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The First 50 Pages
Engage Agents Editors and Readers and Set Up Your Novel for Success
By Jeff Gerke
Seeking Writing Success Start at the Beginninghellip
(October 17 2011) ndash First
impressions are vital Compelling opening
scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and crucial
for keeping your reader engaged
The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong beginning right from
the start Often using movies as examples this informative and
entertaining
read
first
takes
you
inside
the
minds
of
acquisitions
editors
and
literary
agents
Then
Jeff
provides
readers
with
what
your
novelrsquos
first
50
pages
needs
to
accomplish
ndash
and
exactly
how
to
pull
it
off
Yoursquoll learn how to
introduce your main character
establish your story world
set up the plotrsquos conflict
begin
your
herorsquos
inner
journey
write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot amp Structure and The Art of
War for Writers
About the Authorhellip
Jeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books as the Operation
Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder
of
Marcher
Lord
Press
an
independent
publisher
US
$1699
(CAN
$1799) | 978‐1‐5996‐3283‐4 |
(W1819)
240
pages
Writerrsquos Digest Books a division F+W Media Inc
Available
November
2011
FOR
IMMEDIATE
RELEASE
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983124he FIRSTFIRSTIRST
FIRST P G SPAGES G S
PAGES
Jeff GerkeJeff Gerke
ENGAGE AGENTS EDITORS AND READERS
AND SET UP YOUR NOVEL FOR SUCCESS
ldquoFrom the insiderrsquos perspective everything theyrsquorenot telling you about your 1047297rst 50 pages Invaluablerdquo
mdashDONALD MAASS
Literary agent and author of Te Breakout Novelist
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[ VIII ]
FOREWORD
Te night I murdered Jeff Gerke was also the night he was reani-
mated rom the dead just so he could write this book
I trust my opening sentence has led you to this one Tatrsquos all
you have to do to write a hit novel afer all String enough sen-
tences together that compel the reader to read on and on until the
end and then yoursquore done
Simple isnrsquot it Sure like climbing Mount Everest is simple
But you can eventually scale the highest peak on the planet
with enough training and stamina and by remembering that the
whole ascension starts with the 1047297rst ew steps Just as writing a
great book begins with the 1047297rst 1047297fy pages
Which is where Jeff Gerke comes in
Jeff is an author himsel (see the novels o Jefferson Scott) but
also an editor and publisher He has thereore seen 1047297rst pages rom
all angles and knows whereo he speaks He speaks clearly in this
book on the subject o how to write that crucial opening material
You see you really only have two choices capture the reader
(or agent or editor) in those 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or donrsquot
Which do you choose
I thought so Jeff rsquos book is here to help you Hersquoll show youhow itrsquos done (and not done) so you can start up the mountain
with con1047297dence
Begin
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[ 1 ]
SUCH A YOUNG MAN
Bushy hair Narrow shoulders A thin man A little nerdy even
Hardly the sort of leading man we expect today
He looked almost shy as he thanked everyone who had spokenbefore him that day He stared at the ground or his shoes or the
notes before him His opening lines were awkward promising a
tedious interminable speech on a sweltering day under the Hous-
ton sun He fumbled with the lectern while delivering a line with
the unfortunate rhyming of knowledge and college
But when he started his speech in earnest the magic beganldquoWe set sail on this new sea because there is new knowledge to
be gainedrdquo he said Knowledge that ldquomust be won and used for the
progress of all people hellip Tere is no strife no prejudice no nation-
al con1047298ict in outer space as yet Its hazards are hostile to us all Its
conquest deserves the best of all mankindrdquo
It was September 12 1962 and John F Kennedy was stand-
ing in Rice University stadium delivering what became perhaps
his most famous speech With his words and with the force of
INTRO U TIONINTRODUCTION
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his will he was launching the US space program with the goal
o putting an American astronaut on the moon beore the end o
the decadeldquolsquoBut whyrsquo some say lsquochoose the moonrsquordquo he asked rhetorically
ldquolsquoWhy choose this as our goalrsquo And they might well ask lsquoWhy climb
the highest mountain Why thirty-1047297ve years ago 1047298y the Atlantic
Why does Rice play exasrsquordquo
Tis got the laugh it deserved Rice was known as a school or
intellectuals and their ootball team was routinely slaughtered byootball powerhouse Te University o exas But Jack raised his
voice and cut through their laughter uttering the lines that give
me chills even today
ldquoWe choose to go to the moon in this decade and do the other
thingsmdashnot because they are easy but because they are hardrdquo
Now their laughter turned to cheers He rode their joy and
turned it into an uproar
ldquoBecause that goal will serve to organize and measure the best
o our energies and skills Because that challenge is one that wersquore
willing to accept One we are unwilling to postpone And one we
intend to winrdquo
Te gooy young man with the strange accent and the unruly
hair had with def interplay o words and elements generated a
palpable energy in his listeners An energy that had existed in po-
tential orm but had remained only latent until he began
I he had asked that crowd to personally und the mission to
the moon at that very moment I believe they wouldrsquove done it Tey
wouldrsquove ound a way John F Kennedy ignited a movement that
day a orce that swept up not only his hearers but the nation and the
world and we are still reaping the energy o his vision to this day
Such is the power o a strong beginning
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bull WE CHOOSE TO GO TO THE MOON bullTe words you deploy in the 1047297rst pages o your novel can and must
have a similar power Tey must arrest the imagination o your
reader and 1047297re his vision so he will go with you through the tri-
als and triumphs o your story You want him right with you to in
JFKrsquos words eel the ground shake and the air shatter by the sheer
orce o your tale as i it is the greatest adventure on which man
has ever embarked
You want your novelrsquos launch to be as thrilling as the lifoff
o a Saturn C-1 booster rocket Whether itrsquos an adventure story a
horror novel a romantic comedy a cozy mystery or whatever else
you know your beginning must be strong or the reader will never
endure it long enough to get to the heart o your story
You may already know a bit about how the publishing process
works You know that a literary agent or an acquisitions editor at
a publishing house will decide the ate o your book based merely
on its opening pages
I you knew how little o a manuscript is read beore a publisher
chooses to accept or reject a book you might be appalled Usually
it is only one person the acquisitions editor who has read the book
rom start to 1047297nish beore a contract is offeredmdashor not All the other
eight or twelve executives have read perhaps only 1047297fy pages o the
book Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages Or ewer Maybe only the 1047297rst ten Tey
trust the editor or the rest
Most large publishing houses are closed to so-called unso-
licited submissions (manuscripts not sent to them by agents) So
beore your bookrsquos opening pages receive the scrutiny o a pub-
lishing housersquos executive committee they must pass muster by a
literary agent
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[ 4 ]
Agents receive thousands of manuscripts every year Some re-
ceive tens of thousands In an environment like that itrsquos simply
human nature that they look for ways to quickly get through oneproposal and get on to the next so they can reduce the slush pile
