Personal Writing Part 2

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Room 6’sPersonal

Writing Part 2

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My first Rugby game

WOW! I’ve never been in a rugby game

before.

They dropped the ball. So I go in for the

first time BAM! The ball comes into the

scrum, I won it. Yes! So I run in, he

passes me the ball. I run as fast as I can

go. I pass the ball to my mate, he runs

then passes back me the ball. I drop kick

it WOW!

Look at it in the air. I catch the ballthen start running and score! My mum

shouts my name like an elephant. My first

try!

NO! No Try! They say forward pass. Scrum.

I don’t go in this time. It comes out,

they pass it to me. I run, defend, kick and

the finishing touch TRY TIME!

Wow! I’ll never forget this moment. I felt

so proud of myself.

By Khale



YES! It time to go to Paris. I ran to mum and

dad’s bedroom. I jumped on their bed at five

O’clock in the morning. They fell out with

excitement! Then the alarm went off! My sister

jumped and screamed loudly!

Then we all got our clothes on and we got our

suitcases and put them in the car. My sister and

I got some soft pillows and some blankets and

quietly fell asleep on the way to Auckland.

We woke up to buy some breakfast. After

breakfast, we got to the airport. We waited for

ten minutes and then the Fly Emirates plane

came. We got on the plane. Mum asked if I would

like to have some gum. I said “yes please!” The

Captain said “fasten your seat belts! Off we go!”

By Layne



“Oh no! A cat murdered my gold fish!” At least my

other goldfish is still alive.

When I was 5, 6 and 7, I had two gold fish in my

room. Every morning before school I fed them.

They swam up to the top and gulped up their

breakfast as I watched. But one fateful time I checked and one was gone. I soon found it on the floor. I shouldn’t have gone

on holiday, because while we were away he must

have got killed by a cat!!!

I know this because it had big scratch marks on his

body and I could see his guts. So I called my mumand told her one of my fish was dead and we had to

bury him soon.

By Logan



ARG!!!!!!!!!! My ear hurts really

badly. Finally my eyes open. BALK!!!!!

I was just about sick on my mum.BALK!!!! I was sick my bed. My mum

and dad help me to a lazy boy chair. I

was bored like a bear hibernating in

the winter. Mum asked the nurse if I

could watch a DVD. She said “yes”. Now

it is 12:00. Here comes the nurse with

a tray of ice cream, jelly and water.After I ate the jelly and ice cream

and drank the water. It was time to go

home. At the end of the day I got a

certificate and an ice block. It was a

exciting day !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By Luana



One sunny, summer morning I went to feed my animals

and LOOK! Princess was laying head first in her old cage.

I cried out “Mum Princess is hurt!” I brought her in and I

fed her again and again. But she was still not moving.

She was as still as a dead ant, but she wasn’t dead! Then

I came up with a brilliant plan.

It was water! Give her water! I ran to the tap, I ran asfast as lightning. My Mum got the syringe and a glass of

water. I started giving her water. Yum, yum, squeak,

squeak, went Princess.

While I was doing it, my mum was packing our stuff so

we could move. First she fed the other animals.

So I saved her life that time but sadly... a couple months

later she died. She was the prettiest guinea pig in the

world!

By Paige



“Yay!” My dad is taking my cousin Paige, Kaila and I to a

place called the World of Horses. It felt like an hour to get

there but it only took about half an hour. Since we were a bit

early we went to a Harbour. The time we were supposed to

be there was 3:30. When we got back to the World of

Horses, a lady that worked there told us that they were

running a bit late. We had to wait for ages.

When finally they were ready we got told which horse we

got. My dad got a horse called Wiggles, Kaila got a horse

called Chevy, Paige got a horse called Cody and I got a

horse called Kina. We got told the numbers that we had for

our order in line. We got on our horse and off we went on atrack. We walked past a few kiwifruit orchards. There were

some vines sticking out and I pulled one back and it hit

Kaila in the helmet. We got to a paddock where the horses

could trot around in. Paige was riding like the wind. Kina

was about to roll over on his back.

