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Effective scientific paper

Dr.-Ing Doty D. Risanti

Pelatihan Penulisan Artikel Jurnal Internasional

Bidang Sains dan Teknik

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Ruang Sidang$ Jurusan Teknik %isika %TI ITS


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Why writing apaper

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The purpose...

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How does it work?

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The Design

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Identify your readers

Construct the

master-plan

Construct the first

draft

Clarity, readability,

style

The visual presentation

The well-written papers

are read,

remembered, cited.

Poorly written papersare not.


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The market: Who are your readers?

)our arket is your readers. Put your sel* intheir shoes+ ,hat i* you ,ere they$ ,ould you

,ish to *ind

A aer is read !y one or ore skilled re*erees$

and i* a//eted$ !y a s/ienti*i/ally-in*ored

audien/e.


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Concept: Making a conceptsheet

1hen you /an2t,rite$ it is

!e/ause you

don2t kno, ,hat

you ,ant to say.

The *irst o! is to

stru/ture your

thinking.

1hat should !e

in the aer1hat else ight

!e relevant

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Embodiment: The first draft

No, the hard ,ork. Break the o! do,n into stages. The usual

stages in ,iriting a aer are set out in the !o5es !elo,.

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Tips

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It is easier to assemble all the data BEF!E

writin" the paper, than durin" the process.

#ssemble draft FI$%!E&and lay them out in order

on a table or des'.


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Tips

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De/ide ,hat are the key /on/lusions o* the aer- the

iortant essage that you ,ant to ut a/ross. Do you

have all the data AND the *igures to rove your oint


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!anning a draftpaper

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Tips

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In "eneral it is easiest to start writin"!E&%(T&and

)#TE!I#(& and )ET*+&.

ust start writin" the data as if you were describin"

them to your collea"ues. (ay out "eneral ar"uments

and then "o into details so that you prepare the

readers for what follows and the lo"ic you are "oin"

to use.

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Detai! ": thegrammar

7raar tells the reader the *un/tion o* ,ords

and their relationshi. 8ess u the graar and

you /on*use the reader.

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Detai! "": #pe!!ing$ unctuation and#ty!e

A good style li*ts ,riting *ro that ,hi/h is dulland ordinary to that ,hi/h is distinguished$

eora!le$ individual.

There is no *orula *or instant style 9 it is artly

a ersonal thing.

Style is aroa/hed through alinness$

sili/ity$ good stru/ture and desire to /onvey

in*oration to the reader in the ost a//essi!le,ay.

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Detai! "": #ty!e

Be /lear+ the essen/e o* te/hni/al ,riting is/ouni/ation. The *irst :uality$ ,ith

re/eden/e over all others$ is /larity.

1rite *ro an aroriate design; oor ,riting

la/ks order.

De*ine everything+ de*ine all sy!ols and

a!!reviations

Avoid ety ,ords+ /li/h


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Detai! "": #ty!e

Do not overstate$ over ehasise or aologise Avoid !eing atronising$ /ondes/ending or

e//entri/

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Detai! "": #ty!e

=se aroriate language+ iniise the use o*a/ronys and a!!reviations

7ood oening >*irst senten/e?

Seek hel*ul e5ales and analogies @inking senten/es+ ea/h senten/e in a

aragrah should lead logi/ally to the ne5t.

!serve good ,riting+ ,hen you read a good

oening$ an at analogy$ an illuinating

e5ale$ or an idea ,ell e5ressed$ re-read it.

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%eference

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. Peat, &cientific ritin", Easy hen ou /now,

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aper submission're(iew'acceptance history

Su!it+ you /an do it online and ay attention,hat do/uents you ay need$ e.g. over

letter$ rie novelty stateent$ grahi/al

a!stra/t$ resear/h highlights.

Revie,+ the revie,ers give /oents$ you haveto ans,er the.

Send !a/k the revised version along ,ith the

resonse to the revie,er2s /oents Cditor de/ides

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E&amp!e response to there(iewer)s comments

1e thank the revie,ers *or their /are*ul read and thought*ul /oents on the anus/rit. 1e have /are*ully

taken their /oents into /onsideration in rearing our revision$ ,hi/h has resulted in a aer that is /learer.

The *ollo,ing suaries ho, ,e resonded to revie,er /oents.

Revie,er #

The #st aragrah in the introdu/tion is ket as suggested !y the editor.

The ,ay to avoid /ross-/ontaination o* the o,der has !een added in the te5t. The hu on the *igure ,as

an arte*a/t during easureent; there*ore$ ,e /hanged the se/tra *ro other se/ien >%ig."?.

The investigated alloy nu!ers have !een given in the /ation. ne /an *ind the /oositions o* the

investigated alloy in Ta!le ".

1e ket the *igures 4/ and d as it is$ as suggested !y the editor.

The i/rostru/ture analysis used in this resear/h ,as SC8$ ho,ever$ *or the sae alloy /oosition and the

sae heat treatent$ the TC8 ,orks have !een er*ored. This ,ork has !een u!lished searately in+ P.Hanus, E. Bartsch, M. Palm, R. Krein, K. Bauer-Partenheimer, P. Janschek, Mechanical properties of a forged

Fe-!"l-#a steam tur$in $lade, %ntermetallics &' ()&)* &+-'.The ,ork o* Eanus et al ,as a/tually !ased

on this ,ork.