at least a little
Many of their rejections come easily Te author has not fol-
lowed the agencyrsquos writerrsquos guidelines or has sent a non1047297ction pro-
posal to an agent who accepts only 1047297ction But even with those
eliminated the stack of remaining manuscripts towers as high asa rocket on the launch pad
Some agents will read a proposal in the order itrsquos presented
cover letter one-sheet synopsis etc and then head to the sample
chapters Othersmdashthe 1047297ction-lovers mainlymdashwill skip everything
else and turn directly to page 1 of the chapters
At that point yoursquove got about ten seconds to hook this person
Remember shersquos looking for a reason to say no Not because shersquos an
ogre but because shersquos in a hurry She loves 1047297ction and she wants
to love your book and she must 1047297nd new authors to keep her own
business going but there are so many others waiting in linemdashmost
of them she knows will end up being klunkersmdashthat your book al-
ready has two strikes against it by the time she gets to page 1
So your page 1 had better rock
If your opening line manages to not offend her 1047297ction sensibili-
ties and if your opening paragraphs keep her with you shersquoll turn
to page 2 With these early pages yoursquore basically in a moment-by-
moment effort to skirt disaster with the agent or acquisitions edi-
tor Disaster being the rejection of your manuscript If you lose her
in those early pages yoursquove lost her permanently
Itrsquos like poor Westley in Te Princess Bride Every evening his
captor the Dread Pirate Roberts would send him to bed like this
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ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
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[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
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[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
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[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
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WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
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Bonus submission package checklist
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983124he FIRSTFIRSTIRST
FIRST P G SPAGES G S
PAGES
Jeff GerkeJeff Gerke
ENGAGE AGENTS EDITORS AND READERS
AND SET UP YOUR NOVEL FOR SUCCESS
ldquoFrom the insiderrsquos perspective everything theyrsquorenot telling you about your 1047297rst 50 pages Invaluablerdquo
mdashDONALD MAASS
Literary agent and author of Te Breakout Novelist
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[ VIII ]
FOREWORD
Te night I murdered Jeff Gerke was also the night he was reani-
mated rom the dead just so he could write this book
I trust my opening sentence has led you to this one Tatrsquos all
you have to do to write a hit novel afer all String enough sen-
tences together that compel the reader to read on and on until the
end and then yoursquore done
Simple isnrsquot it Sure like climbing Mount Everest is simple
But you can eventually scale the highest peak on the planet
with enough training and stamina and by remembering that the
whole ascension starts with the 1047297rst ew steps Just as writing a
great book begins with the 1047297rst 1047297fy pages
Which is where Jeff Gerke comes in
Jeff is an author himsel (see the novels o Jefferson Scott) but
also an editor and publisher He has thereore seen 1047297rst pages rom
all angles and knows whereo he speaks He speaks clearly in this
book on the subject o how to write that crucial opening material
You see you really only have two choices capture the reader
(or agent or editor) in those 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or donrsquot
Which do you choose
I thought so Jeff rsquos book is here to help you Hersquoll show youhow itrsquos done (and not done) so you can start up the mountain
with con1047297dence
Begin
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[ 1 ]
SUCH A YOUNG MAN
Bushy hair Narrow shoulders A thin man A little nerdy even
Hardly the sort of leading man we expect today
He looked almost shy as he thanked everyone who had spokenbefore him that day He stared at the ground or his shoes or the
notes before him His opening lines were awkward promising a
tedious interminable speech on a sweltering day under the Hous-
ton sun He fumbled with the lectern while delivering a line with
the unfortunate rhyming of knowledge and college
But when he started his speech in earnest the magic beganldquoWe set sail on this new sea because there is new knowledge to
be gainedrdquo he said Knowledge that ldquomust be won and used for the
progress of all people hellip Tere is no strife no prejudice no nation-
al con1047298ict in outer space as yet Its hazards are hostile to us all Its
conquest deserves the best of all mankindrdquo
It was September 12 1962 and John F Kennedy was stand-
ing in Rice University stadium delivering what became perhaps
his most famous speech With his words and with the force of
INTRO U TIONINTRODUCTION
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 2 ]
his will he was launching the US space program with the goal
o putting an American astronaut on the moon beore the end o
the decadeldquolsquoBut whyrsquo some say lsquochoose the moonrsquordquo he asked rhetorically
ldquolsquoWhy choose this as our goalrsquo And they might well ask lsquoWhy climb
the highest mountain Why thirty-1047297ve years ago 1047298y the Atlantic
Why does Rice play exasrsquordquo
Tis got the laugh it deserved Rice was known as a school or
intellectuals and their ootball team was routinely slaughtered byootball powerhouse Te University o exas But Jack raised his
voice and cut through their laughter uttering the lines that give
me chills even today
ldquoWe choose to go to the moon in this decade and do the other
thingsmdashnot because they are easy but because they are hardrdquo
Now their laughter turned to cheers He rode their joy and
turned it into an uproar
ldquoBecause that goal will serve to organize and measure the best
o our energies and skills Because that challenge is one that wersquore
willing to accept One we are unwilling to postpone And one we
intend to winrdquo
Te gooy young man with the strange accent and the unruly
hair had with def interplay o words and elements generated a
palpable energy in his listeners An energy that had existed in po-
tential orm but had remained only latent until he began
I he had asked that crowd to personally und the mission to
the moon at that very moment I believe they wouldrsquove done it Tey
wouldrsquove ound a way John F Kennedy ignited a movement that
day a orce that swept up not only his hearers but the nation and the
world and we are still reaping the energy o his vision to this day
Such is the power o a strong beginning
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[ 3 ]
bull WE CHOOSE TO GO TO THE MOON bullTe words you deploy in the 1047297rst pages o your novel can and must
have a similar power Tey must arrest the imagination o your
reader and 1047297re his vision so he will go with you through the tri-
als and triumphs o your story You want him right with you to in
JFKrsquos words eel the ground shake and the air shatter by the sheer
orce o your tale as i it is the greatest adventure on which man
has ever embarked
You want your novelrsquos launch to be as thrilling as the lifoff
o a Saturn C-1 booster rocket Whether itrsquos an adventure story a
horror novel a romantic comedy a cozy mystery or whatever else
you know your beginning must be strong or the reader will never
endure it long enough to get to the heart o your story
You may already know a bit about how the publishing process
works You know that a literary agent or an acquisitions editor at
a publishing house will decide the ate o your book based merely
on its opening pages
I you knew how little o a manuscript is read beore a publisher
chooses to accept or reject a book you might be appalled Usually
it is only one person the acquisitions editor who has read the book
