camera at the shy deer equipped with a special night-vision scope.
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The passengers on the bus stared at the ceiling or read newspapers with tired faces.
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Dangling modifiers: Introduction (1)
What is the double meaning of this sentence?
While smoking a pipe, my dog sat with me by the crackling fire.
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Dangling modifiers: Introduction (2)
What is the double meaning of this sentence?
Looking at the leather-skirted woman, his sports car went
through a red light.
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Dangling modifiers: Introduction (3)
What is the double meaning of this sentence?
After baking for several hours, Grandmother removed the beef
pie from the oven.
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Dangling modifiers: Definition (1)
• A modifier that opens a sentence must be followed immediately by the word it is meant to describe.
• Otherwise, the modifier is “dangling” and the sentence takes on an unintended meaning.
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Dangling modifiers: Definition (2)
– While smoking a pipe, my dog sat with me by the crackling fire.
• Intended meaning: I was smoking a pipe• Unintended meaning: dog was smoking a
pipe
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Dangling modifiers: Correction
• Two ways to correct:
1. Place the subject right after the opening word group.
While smoking a pipe, I sat with my dog by the crackling fire.
2. Place the subject within the opening word group.
While I was smoking my pipe, my dog sat with me by the crackling fire.
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Dangling Modifiers Practice
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Flunking out of school, my parents demanded that I get a
job.
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When dieting, desserts are especially tempting for Cicely.
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Sitting in the front row at the World Cup, a football hit Kathy on
the head.
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Covered with food stains, Shirley decided to wash the tablecloth.
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Joining several college clubs, Selena’s social life became more
active.
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Braking the car suddenly, Sharon’s shopping bags tumbled
off the seat.
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Advertising on BBS, Joyce’s old textbooks were quickly sold.
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Frustrated by piles of homework, Cherry’s temptation was to watch
“Gossip Girls”.
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After waiting in the bank line for an hour, the teller told Coco she
had filled out the wrong form.
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In a sentimental frame of mind, the music brought tears to Kiki’s
eyes.
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Elements of Style points 9-18
(http://www.bartleby.com/141/strunk5.html)
Go over a few points
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Comparison & Contrast Writing
• “American Space, Chinese Place”
• Group discussion: Questions on Content & Questions on Technique
• What do you think about Yi-Fi Tuan’s theory of “space” and “place”?
• Do you agree that Chinese are rooted in place? What about in modern Chinese culture?
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Homework
• 1. Write: Compare/contrast essay based on your outline—I’ll send it back by Monday night
• 2. Read: Examining Cause and Effect
• 3. Review: today’s lesson (quiz 5)