“The United Kingdom’s counter-terrorist strategy is known as Contest and is split into four...
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“The United Kingdom’s counter- terrorist strategy is known as Contest and is split into four works streams, known as Prevent, Pursue, Protect and Prepare. Provide a critical analysis of the Prevent wo by Herval Almenoar-Webster FILE T IME SUBMIT T ED 07-APR-2015 10:25PM SUBMISSION ID 42817683 WORD COUNT 2052 CHARACT ER COUNT 11753 PREVENT_ESSAY.DOCX (27.11K)
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“The United Kingdom’s counter-terrorist strategy is known asContest and is split into fourworks streams, known as
Prevent, Pursue, Protect andPrepare. Provide a criticalanalysis of the Prevent wo
by Herval Almenoar-Webster
FILE
TIME SUBMITTED 07-APR-2015 10:25PM
SUBMISSION ID 42817683
WORD COUNT 2052
CHARACTER COUNT 11753
PREVENT_ESSAY.DOCX (27.11K)
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FINAL GRADE
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“The United Kingdom’s counter-terrorist strategy is knownas Contest and is split into four works streams, known asPrevent, Pursue, Protect and Prepare. Provide a criticalanalysis of the Prevent woGRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
InstructorThis is a well-written essay with some goodcrit ical discussion about the negative impact thePrevent strategy is having on Muslimcommunities in the UK. You state the case welland provide a reasonable source of ref erencesto support your argument.
Whilst I f ound that the crit ical analysis of thenegative impact of Prevent on Muslimcommunities was ef f ective, I would like to haveseen the counter-argument which does existabout the good things Prevent has and is doing,in order to bring a better balance to your essay.Without giving each side an equal opportunity tostate their case, it will be dif f icult to provide abalanced crit ical analysis of the topic. Forexample, since the recent review of Prevent,additional f ocus is being placed on right-wingextremism, international impact of radicalisationthrough the internet and concerted ef f orts inworking with HE to support their work oncountering violent extremism. These were allcrit icisms of Prevent, which the Government istrying to address and could have been discussed.
Overall, a well written and presented essay and aclear structure throughout, linking one sectionwith the other ef f ectively.
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Good introductionA clear introduction that highlights the main points of the discussion to come, well.
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Shorten your paragraphsAvoid using long half -page paragraphs. Break them up into readable chunks.
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Comment 1You have repeated this point as made in page 3, but I am not clear of the point you aremaking about the 7/7 bombers: whether they ref ute of support the assumption that violentextremism is connected to Muslim communities?
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Comment 2You are making some good points here, but beware of over-reliance on one source to makethem. Use additional sources to either triangulate and support the view, or opposing viewsthat may provide the crit ical discourse on the subject.
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