We had nearly finished in the paddock Kaila and I swapped

horses, so now I had Chevy and Kaila had Kina. We walkedback down the track. We saw a foal on the way back. When

we were back, we climbed off our horses and went to put

our helmets away. We talked to a man for a little while and

we left from an awesome time of horse riding!!!

By Saffron



My first Tauranga race meet for Bmx

Over the loud speaker I heard, “She’s down! Someone has

ran over her leg! Now her head!”

That was me. I started to cry. My dad came over to see if I was okay. I went to the ambulance to get an ice pack

but I was fine!

Then I did my next race. When I watched the bigger kids

they zoomed around like a rocket ship. After all my races

I was as hot as the sun. When the races were done I had acouple of laps and then it was prize giving. I got a glass

saying Tauranga BMX club. Everyone got the same

thing. I got 4th, my brother got 1st or 2nd. We stayed to

have some more laps. My brother did heaps.

It was a fantasic day!

By Sarah



“They’re chucking Pit Bull Terriers over the fence!” Mum“They’re chucking Pit Bull Terriers over the fence!” Mum“They’re chucking Pit Bull Terriers over the fence!” Mum“They’re chucking Pit Bull Terriers over the fence!” Mumshouted at me. Mum sent me inside as quickly as possible.shouted at me. Mum sent me inside as quickly as possible.shouted at me. Mum sent me inside as quickly as possible.shouted at me. Mum sent me inside as quickly as possible.My dog Sargey was so scared. I went back out side, myMy dog Sargey was so scared. I went back out side, myMy dog Sargey was so scared. I went back out side, myMy dog Sargey was so scared. I went back out side, myshadow went right across his faceshadow went right across his faceshadow went right across his faceshadow went right across his face. He thought I was a pit ball. He thought I was a pit ball. He thought I was a pit ball. He thought I was a pit balland bit me beside my eye! I cried and cried. Mum gave me aand bit me beside my eye! I cried and cried. Mum gave me aand bit me beside my eye! I cried and cried. Mum gave me aand bit me beside my eye! I cried and cried. Mum gave me a

flat, soft cloth and ran me to the bathroom. I was screaming flat, soft cloth and ran me to the bathroom. I was screaming flat, soft cloth and ran me to the bathroom. I was screaming flat, soft cloth and ran me to the bathroom. I was screamingand yelling. My mum rang the hospital. Six minutes later and yelling. My mum rang the hospital. Six minutes later and yelling. My mum rang the hospital. Six minutes later and yelling. My mum rang the hospital. Six minutes later

people were in my house lifting me up and sendi people were in my house lifting me up and sendi people were in my house lifting me up and sendi people were in my house lifting me up and sending me tong me tong me tong me tohospital. I was so happy. I got to meet new friends. When Ihospital. I was so happy. I got to meet new friends. When Ihospital. I was so happy. I got to meet new friends. When Ihospital. I was so happy. I got to meet new friends. When Ihappily came home three people were on the couch. Two werehappily came home three people were on the couch. Two werehappily came home three people were on the couch. Two werehappily came home three people were on the couch. Two weremy friends and the other was their mum. I was so excited tomy friends and the other was their mum. I was so excited tomy friends and the other was their mum. I was so excited tomy friends and the other was their mum. I was so excited tosee Sarge, I ran out side but he wasn’t there. I asked “where issee Sarge, I ran out side but he wasn’t there. I asked “where issee Sarge, I ran out side but he wasn’t there. I asked “where issee Sarge, I ran out side but he wasn’t there. I asked “where issargey?” Mum said quietly, “We had to put him down so hesargey?” Mum said quietly, “We had to put him down so hesargey?” Mum said quietly, “We had to put him down so hesargey?” Mum said quietly, “We had to put him down so hewouldn’t do it again.’’ Some people can still see the mark onwouldn’t do it again.’’ Some people can still see the mark onwouldn’t do it again.’’ Some people can still see the mark onwouldn’t do it again.’’ Some people can still see the mark onmy face of what he did, but I wouldn’t blame him. Blame themy face of what he did, but I wouldn’t blame him. Blame themy face of what he did, but I wouldn’t blame him. Blame themy face of what he did, but I wouldn’t blame him. Blame the

people that scared him. people that scared him. people that scared him. people that scared him. By Shane By Shane By Shane By Shane



“Wahoo!” I exclaimed as the throttle zoomed

down. I got up. Mum and Stu were so excitedthat I got up on my water skies. I was excited

too. I could see the water under me bubbling

like a jug boiling. As we reached the corner I

lent too far. Splash! I fell off my skis.