rom start to 1047297nish beore a contract is offeredmdashor not All the other
eight or twelve executives have read perhaps only 1047297fy pages o the
book Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages Or ewer Maybe only the 1047297rst ten Tey
trust the editor or the rest
Most large publishing houses are closed to so-called unso-
licited submissions (manuscripts not sent to them by agents) So
beore your bookrsquos opening pages receive the scrutiny o a pub-
lishing housersquos executive committee they must pass muster by a
literary agent
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[ 4 ]
Agents receive thousands of manuscripts every year Some re-
ceive tens of thousands In an environment like that itrsquos simply
human nature that they look for ways to quickly get through oneproposal and get on to the next so they can reduce the slush pile
at least a little
Many of their rejections come easily Te author has not fol-
lowed the agencyrsquos writerrsquos guidelines or has sent a non1047297ction pro-
posal to an agent who accepts only 1047297ction But even with those
eliminated the stack of remaining manuscripts towers as high asa rocket on the launch pad
Some agents will read a proposal in the order itrsquos presented
cover letter one-sheet synopsis etc and then head to the sample
chapters Othersmdashthe 1047297ction-lovers mainlymdashwill skip everything
else and turn directly to page 1 of the chapters
At that point yoursquove got about ten seconds to hook this person
Remember shersquos looking for a reason to say no Not because shersquos an
ogre but because shersquos in a hurry She loves 1047297ction and she wants
to love your book and she must 1047297nd new authors to keep her own
business going but there are so many others waiting in linemdashmost
of them she knows will end up being klunkersmdashthat your book al-
ready has two strikes against it by the time she gets to page 1
So your page 1 had better rock
If your opening line manages to not offend her 1047297ction sensibili-
ties and if your opening paragraphs keep her with you shersquoll turn
to page 2 With these early pages yoursquore basically in a moment-by-
moment effort to skirt disaster with the agent or acquisitions edi-
tor Disaster being the rejection of your manuscript If you lose her
in those early pages yoursquove lost her permanently
Itrsquos like poor Westley in Te Princess Bride Every evening his
captor the Dread Pirate Roberts would send him to bed like this
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[ 5 ]
ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
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[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
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[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
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[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
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why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
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WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
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FOREWORD
Te night I murdered Jeff Gerke was also the night he was reani-
mated rom the dead just so he could write this book
I trust my opening sentence has led you to this one Tatrsquos all
you have to do to write a hit novel afer all String enough sen-
tences together that compel the reader to read on and on until the
end and then yoursquore done
Simple isnrsquot it Sure like climbing Mount Everest is simple
But you can eventually scale the highest peak on the planet
with enough training and stamina and by remembering that the
whole ascension starts with the 1047297rst ew steps Just as writing a
great book begins with the 1047297rst 1047297fy pages
Which is where Jeff Gerke comes in
Jeff is an author himsel (see the novels o Jefferson Scott) but
also an editor and publisher He has thereore seen 1047297rst pages rom
all angles and knows whereo he speaks He speaks clearly in this
book on the subject o how to write that crucial opening material
You see you really only have two choices capture the reader
(or agent or editor) in those 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or donrsquot
Which do you choose
I thought so Jeff rsquos book is here to help you Hersquoll show youhow itrsquos done (and not done) so you can start up the mountain
with con1047297dence
Begin
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[ 1 ]
SUCH A YOUNG MAN
Bushy hair Narrow shoulders A thin man A little nerdy even
Hardly the sort of leading man we expect today
He looked almost shy as he thanked everyone who had spokenbefore him that day He stared at the ground or his shoes or the
notes before him His opening lines were awkward promising a
tedious interminable speech on a sweltering day under the Hous-
ton sun He fumbled with the lectern while delivering a line with
the unfortunate rhyming of knowledge and college
But when he started his speech in earnest the magic beganldquoWe set sail on this new sea because there is new knowledge to
be gainedrdquo he said Knowledge that ldquomust be won and used for the
progress of all people hellip Tere is no strife no prejudice no nation-
al con1047298ict in outer space as yet Its hazards are hostile to us all Its
conquest deserves the best of all mankindrdquo
It was September 12 1962 and John F Kennedy was stand-
ing in Rice University stadium delivering what became perhaps
his most famous speech With his words and with the force of
INTRO U TIONINTRODUCTION
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[ 2 ]
his will he was launching the US space program with the goal
o putting an American astronaut on the moon beore the end o
the decadeldquolsquoBut whyrsquo some say lsquochoose the moonrsquordquo he asked rhetorically
ldquolsquoWhy choose this as our goalrsquo And they might well ask lsquoWhy climb
the highest mountain Why thirty-1047297ve years ago 1047298y the Atlantic
Why does Rice play exasrsquordquo
Tis got the laugh it deserved Rice was known as a school or
intellectuals and their ootball team was routinely slaughtered byootball powerhouse Te University o exas But Jack raised his
voice and cut through their laughter uttering the lines that give
me chills even today
ldquoWe choose to go to the moon in this decade and do the other
thingsmdashnot because they are easy but because they are hardrdquo
Now their laughter turned to cheers He rode their joy and
turned it into an uproar
ldquoBecause that goal will serve to organize and measure the best
o our energies and skills Because that challenge is one that wersquore
willing to accept One we are unwilling to postpone And one we
intend to winrdquo
Te gooy young man with the strange accent and the unruly
hair had with def interplay o words and elements generated a
palpable energy in his listeners An energy that had existed in po-
tential orm but had remained only latent until he began
I he had asked that crowd to personally und the mission to
the moon at that very moment I believe they wouldrsquove done it Tey
wouldrsquove ound a way John F Kennedy ignited a movement that
day a orce that swept up not only his hearers but the nation and the
world and we are still reaping the energy o his vision to this day
Such is the power o a strong beginning
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[ 3 ]
bull WE CHOOSE TO GO TO THE MOON bullTe words you deploy in the 1047297rst pages o your novel can and must
have a similar power Tey must arrest the imagination o your
reader and 1047297re his vision so he will go with you through the tri-
als and triumphs o your story You want him right with you to in
JFKrsquos words eel the ground shake and the air shatter by the sheer
orce o your tale as i it is the greatest adventure on which man
has ever embarked
You want your novelrsquos launch to be as thrilling as the lifoff
o a Saturn C-1 booster rocket Whether itrsquos an adventure story a
