Application of Assignment Feedback

Markers Comments

How Feedback was Applied

Before After

I found your discussion postings to be thoughtful, however at times I was hoping that you’d be a little more precise in your analysis of the issues, though I understand that this can be tough with the word count you have available.

Following the feedback, I made sure that I took time to be more precise in my weekly forum posts to demonstrate my understanding of the issues

Application of Assignment Feedback

It’s great to see that you’ve responded to your peer’s thoughts with comments on their blogs. I was encouraged to see that you had used research to support your comments on your peer’s blogs, as this added to the depth of analysis that you provided. Remember that it is okay to critically evaluate your peer’s work, as this is how we push our thinking and develop academic discourse. I would have liked to have seen more evidence of this in your work.

For Assessment 3, I was careful to critically evaluate my peer’s forum posts, using peer-reviewed research where possible. I continued to extend my research with academic sources to support my ideas.

Application of Assignment Feedback

I would have liked to have seen further evidence of how you had considered what digital technologies you would be adding to the lesson. I can see that you have made some modifications, though I do feel as though you could have gone a little further in explaining the reasons why you made the changes you did.

I was more careful to provide evidence and detailed explanations on technology selection and modifications

Application of Assignment Feedback

I found your artefacts to be particularly well put together. I could see that you had engaged with each of the tasks in a genuine way, to produce effective ideas that you will be able to transfer into the classroom. Your portfolio was well laid out, easy to navigate and displayed your content well.

I continued to focus on providing well put together artefacts and engaged with each task in a genuine way to provide effective ideas that will transfer into my future classroom. I paid extra attention to ensure that my E-portfolio was easy to navigate and displayed the content well

Application of Assignment Feedback

Please be sure to check the APA7 guide to ensure that your citations and reference list are correctly formatted. The title is ‘references’ not bibliography.

I have used APA 6th Edition as this was allowed by the subject co-coordinator. I ensured that my citations and references are correctly formatted, and I corrected the title from “Bibliography’ to ‘References’

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