The boat zoomed back, like lightning. My Nanawas at the beach to greet me. She came up to me

with a bunch of flowers. I said, “Yay!” But

Muzz said, “Next summer you have to be on a

single ski!”

By Sinead



SCRREECCHH!!! What was that? Then

something hard hit me in the side. It felt like a colossal

boulder had been shoved in my side. It really hurt. Ididn’t know what it was, but soon my mum came over

and said that I had been hit by a rattletrap. I think it

was a beetle. The people in the car said they were

sorry and sped off.

“There should only be a big bruise… Nothing will bebroken,” she added. Wow what a great start to my

granddads birthday, I thought to myself. Well it

should get better I reasoned to myself.

It turned out that the only bad thing that happened

was a huge bruise as big as a foot ball.

Over all it was a really great day.

By Stacie



Clap Clap cheer cheer! Another person goes up to retrieve

their trophy. Finally nine year old girls get called up…

SUMMER TYSON!Yes! I cried. My first ever trophy! What a wonderful feeling

that was!

Then I got called up again to retrieve my shiny bronze medal

with my name on it! Then it was presented around my neck.

Since then I have been awarded certificates, medals, cups,trophies…EVERYTHING!

In fact I was the fastest sprinter and best sportsperson. I

went to eight ribbon days and two medal days. And after all

I did get 3 rd out of all the nine year olds!

That was night I’ll never forget!!!

By Summer



“Ahhhh! I’m slipping! I’m slipping!”

Hanging on one hook I managed to get my feet on the other hooks.

“PHEW!” I saved myself from falling meters to the ground. I have tokeep going, I thought. All my muscles were moving and I kept climbing.

Finally I made it, but the tricky part came next. I had to step over heaps

of skinny wires. I only had one chance. I took a gigantic breath and an

enormous step and made it onto the plank.

“It’s a miracle!” I yelled. Everyone roared and cheered. Okay I have to

jump to the next plank. I stepped back and jumped so high onto the next

plank everyone cheered again. And I did the same all the way along. It was amazing! I felt like a bird soaring through the sky. Until I came to the

final one.

I stepped back to jump… but missed. The next time I took a huge step

back and made it.

“YAY!”

But then a quiet voice that sounded like a mouse said “Jump back to the

middle!”

And so I did, it was easy once you got the hang of it.

When I got back to the middle I slowly leaned back and swayed down to

the ground. I was still shaking but I was so proud of myself.

By Tayler



Terryn ! Wake up. Mmm I moaned. Mum do Ihave to get up? Yes you need to look neat foryour big day. I got out of bed, had a quickshower and got changed. My mum did my bagand lunch when I was in the shower.

After that I made my breakfast. Yum I said after Iput the last spoon full of cornflakes in my mouth.I put my shoes on and mum was waiting outsidefor me. I ran outside and my mum said we arewalking. That got the heart pumping. We stoppedat the gate and my mum said are you ready? Yes

I said and my mum took me a through. It was likea jungle. Finally we got to the big door and mymum said this is your new class.

By Terryn



Wow! That was better then I thought it would be.

This motorbike is fast!

Last time was scary because I remember my sister

put my hands on the wrong thing and we went too

fast. So my sister fell off! I stayed on but fell with

the motorbike. I burnt my leg when that happened.

When I go up the hill, I pull the handle back as far as

you can, so I go so fast! My puppy is almost as fast

as the motorbike. The motorbike is about 50cc. My

dad said that he would get a new and faster

motorbike. My motorbike does not have gears,

because it’s not a big bike. But my new motorbike

will.

By Wade

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