horror novel a romantic comedy a cozy mystery or whatever else
you know your beginning must be strong or the reader will never
endure it long enough to get to the heart o your story
You may already know a bit about how the publishing process
works You know that a literary agent or an acquisitions editor at
a publishing house will decide the ate o your book based merely
on its opening pages
I you knew how little o a manuscript is read beore a publisher
chooses to accept or reject a book you might be appalled Usually
it is only one person the acquisitions editor who has read the book
rom start to 1047297nish beore a contract is offeredmdashor not All the other
eight or twelve executives have read perhaps only 1047297fy pages o the
book Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages Or ewer Maybe only the 1047297rst ten Tey
trust the editor or the rest
Most large publishing houses are closed to so-called unso-
licited submissions (manuscripts not sent to them by agents) So
beore your bookrsquos opening pages receive the scrutiny o a pub-
lishing housersquos executive committee they must pass muster by a
literary agent
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[ 4 ]
Agents receive thousands of manuscripts every year Some re-
ceive tens of thousands In an environment like that itrsquos simply
human nature that they look for ways to quickly get through oneproposal and get on to the next so they can reduce the slush pile
at least a little
Many of their rejections come easily Te author has not fol-
lowed the agencyrsquos writerrsquos guidelines or has sent a non1047297ction pro-
posal to an agent who accepts only 1047297ction But even with those
eliminated the stack of remaining manuscripts towers as high asa rocket on the launch pad
Some agents will read a proposal in the order itrsquos presented
cover letter one-sheet synopsis etc and then head to the sample
chapters Othersmdashthe 1047297ction-lovers mainlymdashwill skip everything
else and turn directly to page 1 of the chapters
At that point yoursquove got about ten seconds to hook this person
Remember shersquos looking for a reason to say no Not because shersquos an
ogre but because shersquos in a hurry She loves 1047297ction and she wants
to love your book and she must 1047297nd new authors to keep her own
business going but there are so many others waiting in linemdashmost
of them she knows will end up being klunkersmdashthat your book al-
ready has two strikes against it by the time she gets to page 1
So your page 1 had better rock
If your opening line manages to not offend her 1047297ction sensibili-
ties and if your opening paragraphs keep her with you shersquoll turn
to page 2 With these early pages yoursquore basically in a moment-by-
moment effort to skirt disaster with the agent or acquisitions edi-
tor Disaster being the rejection of your manuscript If you lose her
in those early pages yoursquove lost her permanently
Itrsquos like poor Westley in Te Princess Bride Every evening his
captor the Dread Pirate Roberts would send him to bed like this
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[ 5 ]
ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
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[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
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[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
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why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
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WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
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[ 1 ]
SUCH A YOUNG MAN
Bushy hair Narrow shoulders A thin man A little nerdy even
Hardly the sort of leading man we expect today
He looked almost shy as he thanked everyone who had spokenbefore him that day He stared at the ground or his shoes or the
notes before him His opening lines were awkward promising a
tedious interminable speech on a sweltering day under the Hous-
ton sun He fumbled with the lectern while delivering a line with
the unfortunate rhyming of knowledge and college
But when he started his speech in earnest the magic beganldquoWe set sail on this new sea because there is new knowledge to
be gainedrdquo he said Knowledge that ldquomust be won and used for the
progress of all people hellip Tere is no strife no prejudice no nation-
al con1047298ict in outer space as yet Its hazards are hostile to us all Its
conquest deserves the best of all mankindrdquo
It was September 12 1962 and John F Kennedy was stand-
ing in Rice University stadium delivering what became perhaps
his most famous speech With his words and with the force of
INTRO U TIONINTRODUCTION
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his will he was launching the US space program with the goal
o putting an American astronaut on the moon beore the end o
the decadeldquolsquoBut whyrsquo some say lsquochoose the moonrsquordquo he asked rhetorically
ldquolsquoWhy choose this as our goalrsquo And they might well ask lsquoWhy climb
the highest mountain Why thirty-1047297ve years ago 1047298y the Atlantic
Why does Rice play exasrsquordquo
Tis got the laugh it deserved Rice was known as a school or
intellectuals and their ootball team was routinely slaughtered byootball powerhouse Te University o exas But Jack raised his
voice and cut through their laughter uttering the lines that give
me chills even today
ldquoWe choose to go to the moon in this decade and do the other
thingsmdashnot because they are easy but because they are hardrdquo
Now their laughter turned to cheers He rode their joy and
turned it into an uproar
ldquoBecause that goal will serve to organize and measure the best
o our energies and skills Because that challenge is one that wersquore
willing to accept One we are unwilling to postpone And one we
intend to winrdquo
Te gooy young man with the strange accent and the unruly
hair had with def interplay o words and elements generated a
palpable energy in his listeners An energy that had existed in po-
tential orm but had remained only latent until he began
I he had asked that crowd to personally und the mission to
the moon at that very moment I believe they wouldrsquove done it Tey
wouldrsquove ound a way John F Kennedy ignited a movement that
day a orce that swept up not only his hearers but the nation and the
world and we are still reaping the energy o his vision to this day
Such is the power o a strong beginning
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bull WE CHOOSE TO GO TO THE MOON bullTe words you deploy in the 1047297rst pages o your novel can and must
have a similar power Tey must arrest the imagination o your
reader and 1047297re his vision so he will go with you through the tri-
als and triumphs o your story You want him right with you to in
JFKrsquos words eel the ground shake and the air shatter by the sheer
orce o your tale as i it is the greatest adventure on which man
has ever embarked
You want your novelrsquos launch to be as thrilling as the lifoff
o a Saturn C-1 booster rocket Whether itrsquos an adventure story a
horror novel a romantic comedy a cozy mystery or whatever else
you know your beginning must be strong or the reader will never
endure it long enough to get to the heart o your story
You may already know a bit about how the publishing process
works You know that a literary agent or an acquisitions editor at
a publishing house will decide the ate o your book based merely
on its opening pages
I you knew how little o a manuscript is read beore a publisher
chooses to accept or reject a book you might be appalled Usually
it is only one person the acquisitions editor who has read the book
rom start to 1047297nish beore a contract is offeredmdashor not All the other
eight or twelve executives have read perhaps only 1047297fy pages o the
book Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages Or ewer Maybe only the 1047297rst ten Tey
trust the editor or the rest
Most large publishing houses are closed to so-called unso-
