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Transitions
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In writing, a transition is the smooth progression from one idea to another. A good transition helps the reader see how ideas are connected.
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I jumped off the bus when I saw my friend waiting at the stop. I realized I left my bag on the bus.
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In writing, a transition is the smooth progression from one idea to another. A good transition helps the reader see how ideas are connected.
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I jumped off the bus when I saw my friend waiting at the stop. Later when I looked for my wallet, I realized I had left my bag on the bus.
I jumped off the bus when I saw my friend waiting at the stop. I realized I left my bag on the bus.
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In writing, a transition is the smooth progression from one idea to another. A good transition helps the reader see how ideas are connected.
Transitions can signal different types of relationships. Click the transitional relationship you want to explore.
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• Sequential Order
• Order of Importance
• Cause and Effect
• Spatial Order
• Comparison and Contrast
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Sequential Order
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Use transitions like these to show the sequence of time or steps in a process.
first
second
afterwards
next
last
during
then
soon
finally
already later
subsequently
at the same time
at the beginning
before
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Sequential Order
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Where could you add transitions to help make this sequence clearer?
Band practice is always the same. We tune our instruments. We practice songs we are working on, trying to improve our style. We start to learn a new piece, getting as far as we can before the hour is up. We play something we all know well to end on a positive note.
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These transitions indicate the progression of events during band practice.
Band practice is always the same. First, we tune our instruments. Then, we practice songs we are working on, trying to improve our style. Afterward, we start to learn a new piece, getting as far as we can before the hour is up. Finally, we play something we all know well to end on a positive note.
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Order of Importance
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Use words like these when you are trying to show the relative importance of people, places, things, or events.
•first
•second
•best
•worst
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•main
•more important
•most important
•least important
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When babysitting, remember that your purpose is to make sure the children stay safe. Plan activities so the children will have fun. Babysitters establish their authority by remaining calm and attentive. Don’t yell or lose your temper.
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Order of Importance
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When babysitting, remember that your main purpose is to make sure the children stay safe. Second, plan activities so the children will have fun. Babysitters best establish their authority by remaining calm and attentive. The worst thing you can do is yell or lose your temper.
These transitions stress the importance of some actions over other actions.
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Cause and Effect
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Transitional words can also show a cause-and-effect relationship.
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Cause and Effect
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In this example, the transition clarifies the effect of the first action (the cause).
I forgot to set my
alarm clock before
I went to bed.
I overslept and
was late for school.As a result,
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Transitional words can also show a cause-and-effect relationship.
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Cause and Effect
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Use transitional words and phrases like these to show relationships between events and their results.
as a result
consequently
so
because
since
for
therefore
thus
if...then
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The invention of e-mail has had a large impact on the way people communicate. Because of e-mail, people can send messages anywhere in the world quickly and easily—and receive a quick reply. Consequently, people make fewer phone calls and use regular mail less often.
What transitions in this paragraph point to the results that followed the invention of e-mail?
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The invention of e-mail has had a large impact on the way people communicate. Because of e-mail, people can send messages anywhere in the world quickly and easily—and receive a quick reply. Consequently, people make fewer phone calls and use regular mail less often.
What transitions in this paragraph point to the results that followed the invention of e-mail?
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The transitions highlight the cause-and-effect relationships.
was
invented.
people make
fewer phone
calls.
As a result,
people send
messages
anywhere.
Consequently,
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Spatial Order
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Use transitional words and phrases like these when describing details according to their position in space (front to back, near to far, top to bottom, and others).
above
below
behind
beneath
beside
down
in front of
in back of
to the right of
in the other direction
near
on top of to
under
over
past
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Spatial Order
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When I first saw the renovations at Grand Central Station in New York City, I was impressed by the building’s beauty. Above my head was a ceiling painted with the constellations. Beneath my feet was a polished marble floor, and behind the information desk was an enormous clock.
Which words point out the spatial relationships in this description?
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When I first saw the renovations at Grand Central Station in New York City, I was impressed by the building’s beauty. Above my head was a ceiling painted with the constellations. Beneath my feet was a polished marble floor, and behind the information desk was an enormous clock.
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Comparison and Contrast
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Use comparison and contrast transitions to signal the similarities and differences between people, places, things, or events.
but
however
unlike
in contrast
similarly
like
both
each
yet
although
even though
on the contrary
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Many people don’t realize the sun’s rays contain two types of ultraviolet radiation: UVA and UVB. Both can harm the skin, but they do so in different ways. UVA rays penetrate deep into the skin and can cause wrinkling and premature aging. Although UVB rays do not penetrate as deeply, they are more damaging because they cause burning and are linked to most skin cancers.
What words in the paragraph signal the comparisons and contrasts?
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Many people don’t realize the sun’s rays contain two types of ultraviolet radiation: UVA and UVB. Both can harm the skin, but they do so in different ways. UVA rays penetrate deep into the skin and can cause wrinkling and premature aging. Although UVB rays do not penetrate as deeply, they are more damaging because they cause burning and are linked to most skin cancers.
What words in the paragraph signal the comparisons and contrasts?
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