Tyo has !een /orre/ted. 1e have added the e5lanation in se/tions C5eriental and Results and Dis/ussion >ree?.

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1e have added the sales ,hi/h ,ere not attaining e:uili!riu in Ta!le #$ and !een given arks >G?. The solu!ility variation ,ith teerature has !een /lari*ied in the te5t >Results and Dis/ussions?.

The aearan/e o* the lo,-/ontrast re/iitates ,as une5e/ted. %ro the shae and the /ontrast o* the hase$ this hase is not @aves hase. The shae o*

@aves hase is ostly irregular and it has a high /ontrast >due to high Ta /ontents H"-H3& at.?. The shae o* this lo,-/ontrast hase is soe,hat round

and it should /ontain less Ta /oared ,ith @aves hase. 1e have also /he/ked that these re/iitates ,ere not re/iitates due to /ontaination. Based on

the hase e:uili!ria at 400 $ it ,as only @aves hase aears as the e:uili!riu hase. Although the resen/e o* the unsta!le @"#hase o* %e-Al-N! ,as

kno,n$ !ut the resen/e o* su/h hase in %e-Al-Ta is not kno,n. There*ore$ ,e use the ter KsurrisingL.

The ,ord KeltingL has !een added a*ter levitation. %or detailed o* the ro/ess o* levitation elting one should re*er to the re*eren/e nu!er #'.

%or solu!ility deterination at 400 and #000 $ the as-/ast se/iens ,ere heated at the arti/ular teeratures and then :uen/hed in ,ater. 1hile *or

solu!ility at ##'0 $ the as-/ast se/iens ,ere heated at that teerature and then :uen/hed in i/e !rined. There*ore the solu!ility at one teerature is

deterined *or the se/iens ,hi/h have !een heat treated at that arti/ular teerature. The ter Kslo, /oolingL *or e/hani/al test sales has !een /lari*ied as slo, *urna/e /ooling. The sales ,ere le*t in the turned o** *urna/e.

The di**eren/e !et,een the se/iens *or solu!ility deterination and *or e/hani/al testing lays on the ,ay the se/iens ,ere /ut and /ooled. %or

solu!ility deterination the sale diension ,as a /ylindri/al !utton o* ' height. The sales ,ere heated and /ooled *ast !y :uen/hing in ,aterMi/e-

!rined. 1hile *or e/hani/al testing$ the se/iens ,ere heated *or teerature and tie as *or solu!ility deterination >#000 M"00h?$ !ut they ,ere /ooled

in *urna/e >slo, /ooling? to avoid theral stresses.

The ter o* Kinute solu!ilityL in P3 line '0 has !een rehrased.

The @aves hase ,as !adly /ra/ked due to the /ree tests at ('0 $ *or this$ the e5lanation has !een given in the te5t. Re*eren/e ,as ade to %ig. 'd$ as

,ell as the e5lanation. The e/hani/al testing o* the se/iens o* %ig. (/-d ,as given in %ig. 6/.

Tyo has !een /hanged.

The 7eran la!elling has !een /hanged.

Se/tion 3.3./ has !een /hanged as se/tion 3.3.!

The selling o* re*eren/es has !een /orre/ted.

The senten/e in P6 line ## has !een rehrased in the te5t.

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%e*ected aper

The aer ,as ree/ted a*ter I re*used to do therevision as suggested.

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pub!ished in a +ourna!

It is ossi!le to u!lish a single aer instead inPro/eeding !ut also in a Journal >se/ial Issue?

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0. +.+. !isanti$ 7. Sautho**$ K8i/rostru/tures and e/hani/al roerties o* %e-Al-Ta alloys ,ith strengthening @aves haseL$

Interetalli/s$ #6$ #"-#3($ "0##.

1. +.+. !isanti$ D. San 8artn$ 7. 7ar/IS8 "0##?$June #3$ "0##$ Solo$ Indonesia$ . 4-6".

2. +.+. !isanti$ S. van der O,aag $ KAli/ations o* Theroele/tri/ Po,er 8easureent to Se/ondary Pre/iitation Pro/ess inAA(0(# AlloysL$ Pro/eedings o* International on*eren/e on 8atheati/s and S/ien/es >I8S/ "0##?$ /t #"-#3$ "0##$

Sura!aya$ Indonesia$ aer no+P4.

3. +.+. !isanti$ 7. Sautho**$ KEeat-Resistant Iron Aluinides ontaining @"#-Eeusler Phase *or %ossil %uel Te/hnologies K$

Seinar Nasional Besi dan Baa II$ "0-"# kto!er "0##$ Bandung$ Indonesia.

4. +.+. !isanti$ KQarakterisasi @evel /olutePaduan Aluiniu AA(0(# Selaa Proses %nterrupted"ging Dengan

8enggunakan #hermoelectric Po0erL Seinar 8aterial 8etalurgi$ 3 Nove!er "0##$ Pusat Penelitian 8etalurgi @IPI$

Serong$ Tangerang$ Indonesia.