licited submissions (manuscripts not sent to them by agents) So
beore your bookrsquos opening pages receive the scrutiny o a pub-
lishing housersquos executive committee they must pass muster by a
literary agent
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[ 4 ]
Agents receive thousands of manuscripts every year Some re-
ceive tens of thousands In an environment like that itrsquos simply
human nature that they look for ways to quickly get through oneproposal and get on to the next so they can reduce the slush pile
at least a little
Many of their rejections come easily Te author has not fol-
lowed the agencyrsquos writerrsquos guidelines or has sent a non1047297ction pro-
posal to an agent who accepts only 1047297ction But even with those
eliminated the stack of remaining manuscripts towers as high asa rocket on the launch pad
Some agents will read a proposal in the order itrsquos presented
cover letter one-sheet synopsis etc and then head to the sample
chapters Othersmdashthe 1047297ction-lovers mainlymdashwill skip everything
else and turn directly to page 1 of the chapters
At that point yoursquove got about ten seconds to hook this person
Remember shersquos looking for a reason to say no Not because shersquos an
ogre but because shersquos in a hurry She loves 1047297ction and she wants
to love your book and she must 1047297nd new authors to keep her own
business going but there are so many others waiting in linemdashmost
of them she knows will end up being klunkersmdashthat your book al-
ready has two strikes against it by the time she gets to page 1
So your page 1 had better rock
If your opening line manages to not offend her 1047297ction sensibili-
ties and if your opening paragraphs keep her with you shersquoll turn
to page 2 With these early pages yoursquore basically in a moment-by-
moment effort to skirt disaster with the agent or acquisitions edi-
tor Disaster being the rejection of your manuscript If you lose her
in those early pages yoursquove lost her permanently
Itrsquos like poor Westley in Te Princess Bride Every evening his
captor the Dread Pirate Roberts would send him to bed like this
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ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
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[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
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INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
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[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
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WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
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781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
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[ 2 ]
his will he was launching the US space program with the goal
o putting an American astronaut on the moon beore the end o
the decadeldquolsquoBut whyrsquo some say lsquochoose the moonrsquordquo he asked rhetorically
ldquolsquoWhy choose this as our goalrsquo And they might well ask lsquoWhy climb
the highest mountain Why thirty-1047297ve years ago 1047298y the Atlantic
Why does Rice play exasrsquordquo
Tis got the laugh it deserved Rice was known as a school or
intellectuals and their ootball team was routinely slaughtered byootball powerhouse Te University o exas But Jack raised his
voice and cut through their laughter uttering the lines that give
me chills even today
ldquoWe choose to go to the moon in this decade and do the other
thingsmdashnot because they are easy but because they are hardrdquo
Now their laughter turned to cheers He rode their joy and
turned it into an uproar
ldquoBecause that goal will serve to organize and measure the best
o our energies and skills Because that challenge is one that wersquore
willing to accept One we are unwilling to postpone And one we
intend to winrdquo
Te gooy young man with the strange accent and the unruly
hair had with def interplay o words and elements generated a
palpable energy in his listeners An energy that had existed in po-
tential orm but had remained only latent until he began
I he had asked that crowd to personally und the mission to
the moon at that very moment I believe they wouldrsquove done it Tey
wouldrsquove ound a way John F Kennedy ignited a movement that
day a orce that swept up not only his hearers but the nation and the
world and we are still reaping the energy o his vision to this day
Such is the power o a strong beginning
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bull WE CHOOSE TO GO TO THE MOON bullTe words you deploy in the 1047297rst pages o your novel can and must
have a similar power Tey must arrest the imagination o your
reader and 1047297re his vision so he will go with you through the tri-
als and triumphs o your story You want him right with you to in
JFKrsquos words eel the ground shake and the air shatter by the sheer
orce o your tale as i it is the greatest adventure on which man
has ever embarked
You want your novelrsquos launch to be as thrilling as the lifoff
o a Saturn C-1 booster rocket Whether itrsquos an adventure story a
horror novel a romantic comedy a cozy mystery or whatever else
you know your beginning must be strong or the reader will never
endure it long enough to get to the heart o your story
You may already know a bit about how the publishing process
works You know that a literary agent or an acquisitions editor at
a publishing house will decide the ate o your book based merely
on its opening pages
I you knew how little o a manuscript is read beore a publisher
chooses to accept or reject a book you might be appalled Usually
it is only one person the acquisitions editor who has read the book
rom start to 1047297nish beore a contract is offeredmdashor not All the other
eight or twelve executives have read perhaps only 1047297fy pages o the
book Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages Or ewer Maybe only the 1047297rst ten Tey
trust the editor or the rest
Most large publishing houses are closed to so-called unso-
licited submissions (manuscripts not sent to them by agents) So
beore your bookrsquos opening pages receive the scrutiny o a pub-
lishing housersquos executive committee they must pass muster by a
literary agent
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[ 4 ]
Agents receive thousands of manuscripts every year Some re-
ceive tens of thousands In an environment like that itrsquos simply
human nature that they look for ways to quickly get through oneproposal and get on to the next so they can reduce the slush pile
at least a little
Many of their rejections come easily Te author has not fol-
lowed the agencyrsquos writerrsquos guidelines or has sent a non1047297ction pro-
posal to an agent who accepts only 1047297ction But even with those
eliminated the stack of remaining manuscripts towers as high asa rocket on the launch pad
Some agents will read a proposal in the order itrsquos presented
cover letter one-sheet synopsis etc and then head to the sample
chapters Othersmdashthe 1047297ction-lovers mainlymdashwill skip everything
else and turn directly to page 1 of the chapters
At that point yoursquove got about ten seconds to hook this person
Remember shersquos looking for a reason to say no Not because shersquos an
ogre but because shersquos in a hurry She loves 1047297ction and she wants
to love your book and she must 1047297nd new authors to keep her own
business going but there are so many others waiting in linemdashmost
of them she knows will end up being klunkersmdashthat your book al-
ready has two strikes against it by the time she gets to page 1
So your page 1 had better rock
If your opening line manages to not offend her 1047297ction sensibili-
ties and if your opening paragraphs keep her with you shersquoll turn
to page 2 With these early pages yoursquore basically in a moment-by-
moment effort to skirt disaster with the agent or acquisitions edi-
tor Disaster being the rejection of your manuscript If you lose her
in those early pages yoursquove lost her permanently
