Name: Film title:Railway Love

Transition: Fade up from credits

Slug Line: Opening credits; production company, main cast, title etc.

Brief description of action:White writing with a black outline, in the font of Gill Sans.

Camera:N/ADialogue:N/ASound: Non diegetic orchestral music, tempo slow, melodic upbeat musicShot duration: 15 seconds

Transition: Cut

Slug Line: INT – Front door/hallway - DAYBrief description of action:Eliza leaving her house, dressed for the day, pictures and a mirror on the wall, door open.Camera:Medium long shot, slowly tracking towards her.

Dialogue: no dialogue in this sequence

Sound: Diegetic, door opening, town atmos traffic etc…

Shot duration: 4 seconds

Transition: Cut

Slug Line: EXT – Front door - DAYBrief description of action:Eliza leaving her house, dressed for the day, Victorian House, door open, match on action from previous shot.Camera:Long shot, tracking back as Eliza moves out onto the street, pan following as she turns onto the street.Sound: Door closing and locking with keysAtmos town, traffic etc…Shot duration:5 seconds

Transition: Cut

Slug Line: EXT – Street - DAYBrief description of action:Eliza turning the corner whilst walking to the station.

Camera:Long shot, panning round while Eliza turns the corner, following her walking.

Sound: Atmos town, traffic etc.

Shot duration: 4 seconds

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Name: Film title:Railway Love

Transition: Cut

Slug Line: EXT – Clapham Junction station - DAYBrief description of action:Eliza walking into the station through the station car park. Light drizzle, Eliza is hunched up against the wind.Camera:Medium long shot, panning round the station as Eliza moves into shot.

Sound: Atmos. Town bustle, traffic etc.

Shot duration: 5 seconds

Transition: Dissolve

Slug Line: INT – Clapham Junction station - DAYBrief description of action:Eliza buying a ticket from machine in the station

Camera:Medium shot, framed on left hand side of screen.

Sound:Atmos, people mumbling, ticket machine beeps.

Shot duration: 4 seconds

Transition: Cut

Slug Line: INT – Clapham Junction station - DAYBrief description of action:Phil buying a packet of crisps at station shop, lots of products around the shot to show it is a shop.Camera:Medium shot, framed on left hand side of screen.

Sound: Atmos. people mumbling, cash machine beeps (sound bridge from previous shot)

Shot duration: 3 seconds

Transition: Dissolve

Slug Line: INT – Platform stairs - DAYBrief description of action:Eliza walking up the stairs to the platform. Lit from above, she is in silhouette and thus it is not clear at first whether it is Phil or Eliza

Camera:Low angle long shot, pan upwards as she walks up the stairs

Sound: Atmos. Diegetic footsteps on stairs, station announcements

Shot duration: 3 seconds

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