Take Home Midterm Test of Introduction TranslationAnalyzing Register Movie Script and Analyzing Indonesian Subtitle of English Script.

Title: Corpse Bride

Release: 2005

Scene 1:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Discussing about fianc and fiance should liking each other when they will married.

Tenor : Hilgrade (Victorias chaperon), Victorias Mother (Macdiline Everglot), Victorias Father (Finis Everglot) and Victoria (The daughter of Macdiline Everglot)

Mode: Spoken.Social Distance: Victoria Everglot is a daughter of Macdiline Everglot and Finis Everglot, which is a family with high social status. The relationship between parents and daughter are not really intimate. There is no love between Macdiline and Finis, because they married for their parents.

Hildegarde is a Victorias chaperon. She has intimate relationship to Victoria.S: Victoria: Oh, Hildegarde

IS: Hildegarde.

S: What if Victor and I, don't like each other?

IS: Bagaimana jika Victor dan aku tak saling menyukai?

S: Victoria mother: As if that has anything to do with marriage.

IS: Dan itu terjadi karena pernikahan ini?

R: Seakan-akan itu ada hubungannya dengan pernikahan?S: Do you suppose your father and I like each other?

IS: Kau pikir ibu dan ayah saling suka?

S : Victoria: Surely you must a little?IS: Tak sedikitpun?

R Tentu, meski sedikit, kan?S: Victorias Mother : Of course not.

IS:Tentu tidak.

S: Victorias Father : Of course not.

IS: Tentu tidak.

S: Victorias Mother : Get those corsets laced properly.

IS: Ikatkan korset itu dengan benar.S: I can hear you speak without gasping.IS: Kau masih bisa bicara dengan terengah-engah.

R: Aku masih mendengar kau bicara dengan terengah-engah.

Scene 2:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Discussing about Victors Marriage that will bring a victory to Van Dort family.

Tenor : Victor Van Dort, Victors Mother (Neil Van Dort), and Victors Father (William Van Dort)

Mode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Victor Van Dort is a son of Neil Van Dort and William Van Dort, which is a family with middle social status, even almost low status. The relationship between parents and son are quite intimate.

Mayhew is a Van Dorts employee. S: Victors Father : You've certainly hooked a winner this time, Victor.IS: Kau memancing ikan kali ini, Victor.R: (Kali ini kau sungguh menjadi pemenang, Victor)S: Victors Mother: Now, all you have to do is reel her in.

IS: Sekarang kau tinggal tarik kailmu.R: (Sekarang kau tinggal membuatnya terkejut)S: Victor : I'm already reeling, Mother.IS: Aku sudah menariknya, bu. R: (Aku sudah mengejutkan, bu)S: Shouldn't Victoria Everglot be marrying a lord or something?

IS: Bukankah Victoria Everglot seharusnya menikahi bangsawan?

R: (Bukankah Victoria Everglot seharusnya menikahi bangsawan atau sejenisnya?)S: Victors Mother : Oh, nonsense! We're every bit as good as the Everglots.

IS: Omong kosong! Kita juga terhormat seperti keluarga Everglot.R: (Omong kosong! Kita juga sedikit terhormat seperti keluarga Everglot.)S: I always knew I deserved better than a fish merchant's life.IS: Hidupku seharusnya lebih baik dari sekedar menjadi pedagang ikan.R: (Aku yakin, aku pantas mendapat kehidupan lebih baik dari sekedar hidup menjadi seorang pedagang ikan.)S: Victor: But I've never even spoken to her.IS: Tapi aku tak pernah bicara dengannya.

S: Victors Mother : Well, at least we have that in our favor.

IS: Itu keuntungan bagi kita.R: (Paling tidak kita akan membuatnya terjadi sesuai kehendak kita)

S: Mayhew! Silence that blasted coughing.

IS: Mayhew! Hentikan batukmu.R: (Mayhew! Hentikan batukmu itu.)

Scene 3:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Discussing about Marriage.

Tenor : Victorias Mother (Macdiline Everglot) and Victorias Father (Finis Everglot).

Mode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Victoria Everglot is a daughter of Macdiline Everglot and Finis Everglot, which is a family with high social status. The relationship between parents and daughter are not really intimate. There is no love between Macdiline and Finis, because they married for their parents.

S: Victorias Mother : Marriage is a partnership, a little tit for tat (idiom).

IS: Pernikahan adalah kemitraan, sedikit timbal balik R: (Pernikahan adalah pencarian rekan, dan saling membalas dengan setimpal)S: You'd think a lifetime watching us...

IS: Kau pikir seumur hidup melihat kita.R:(Seharusnya kau berpikir setelah melihat kami...)

Scene 4:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Victors mother comment on Victor appearance.Tenor : Victor and Victors MotherMode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Van Dort family really wants to make their status higher. Victors parents are quite care to Victor.S: Victors Mother : Look at the way you're standing.IS: Lihat caramu berdiri.R: (Perhatikan caramu berdiri.)S: You look like you got rickets or something...IS: Kau seperti kena penyakit bungkuk ..R: (Kau seperti terkena penyakit bungkuk atau sejenisnya..)