Itrsquos like poor Westley in Te Princess Bride Every evening his
captor the Dread Pirate Roberts would send him to bed like this
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[ 5 ]
ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
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going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
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ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
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[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
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INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
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WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
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INTRODUCTION
[ 3 ]
bull WE CHOOSE TO GO TO THE MOON bullTe words you deploy in the 1047297rst pages o your novel can and must
have a similar power Tey must arrest the imagination o your
reader and 1047297re his vision so he will go with you through the tri-
als and triumphs o your story You want him right with you to in
JFKrsquos words eel the ground shake and the air shatter by the sheer
orce o your tale as i it is the greatest adventure on which man
has ever embarked
You want your novelrsquos launch to be as thrilling as the lifoff
o a Saturn C-1 booster rocket Whether itrsquos an adventure story a
horror novel a romantic comedy a cozy mystery or whatever else
you know your beginning must be strong or the reader will never
endure it long enough to get to the heart o your story
You may already know a bit about how the publishing process
works You know that a literary agent or an acquisitions editor at
a publishing house will decide the ate o your book based merely
on its opening pages
I you knew how little o a manuscript is read beore a publisher
chooses to accept or reject a book you might be appalled Usually
it is only one person the acquisitions editor who has read the book
rom start to 1047297nish beore a contract is offeredmdashor not All the other
eight or twelve executives have read perhaps only 1047297fy pages o the
book Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages Or ewer Maybe only the 1047297rst ten Tey
trust the editor or the rest
Most large publishing houses are closed to so-called unso-
licited submissions (manuscripts not sent to them by agents) So
beore your bookrsquos opening pages receive the scrutiny o a pub-
lishing housersquos executive committee they must pass muster by a
literary agent
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[ 4 ]
Agents receive thousands of manuscripts every year Some re-
ceive tens of thousands In an environment like that itrsquos simply
human nature that they look for ways to quickly get through oneproposal and get on to the next so they can reduce the slush pile
at least a little
Many of their rejections come easily Te author has not fol-
lowed the agencyrsquos writerrsquos guidelines or has sent a non1047297ction pro-
posal to an agent who accepts only 1047297ction But even with those
eliminated the stack of remaining manuscripts towers as high asa rocket on the launch pad
Some agents will read a proposal in the order itrsquos presented
cover letter one-sheet synopsis etc and then head to the sample
chapters Othersmdashthe 1047297ction-lovers mainlymdashwill skip everything
else and turn directly to page 1 of the chapters
At that point yoursquove got about ten seconds to hook this person
Remember shersquos looking for a reason to say no Not because shersquos an
ogre but because shersquos in a hurry She loves 1047297ction and she wants
to love your book and she must 1047297nd new authors to keep her own
business going but there are so many others waiting in linemdashmost
of them she knows will end up being klunkersmdashthat your book al-
ready has two strikes against it by the time she gets to page 1
So your page 1 had better rock
If your opening line manages to not offend her 1047297ction sensibili-
ties and if your opening paragraphs keep her with you shersquoll turn
to page 2 With these early pages yoursquore basically in a moment-by-
moment effort to skirt disaster with the agent or acquisitions edi-
tor Disaster being the rejection of your manuscript If you lose her
in those early pages yoursquove lost her permanently
Itrsquos like poor Westley in Te Princess Bride Every evening his
captor the Dread Pirate Roberts would send him to bed like this
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INTRODUCTION
[ 5 ]
ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
842019 The First 50 Pages
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INTRODUCTION
[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
842019 The First 50 Pages
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INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
842019 The First 50 Pages
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INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
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WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
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Bonus submission package checklist
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[ 4 ]
Agents receive thousands of manuscripts every year Some re-
ceive tens of thousands In an environment like that itrsquos simply
human nature that they look for ways to quickly get through oneproposal and get on to the next so they can reduce the slush pile
at least a little
Many of their rejections come easily Te author has not fol-
lowed the agencyrsquos writerrsquos guidelines or has sent a non1047297ction pro-
posal to an agent who accepts only 1047297ction But even with those
eliminated the stack of remaining manuscripts towers as high asa rocket on the launch pad
Some agents will read a proposal in the order itrsquos presented
cover letter one-sheet synopsis etc and then head to the sample
chapters Othersmdashthe 1047297ction-lovers mainlymdashwill skip everything
else and turn directly to page 1 of the chapters
At that point yoursquove got about ten seconds to hook this person
Remember shersquos looking for a reason to say no Not because shersquos an
ogre but because shersquos in a hurry She loves 1047297ction and she wants
to love your book and she must 1047297nd new authors to keep her own
business going but there are so many others waiting in linemdashmost
of them she knows will end up being klunkersmdashthat your book al-
ready has two strikes against it by the time she gets to page 1
So your page 1 had better rock
If your opening line manages to not offend her 1047297ction sensibili-
ties and if your opening paragraphs keep her with you shersquoll turn
to page 2 With these early pages yoursquore basically in a moment-by-
moment effort to skirt disaster with the agent or acquisitions edi-
tor Disaster being the rejection of your manuscript If you lose her
in those early pages yoursquove lost her permanently
Itrsquos like poor Westley in Te Princess Bride Every evening his
captor the Dread Pirate Roberts would send him to bed like this
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[ 5 ]
ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 915
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1015
INTRODUCTION
[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1215
INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1315
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1415
INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
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INTRODUCTION
[ 5 ]
ldquoGood night Westley Good work Sleep well Irsquoll most likely kill you
in the morningrdquo With every line paragraph and page the agent
or editor is most likely going to kill your book in the morning It isyour task to ldquostay aliverdquo as long as possible o the very end if you
can because thatrsquos where glory awaits
Itrsquos not only agents and editors whom you must keep on the
