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_g'!Hn m`'There are several methods to improve the strength of the polymer now.One is the addition of glass fiber, the content of glass fiber is up to 35%wt. Another is adding clay into the polymer, and the content is up to 5%wt only. The latter is the most promising one in the world. However,there is an aggregation phenomenon if the clay content is over certainamount.

Sa [i Among the several methods available to enhance polymer strength

include adding glass fiber in which glass fiber content reaches 35% wt!and adding clay in which the content is only up to 5 wt%!. "hile thelatter approach is more feasible, an aggregation phenomenon occurs ifthe clay content e#ceeds a certain amount.


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_g'!Hn m`'$urrently, most researchers have to maintain matching templates fore#tracting web tables with different structures. oreover, for unseenstructures, designers have to efficiently define a new template manuallyfor dealing with that &ind of web table. 't is very time consuming andinefficient. Thus, the overall precision rate of web table e#traction is notgood.

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(or unseen structures, the inability of designers to define efficiently anew template manually in order to maintain matching templates fore#tracting web tables with different structures ma&es it impossible toachieve a satisfactory precision rate when e#tracting web tables.


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_g'!Hn m`' Although numerous methods have been studied onthe estimation of the conserved area in )*A, the

methods for +uic& and precise in prediction ofconserved areas in )*A are very scarce.

Sa [iespite the numerous methods to estimate the

conserved area in )*A, such methods areinefficient and imprecise.


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_g'!Hn m`'The above operations are not easily implemented by the

production control because there are some comple#functions and rescheduling is also difficult in case of anychange of the production status.

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-roduction control can not easily implement the aboveoperations owing to comple# functions and difficultrescheduling when the production status changes.


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_g'!Hn m`''n recent year, the -$ /s industry/s technology has move frommulti0layer toward multithin layer. $ustomers on ordering

process would consider the candidate/s production ability and

allow 12%032% downset for those -$ manufacturers.

Sa [i As industrial technology for printed circuit boards has shifted in

recent years from multi0layered to multi thin0layered, orderingcustomers allow a downset rate of 12032% during production.


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_g'!Hn m`''n order to answer the +uestion How much $O6 emission could be eliminated through

policy strategies7 The $O6 emission volume is bro&en down into several variants forcalculation. asically, total emissions are made up of each traveler/s travel distanceand emission of the each unit of distance. The in0between distance of the two points

8! are defined as the travel length between Hong+iao airport and 'nternational-udung Airport in 9hanghai through the public transport modes of metro, buses, andrent cars.

Sa [ietermining the e#tent to which policy strategies can eliminate $O6 emissions

involves classifying the volume of such emissions into several variants for calculation.Total emissions consist of the travel distance for each traveler and the emissions ofeach unit of distance. The average distance of the two points 8! refers to the travellength between Hong+iao omestic Airport and -udung 'nternational Airport in9hanghai based on public transport modes of the metro subway, buses, and rentalcars.


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_g'!Hn m`'(or production tardiness incurred in the furnace area, thefollowing process will also be delayed. oreover, the

production tardiness will postpone the time to mar&et of products.

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-roduction tardiness in the furnace area delays not onlythe subse+uent process, but also time to mar&et deliveryof products.


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_g'!Hn m`'ecause of its efficiency, convenience and accuracy, :-9 has been widely

applied in various areas such as surveying engineering, cadastralsurveying, fault movement detections and geodynamics. *evertheless,systematic errors often ta&e place owing to the fact that :-9 carrier

phases tend to be influenced by the environments.

Sa [iespite their e#tensive use in diverse applications such as in surveying,

cadastral surveying, fault movement detection and geodynamics owing totheir efficiency, fle#ibility and high accuracy, global positioning systems

:-9! often incur systematic errors since the surrounding environmentoften adversely impacts carrier phases.


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_g'!Hn m`'The better furnace scheduling ma&essucceeding processes more smoothly.

Sa [i4nhanced furnace scheduling streamlinessuccessive processes.


