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Oli Georgiou

Which do you prefer and why?• I think that the second of your page

layouts is the best. This is because I like the flow and direction of your copy and the way in which it is balanced out with the imagery, it works really well and makes the page nicely balanced. I think that the pull-quote has been placed in a very effective way however it could have been much bigger as there is quite a lot of white space on the page which is not usually present within real Broadsheet spreads. I think the fonts that you have used are clear and easily legible, and the images that you have chosen to sue are eye-catching and relevant to the story.

Which do you prefer and why?• Out of these three my favourite is

number 2, the layout reminds me a lot of what a tabloid actually looks like. The use of advertisements and giveaways, the header from the sun and the main story which takes up the whole centre all works well together in order to create this piece, The text fonts are good and work well with your subculture and I like how the sky image is reflected and put opposite to where it originally was. If I was to change anything id of said to look at your header try getting all four works to be in line and be the same size to give it a more of a paper looking standard.

Which do you prefer and why?• I prefer the first of your designs. This is

because I think that it is the most appropriate for your target audience due to the colour scheme and images that you have used. I think that the white copy on the red background is the more easiest to read compared to your other two designs and I think that the imagery that you have used will attract the correct audience that you would desire within the fanzine. I like how you have laid out the text in one column down the middle of the page with imagery either side, almost acting as a margin. I think that over all, this layout is very effective.