good side of Te same is true of your reader Yoursquore trying to keep a
very busy person from doing one of the hundred things he ought to
be doingmdashor one of the many V shows he wants to be watchingmdashso he will read your book to the end Enough missteps and the spell
will be broken and something else will capture his attention
Years ago I was looking for a new novel to read So I went to
the library and plucked off the new releases shelf ten books that
looked interesting I took them all to a table and opened them one
by one I was looking to be engaged Hooked Arrested by how the
book began Most of them failed utterly Tey began with back-
story exposition or something else utterly dull Or their language
was obtuse showy or any of a hundred other things that soured
the book for me
Granted much of that is subjective and therersquos no way you can
anticipate and please every reader But the point was that I was a
reader wanting to be hooked by the novelrsquos opening and most of
them botched it So I put them all back on the shelf and went home
with the one that grabbed me
What is your situation Have you been told that your open-
ings tend to be weak Do you sense that your whole book has gone
wrong and you have a hunch that it got off course at the outset
Are you paralyzed because you want to start your novel off right
but you donrsquot know how Or maybe yoursquore hoping this book will
write the opening for you
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
842019 The First 50 Pages
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INTRODUCTION
[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1115
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1215
INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1315
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1415
INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 915
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 6 ]
Irsquom like that As I was writing this book I was also in the midst
o changing how I ran the accounting or the small indie press I
ounded Irsquod been running it off a spreadsheet but afer our 1047297rsttwo years the thing had just gotten to be unwieldy It took me a week
every time I had to 1047297gure royalties or pay taxes It was aggravating
So at the recommendation o counselors I decided to transition
rom a spreadsheet to a database (Donrsquot let your eyes glaze overmdashI
really am heading to a point)
I purchased a very good database program and began 1047297g-uring out how to run my publishing company rom it It wasnrsquot
long beore I ended up in a terrible 1047297x I had tapped none o the
strengths o the database and couldnrsquot 1047297gure out how to do any o
the things in a database that the spreadsheet program had done
so easily Irsquod lost way too much time in the effort and I was now
orced to run the business on both a database and the old spread-
sheet It was maddening
So I did what any sensible person would do I went online to
Amazoncom I ound a terri1047297c book on how to master the database
program I was using I read all the reviews and decided to take the
plungemdasheven cashing in an Amazon gif card to do it
Anxiously I waited by the mailbox When would the magical
book come and solve all my problems I could hold on until then
couldnrsquot I
Finally it came I ripped open the smiley ace box and pulled
out the talisman It was indeed a tome Hal the weight o my toddler
daughter I reckoned Surely the answers were here I was saved
I set it on my desk beore my computer monitor and waited
And waited
Slowly it dawned on me that I might have all the answers beore
me but the book wasnrsquot going to solve my problems all by itsel I was
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1015
INTRODUCTION
[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1115
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1215
INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1315
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1415
INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
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INTRODUCTION
[ 7 ]
going to have to open that beast and actually read it Read it It was
1300 pages long or crying out loud And a bonus CD with 600 more
pages What had I been thinking Where is my trusty spreadsheet[bangs head on desk]
My wersquove come a long way rom JFK to head-banging havenrsquot
we And in such a short time
Anyway I am saddened to inorm you that wonderul as this
book may be it will not write your 1047297rst 1047297fy pages or you
However i I do my job right this book will energize you withall the electricity o a stirring speech and you will ride the surge o
inspiration all the way through those opening pagesmdashand beyond
Because we choose to go to the moon Not because it is easy but be-
cause it is hard And because as Eugene F Ware said ldquoAll glory
comes rom daring to beginrdquo
bull IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE WORD bullYour novel can have a tremendous launchmdashnot just so agents and
editors will keep reading and not even so readers will stay with you
but so it will be strong as a work o literature Structurally the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages your o book have to accomplish certain objectives or
the oundation will be weak
You have to engage your reader 1047297rst and oremost You have to
introduce your hero You have to establish the context o the story
You must reveal the genre and milieu and story world You have
to set up the tone o the book Yoursquoll also be presenting the stakes
introducing the antagonist establishing the herorsquos desires start-
ing the main characterrsquos inner journey and getting a ticking time
bomb to start ticking down
And you want to do all these things without boring your reader
losing your reader dumping backstory on your reader misleading
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1215
INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1315
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1415
INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1115
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 8 ]
your reader insulting your readerrsquos intelligence or tipping your
hand to your reader
Te 1047297rst 1047297fy pages o your book are so important to get right thatitrsquos tempting to say they are the most important pages in the manu-
script And yet they are in a sense merely the ront work you have to
do to get to the real heart o your story which takes place in Act 2
I recently bought my 1047297rst Kindle e-reader Te box it came in
was itsel the beginning o a storymdashthe tear-off strip or getting in-
side the box actually said ldquoOnce upon a time helliprdquo on it As I lifedthe lid and beheld the masterul presentation o the device so lov-
ingly nestled inside I elt the thrill o beginning a novel I just knew
I was going to love It was an undiscovered country terra incognita
yet a1047297re with possibilities
Tatrsquos the effect Irsquom going to teach you to achieve with the 1047297rst
1047297fy pages o your novel
bull WHO IS THIS PERSON bullSome readers donrsquot eel a curiosity about who has written a given
non1047297ction bookmdashthey just want to get to the good stuff inside Irsquom
that way sometimes depending on the book Other times I want
to know who this person is who thinks he has something to teach
me on this subject In case thatrsquos how yoursquore eeling this time I o-
er a brie introduction to Jeff Gerke
I entered the publishing industry in 1994 when I received a
three-book deal to write a series o near-uture technothrillers I
have now had six o my novels published (under the pen name Je-
erson Scott) plus another six or so non1047297ction books on a variety
o topics including three on 1047297ction crafsmanship
I have worked as a staff editor or three publishing companies
and have done reelance editing and writing work or dozens o oth-
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1215
INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1315