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_g'!Hn m`''n order to satisfy customer/s plural re+uirements, manydeveloped countries are trying to invent cosmetic products. 'nthis area, the caliber of developmental cosmetic can show the

financial level of the country.

Sa [i9atisfying various consumer demands e#plains the increased

production of cosmetics in many industriali;ed countries. Thee#tent to which this development is pursued reflects a country/sfinancial growth.


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_g'!Hn m`'$ustomers will ac+uire products which have lower +uality, andcustomer return products let our company lose credit in )Amar&et. esides, production costs will greatly increase.

Sa [i$ustomers purchasing substandard products and theirsubse+uently high product return rate tarnish the companyreputation in the )A mar&et and significantly increase

production costs.


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_g'!Hn m`' As global contracts have been announced recently, most of )A producers have no any profit in this slac& season. ut the purchasersstill insist the lower price. 9o, the )A price on post0period of archis similar to pre0period. ut, analy;ers predict that the )A price stillwill trend down since supply is higher than the demand.

Sa [iespite the recent announcement of global contracts that most )A

manufacturers did not generate profits during this slac& period,consumers still demand a competitive retail price. The )A priceduring the post0period of arch thus resembles that of the pre0period.However, as is forecasted, the retail price for )A products will spiraldownwards as supply e#ceeds demand.


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_g'!Hn m`'The current ma or climate change impacts from the soaring atmospheric$O6 density are sea level rise, acid rain, e#treme weather events,unpredictable precipitation seasons, drought and wild fire, unbalance inecological chain, epidemic disease, food shortage, floods, landslides and

mudslides, which are correlated and coe#isting.

Sa [ia or climate changes such as rising sea levels, acid rain, e#treme

weather events, unpredictable seasonal precipitation, drought and wildfires, imbalanced ecological chain, epidemic diseases, food shortages,floods, landslides and mudslides contribute to the soaring atmospheric$O6 density.


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_g'!Hn m`''f analysis mechanisms can/t catch failure chips precise, thenthe failure devices will be sold. Therefore, customers must notaccept failure )A devices, and our company needs to ta&e

those products bac& those products.

Sa [iThe inability of analysis mechanisms to detect faulty chips

precisely will lead to their unintentional purchase on the mar&etand a subse+uently high return rate owing to customers/ refusalof substandard )A devices.


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_g'!Hn m`'(rom viewpoint of manufacturing, time cost in evaluationof appropriate photo resist and e#tra production costfrom small amount of stoc& will be serious barrier for tri0layer technology applications.

Sa [i(rom a manufacturing perspective, a prohibitively long

evaluation of appropriate photo resist and additional production costs from a small amount of stoc& seriouslylimit tri0layer technology applications.


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_g'!Hn m`'The $hinese herbal medicine mar&et grows vigorously in recentyears, because of the to#icity and side effect of the "esternmedicine, and ta&es the resistance to the action of a drug

caused for a long time ta&ing.

Sa [iThe $hinese herbal medicine mar&et has burgeoned in recentyears, owing to the to#ic and adverse effects of "esternmedicine as well as its ability to resist drug effects for ane#tended period of use.


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_g'!Hn m`''mplementation of the program is performed.

Sa [iThe program is implemented.


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_g'!Hn m`'Optimi;ation of the output is achieved.

Sa [iThe output is optimi;ed.


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_g'!Hn m`'The committee must ma&e a considerationof the proposal.

Sa [iThe committee must consider the proposal.


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_g'!Hn m`'The engineer performed calibration of themachine.

Sa [iThe engineer calibrated the machine.


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_g'!Hn m`'The researcher conducted an e#periment onthe new material.

Sa [iThe researcher e#perimented with the newmaterial.


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_g'!Hn m`'The purpose of this study is to understandthe underlying factors.

Sa [iThis study attempts aims! to understandthe underlying factors.


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_g'!Hn m`'The committee made a decision on what todo ne#t.

Sa [iThe committee decided what to do ne#t.


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_g'!Hn m`'The group has to ma&e a discovery of allfeasible options.

Sa [iThe group must discover all feasibleoptions.


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