Scene 5:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Discussing about Everglots House.

Tenor : Victors Mother (Neil Van Dort), and Victors Father (William Van Dort)

Mode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Neil Van Dort and William Van Dort are husband and wife. S: Victors Mother : Oh, beautiful, innit?

IS: Indah, bukan?S: Victors Father: It's not as big as our place, dear.IS: Tak semegah rumah kita, sayang.R: (Ini tak sebesar rumah kita, sayang. )

S: Victors Father : Bit shabby really, isn't it?IS: Sebenarnya agak kumuh, bukan?S: Victors Mother : Shut up.IS: diam.

Scene 6:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Discussing about Victors Marriage that will bring a victory to Van Dort family.

Tenor : Victor Van Dort and Victoria Everglot

Mode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Victoria and Victor dont know each other. They will marry because of their parents. S: Victor: Do forgive me.IS: Maafkan aku.

S: Victoria: You play beautifully.IS: Permainan piano bagus.R: (Kau memainkannya dengan indah)S: Victor : I... I... I do apologize, Miss Everglot.How rude of me to... Well...

IS: Maafkan aku, Nona Everglot. Aku tak sopan telah

S: Excuse me.

IS: Maaf.

S: Victoria: Mother won't let me near the piano.IS: Ibuku melarangku mendekati piano.R: (Ibuku tak mengizinkanku mendekati piano.

S: Music is improper for a young lady.

IS: Musik tak pantas bagi seorang gadis.

S: Too passionate, she says.

IS: Terlalu membangkitkan semangat, katanya.

S: Victor: If I may ask, Miss Everglot...

IS: Jika boleh aku bertanya, Nona Everglot.

S: ...where is your chaperon?

IS: Di mana pelayan Anda?

S: Victoria: Perhaps, in... In view of the circumstances...

IS: Mungkin sedang.. Kalau begitu R: (Mungkin sedang.. Mengingat keadaan S: ...you could call me Victoria.

IS: Kau boleh memanggilku Victoria.R: (Kau bisa memanggilku Victoria.)S: Victor: Yes, of course. Well...IS: Tentu saja.

S: Victoria...

IS: Victoria.. S: Victoria: Yes, Victor.

IS: Ya, Victor.

S: Victor: Tomorrow, we are to be m...

IS: Besok, kita akan

S: M... M...IS: M.M

S: Victoria: Married.

IS: Menikah. S: Victor: Yes. Married.IS: Ya, menikah.

S: Victoria: Since I was a child, I've... I've dreamt of my wedding day.IS: Sejak kecil, aku mengimpikan pernikahanku.R: (Sejak aku kecil, aku memimpikan hari pernikahanku)S: I always hoped to find someone. I was deeply in love with.IS: Aku berharap bisa menemukan pria yang amat kucintai.S: Someone to spend the rest of my life with.IS: Seseorang untuk berbagi hari tuaku.R: (Seseorang yang menemaniku di sisa hidupku.)

S: Silly, isn't it?

IS: Konyol, bukan?

S: Victor: Yes, silly.

IS: Ya, konyol.

S: No. No, not at all, no.

IS: Tidak. Sama sekali tidak konyol. R: (Tidak. Sama sekali tidak.)

S: Oh, dear. I'm sorry.

IS: Astaga. Maafkan aku.

S: Victorias Mother: What impropriety is this?IS: Ini sangat tak pantas. R: (Apa-apaan ini?)S: You shouldn't be alone together.IS: Kalian tak boleh berduaan.

S: Here it is, one minute before 5, and you're not at the rehearsal.

IS: Sekarang sudah hampir pukul 5 sore, dan kalian belum mulai berlatih.

S: Pastor Galswells is waiting. Come at once.IS: Pastor Galswells sudah menunggu. Cepatlah berangkat.

Scene 7:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Victor is regretting his fail in uttered the vow for marriage.

Tenor : Victor Van Dort and News Deliverer.

Mode: Spoken.

S: Victor: Oh, Victoria.IS: Oh, Victoria.

S: She must think I'm such a fool.

IS: Ia pasti menganggapku bodoh.

S: This day couldn't get any worse.IS: Itu yang terburuk untuk hari ini. R:(Hari ini jangan sampai lebih buruk lagi.)S: News Reporter: Hear ye, hear ye! Rehearsal in ruins as Van Dort boy causes chaos!IS: Perhatian! Latihan hancur karena putra Van Dort mengacaukannya.

S: Fishy fianc could be canned!IS: Tunangan ikan aneh mungkin harus dikalengkan!S: Everglots all fired up as Van Dort disaster ruins rehearsal!IS: Keluarga Everglot terbakar saat Van Dort mengacaukan latihan!

Scene 8:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Exercising in uttering vow.

Tenor : Victor Van DortMode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Victor meets a corpse, named Emily. They dont know each other. Victor is afraid to her. S: Victor: It really shouldn't be all that difficult.IS: Seharusnya itu tidak sulit.

R: (Sebenarnya itu tidak sulit.)