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1415
INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1215
INTRODUCTION
[ 9 ]
ers O particular interest to the reader o this book I have served as
an acquisitions editor at those houses Tat means Irsquove read thou-
sands and thousands o 1047297rst 1047297fy pagesBooks I have selectedmdashbased partially on those 1047297rst pagesmdash
have won many major awards in my publishing category includ-
ing several Book o the Year awards And I was recently a 1047297nalist
or Editor o the Year or 1047297ction in my industry niche
In 2008 I launched my own small publishing company March-
er Lord Press which publishes science 1047297ction and antasy novelswith a spiritual edge
I am a regular aculty member at multiple writers conerences
around the United States Whether itrsquos in the conerence setting or
in private coaching I love helping novelists learn to better do what
it is theyrsquore trying to do
Tis led to my Fiction Writing ip o the Week column (whichis still available or ree at wwwWhereTeMapEndscom) and all
my 1047297ction how-to books including the Writerrsquos Digest title Plot Ver-
sus Character A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction
I have been told that one o my most valuable skills is the ability
to diagnose whatrsquos working in a novel and what needs to be 1047297xedmdash
and exactly how to 1047297x it
Tatrsquos the passion I bring to this book I hope to use whatever
clarity I can muster to help you see precisely how to structure your
1047297rst 1047297fy pages so they take off cleanly and expertly put your story
ldquoin orbitrdquo or the readerrsquos enjoyment
bull PREFLIGHT CHECK bullTe First 50 Pages is divided into two parts Part one gets you in-
side the heads o the 1047297rst people who will encounter your opening
pages acquisitions editors and literary agents Tere yoursquoll 1047297nd
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1315
THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1415
INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
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THE FIRST 50 PAGES
[ 10 ]
out what these people are thinking and what actors weigh upon
them as they decide whether or not to pursue publication o your
novel Knowing what theyrsquore dealing with will help you positionyour book or success
In part two yoursquoll get the ull explanation o what your nov-
elrsquos 1047297rst 1047297fy pages have to accomplish and how exactly to pull it
all off Te 1047297nal chapter in the book talks about how to take what
yoursquove done in those opening pages and continue it through page
51 and beyond
As you read this book yoursquoll 1047297nd that I use movies as my ex-
amples even more than novels I do so unapologetically though I
realize yoursquore here to learn how to write a novel Tatrsquos or three rea-
sons One movies are a perect distillation o storytelling Tey are
like short stories 1047297ction in a hurry With only 120 pages to work
with in a screenplaymdashand with most o it white spacemdashyoursquove got
to nail the essence o the necessary components o good story with
effi ciency and precision
Second movies are part o our common culture and are there-
ore more likely to be amiliar to you than perhaps a novel might
be I yoursquore not already acquainted with a movie I reer to it would
take just two hours o your lie to become an expert on it Tat canrsquot
happen with a novel (well or most people and most novels)
Tird like a good beginning to a novel using movies as ex-
amples does more than one thing It teaches you how to write
good 1047297ction but it also teaches you how to write good screenplays
I canrsquot speak or you but most o the novelists Irsquove spoken with
over the yearsmdashmysel includedmdashsecretly hope their novels will
be turned into movies Why not make it easy on the producer by
writing a novel that could easily be adapted or the screen And
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INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
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WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
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842019 The First 50 Pages
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INTRODUCTION
[ 11 ]
why not learn how to structure solid beginnings or two orms
o media at once
So i I cite Toy Story 3 more than Anna Karenina yoursquollknow why (Plus Irsquom a ilm-school grad so my mind runs ever
to movies anyway)
bull LETrsquoS LIGHT THIS CANDLE bullA novel with a terri1047297c 1047297rst 1047297fy pages is a novel that is very likely to
get published Itrsquos not a guarantee because some people can write
a great ldquolaunchrdquo but then lose their way or have no ability to land
the plane But it is virtually guaranteed that a novel with a weak
1047297rst 1047297fy pages will not get published
At the end o his speech with LBJ wiping sweat rom his ore-
head in the background and the sun beating down overhead John
F Kennedy delivered these words
ldquoMany years ago the great British explorer George Mallory who
was to die on Mount Everest was asked why did he want to climb
it He said lsquoBecause it is therersquo Well space is there And wersquore go-
ing to climb it And the moon and the planets are there and new
hopes or knowledge and peace are thererdquo
Dear writer your novelrsquos beginning is there and new horizons
o wonder and joy await us So letrsquos start the countdown on this
thing shall we Time or lifoff
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
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0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
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0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist
842019 The First 50 Pages
httpslidepdfcomreaderfullthe-first-50-pages 1515
WRITING REFERENCE
SEEKING WRITING SUCCESS START AT THE BEGINNINGWhether yoursquore looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader first
impressions are vital Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an
agent or editorrsquos attention and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged
As a writer what you do in your opening pages and how you do it is a matter
that cannot be left to chance The First 50 Pages is here to help you craft a strong
beginning right from the start Yoursquoll learn how to
bull introduce your main character
bull establish your story world bull set up the plotrsquos conflict
bull begin your herorsquos inner journey
bull write an amazing opening line and terrific first page
This helpful guide walks you through the tasks your first 50 pages must accom-
plish in order to avoid leaving readers disoriented frustrated or bored Donrsquot let
your reader put your book down before ever seeing its beauty Let The First 50
Pages show you how to begin your novel with the skill and intentionality that willland you a book deal and keep readersrsquo eyes glued to the page
Includes a foreword by James Scott Bell author of Write Great Fiction Plot
amp Structure and The Art of War for Writers
ABOUT THE AUTHORJeff Gerke is an editor and author of fiction and nonfiction including such books
as the Operation Firebrand novels and Plot Versus Character A Balanced
Approach to Writing Great Fiction He is the
founder of Marcher Lord Press an inde-
pendent publisher
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 0
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 3 B Z v o C M T M D M T A w A T E F V V B D
0 4 L U E M M D M 1 M z E z N j U z N T g y R A = =
35313 653580 2 U P C
E A N
W1819
F n L 1 0 4 0 1 2 4
0 1 J U Y r V y B Q d W J s a W N h d G l v b n M s I E l u Y y A o
0 2 S W 9 s Y S B k a X Z p c 2 l v b i k P R 3 J l Z 2 9 y e S B L
0 3 c n V l Z 2 V y A E 5 v b w U E M T A u N A I 4 M A E x B k V B
0 4 T i 0 x M w 0 5 N z g x N T k 5 N j M y O D M 0 A A = =
781599 6328349
51699
ISBN-10 1-59963-283-7
ISBN-13 978-1-59963-283-4
US $1699
(CAN $2099)
Bonus submission package checklist
Visit writersdigestcomfirst-50-pages-checklist