5. +.+. !isanti$ 7. Sautho**$ KEigh-Teerature 5idation Behaviour o* %e3Al-Ta and %e

3Al-Ta-r Alloys ontaining @aves

Phase K$ Pro/eedings o* 3rdAPTCS International Seinar n Alied Te/hnology$ S/ien/e$ And Art De/e!er (th$ "0##$

Sura!aya$ Indonesia$ . #'#-#'(.

6. +.+. !isanti$ S. van der O,aag+LC**e/t o* @o, Teerature Aging on Internal %ri/tion o* AA"0"&L$ Advan/ed 8ater. Res.

Fols.&(3-&(& >"0#"? .-&(.

4. Nadhi*a 8aulida$ Titin )ulia Riska$ 8uhaad Qhai Asy2Ari$ 1ilueng %itri Al*iah$ Aisyiah Nur Isaneni and +oty !isanti7,

8Theral hara/teristi/s o*"rtocapus altilis 8ale In*lores/en/e as 8os:uito Reellent Faoriing 8atL$ Pro/eeding o* "ndInternational on*eren/e on Advan/es in Biote/hnology and Phara/euti/al S/ien/es >IABPS"0#"? $June 30th-July#st$

"0#" Bali

6. Andini Nur Fania S,ari$ Ari 8a Eangga$ +oty +ewi !isanti+ KSiulasi Single-Ste Eeat Treatent Senya,a

Suerkonduktor N!3Sn Pada Qa,at Suerkonduktor 8ulti*ilaent u-N!-SnL$ Prosiding Seinar Nasional 8aterial dan

8etalurgi F$ '-( Sete!er "0#" Sura!aya.

#0. Ari 8a Eangga$ Andini Nur Fania S,ari$ +oty +ewi !isanti+ KSiulasi Pergerakan Antaruka Antar*asa Di*usi Batas Butir

Proses Pe!entukan Senya,a N!3SnL$ Perteuan Iliah IPTCQ Bahan$ 3 kto!er "0#" BATAN Pusitek Serong.3"


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#. Andini Nur Fania S,ari$ Ari 8a Eangga$ +oty +ewi !isanti+ KSiulation o* Dule5 Eeat Treatent N!3Sn oounds in u-N!-

Sn Suer/ondu/ting 8ulti*ilaentary 1ireL$Pro/eeding o* International on*eren/e on hei/al and 8aterial Cngineering$

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8esoorous Ti"Solar ell >DS? %a!ri/ationL$ Pro/eeding o* International on*eren/e on hei/al and 8aterial Cngineering$

=niversitas Dionegoro$ #"-#3 Sete!er "0#" Searang.

3. Ari 8a Eangga$ @ida Johar 8a,arani$ +oty +ewi !isanti+ KSiulation o* ounter Blo, Pro/ess o* PB@ uart Bottle%a!ri/ationL$ Pro/eeding o* International on*eren/e on hei/al and 8aterial Cngineering$ =niversitas Dionegoro$ #"-#3

Sete!er "0#" Searang.

&. Aulia Siti Aisah$ +oty +ewi !isanti+ KRene,a!le Cnergy Cdu/ation in Indonesia+ hallenges$ issues involved and /ourse

stru/ture *or a sustaina!le *utureL International on*eren/e on Rene,a!le Cnergy C5erts2 Fision "030$ arl von ssietky

=niversity o* lden!urg$ #st-"nd /to!er "0#"$ 7erany. to !e u!lished in International Journal o* Rene,a!le CnergyDeveloent >IJRCD?.

'. O. A!dullah$ D. Sa,itri$ +.+. !isanti$ D.). Prataa$ KAli/ation o* @aven!erg 8ar:uardt @earning Algorith and @east

S:uareCstiator *or Predi/ting 1orking Stress o* Titaniu AlloysL$ Jurnal Teknik %isika Fol. No. 3$ &4-'#$ "0#".

5. +oty +ewi !isanti+ KSi*at 8ekanik Paduan Struktur Ter!uka B-1rdered%e-Al Dengan Presiitat %asa @aves Struktur #&L$

Seinar 8aterial 8etalurgi$ Pusat Penelitian 8etalurgi @IPI$ " Nove!er "0#" Serong. To !e u!lished in 8etalurgi

>a//redited? se/ial issue.

6. +.+. !isanti$ S. van der O,aag+L Resolving Individual Solute @evels o* AA(0(# Through 8ultile Su!-A!ient Teeratures

Theroele/tri/ Po,er 8easureentsL$ %ull aer su!itted to uality in Resear/h "0#3.

4. R. A. 1ahyuono$ +.+. !isanti$ Kuasi-solid State DSS Per*oran/e Cnhan/eent !y Bi-layer 8esoorous Ti"Stru/ture

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Dye-Sensitied Solar ell !y =sing Anatase 9 Rutile Ti"@ayer and 8i5tureL$ A!stra/t su!itted to th International on*eren/e

on 8aterials *or Advan/ed Te/hnologies$ 8RS-Singaore

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