S: It's just a few simple vows.IS: Itu hanya ikrar sederhana.

S: With this hand, I will take your wine.IS: Dengan tangan ini, aku akan mengambil anggurmu.

S: No.

IS: Tidak.

S: With this hand...IS: Dengan tangan ini

S: ...I will cup your...IS: Aku akan meremas..

S: Oh, goodness, no.IS: Astaga, bukan.

S: With this...IS: Dengan..

S: With this...

IS: Dengan

S: With this candle, I will...IS: Dengan lilin ini, aku akan..

S: I will...IS: Aku akan

S: I will set your mother on fire.IS: Aku akan membakar ibumu. R: (Aku akan membuat ibumu terbakar.)S: Oh, it's no use.IS: Tak ada gunanya.

S: With this hand, I will lift your sorrows.IS: Dengan tangan ini, akan kusingkirkan deritamu.

S: Your cup will never empty, for I will be your wine.IS: Cawanmu tak akan kosong, Karena aku akan menjadi anggurmu.

S: Mrs. Everglot.IS: Ny. Everglot.

S: You look ravishing this evening.IS: Anda cantik sekali malam ini.

S: What's that, Mr. Everglot? Call you "Dad"? If you insist, sir.IS: Maaf, Ny. Everglot? Memanggil anda ayah? Jika anda memaksa.R: (Maaf, Tuan Everglot? Panggil anda ayah? Baiklah, Jika anda memaksa, tuan. )

S: With this candle, I will light your way in darkness.IS: Dengan lilin ini, kuterangi jalanmu di kegelapan.

S: With this ring...IS: Dengan cincin ini..

S: ...I ask you to be mine.IS: Aku meminangmu. (or,[CHOICE] Aku memintamu untuk menjadi milikku.)S: Emily : I do.IS: Aku bersedia.

S: Emily: You may kiss the bride.

IS: Kau boleh mencium pengantin wanitanya.

Scene 9:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Discussing about going to speak about Victors and Emilys marriage.

Tenor : Victor Van Dort and Emily

Mode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Victor doesnt really want to be with Emily. Emily just trusts Victor, because she thinks that she is already married to Victor.S: Emily : I spent so long in the darkness...IS: Begitu lama aku di dunia kegelapanR: (Aku terlalu lama berada dalam kegelapan.)S: ...Id almost forgotten how beautiful the moonlight is.

IS: .. aku hampir lupa indahnya sinar rembulan.

R: ( aku hampir lupa betapa indahnya sinar rembulan itu.)

S: Maggot: Hey, I think you dropped something.IS: Kau menjatuhkan sesuatu.R: (Aku rasa kau menjatuhkan sesuatu.)S: Victor: Hold on, hold on.IS: Sebentar, sebentar.

S: I think I should prepare Mother and Father for the big news.IS: Sebaiknya kupersiapkan orangtuaku untuk kabar bahagia ini.

S: I'll go ahead and you...IS: Aku pergi dulu, dan kau

S: ...wait here.

IS: tunggu disini.

S: Emily: Perfect. IS: Sempurna.

S: Victor : I won't be long.IS: Aku tak akan lama.

S: Stay right here. I'll be right back.IS: Tunggu disini. Aku segera kembali.

S: Emily : Okay.IS: Oke.

S: Victor: No peeking.IS: Jangan mengintip.

Scene 10:

RegisterScript (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and The Revision (R)

Field: Discussing about Victor married to a corpse.

Tenor : Victorias Mother (Macdiline Everglot), Victorias Father (Finis Everglot) and Victoria (The daughter of Macdiline Everglot)

Mode: Spoken.

Social Distance: Victoria Everglot is a daughter of Macdiline Everglot and Finis Everglot, which is a family with high social status. The relationship between parents and daughter are not really intimate. Even, Macdiline doesnt trust to Victoria.Hildegarde is a Victorias chaperon. She has intimate relationship to Victoria.S: Victoria: It's true, Mother!IS: Sungguh, Bu!

S: Victor is married to a dead woman.IS: Victor, menikahi gadis yang sudah mati.

S: I saw her. A corpse! Standing right here with Victor.IS: Aku melihatnya. Sebuah mayat. Ia berdiri disini bersama Victor.

S: Victorias Mother: Victor was in your room?IS: Victor memasuki kamarmu?

R: Victor berada di dalam kamarmu?

S: Victoria: I have to help him.IS: Aku harus menolongnya.

S: Victorias Mother: The scandal!IS: Itu skandal!

S: Hilgrade : Come sit in your chair, dearie., You're shaking like a leaf. (idiom)IS: Duduklah di kursimu, sayang. Kau gemetar.

R: Duduklah di kursimu, sayang. Kau gemetaran.S: Let Hilde fetch you a blanket.

IS: Biarkan Hilde mengambilkan selimut untukmu.

S: Victorias Mother: Fetch her a straitjacket! She's completely mad!

IS: Ambilkan dia baju pengikat ! Ia sudah gila!

S: Come, Hildegarde.

IS: Ayo, Hilgarde.

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