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PAPER WORKSHOP
The Final Paper 5-7 pages (double-spaced) 3 outside sources (2 academic, 1
popular) MLA in-text citation format Any film of your choice
Except weekly screenings Pending approval by me (email by
Wednesday)
Topics Wide open!
Must be argumentative Off-limits
Opinion Plot Summary “Thematic” Analysis Compare/Contrast
Two films, book vs. film, etc.
Thesis Statement #1A Nightmare on Elm Street (2010) is a re-
make of the classic 1984 horror film of the same name.
PROBLEM: Too Obvious; 7 pages?!
Thesis Statement #2Avatar is one of the most innovative films
of all time.
PROBLEM: Yeah? And?
Thesis Statement #3The Social Network tells the story of Mark
Zuckerberg and how he became the world’s youngest billionaire.
PROBLEM: Plot summary; No Analysis
Thesis Statement #4Inception is the best movie of all time.
PROBLEM: “How could you possibly know that?”
How would you argue that?
Thesis Statement #5 Pretty Woman is a modern day fairy tale.
Better, but still has problems:-Obviousness
-No formal analysis-No narrative analysis
BUT: could work with an ideological approach.
A thesis should… Lay out a clear argument Preview the main points of the argument
Each point should relate to ONE central idea
Provide a roadmap as to where the paper is heading (1st, 2nd, 3rd)
Thesis Statement #6Transformers is a
unique film due to the fact that it was based on a popular toy line, contains CGI special effects, and was a blockbuster hit.
Better: Preview of points
But: The “cool stuff”
fallacy Obvious
Points don’t cohere
No analysis
Thesis Statement #7 In the Mood for
Love is a film that features three-point lighting, continuity editing, and sound bridges to tell its story of two lonely people.
Better: Preview of points
But: So what?
Most films use these techniques.
A thesis should Address what is unique, unusual,
interesting, or thought-provoking about your film.
Tell a reader something s/he don’t already know. Assume the reader (me) has seen your film. What has your analysis illuminated that
someone who hadn’t taken this course would’ve likely missed?
Thesis Statement #8Black Swan conveys Nina’s fractured
mental state through three central motifs: mirrors, doubles, and the metaphor of the swan transformation.
Thesis Statement #9 In Do The Right Thing, Spike Lee relies on a
highly stylized mise-en-scene to reflect the racial tensions of the Bed-Stuy neighborhood on the hottest day of the year. The film’s costumes, color palate, and blocking all work to visually depict the conflict of the film.
Thesis Statement #10 Taxi Driver has drawn a great deal of
commentary for its depiction of vigilante violence. But what if the bloodshed that occurs in the film never actually took place? In this paper, I will argue that the acts perpetrated by Travis Bickle were confined to his mind.
Introductions Set up the film Brief (1-2 sentence) plot summary HOOK your reader
Why would s/he want to keep reading? Thesis + preview of main points
Top 7 Ways to Screw This Up
#7: The DVD Commentary a/k/a the filmmaker’s intent
#6a: The Awards List Oscars, Golden Globes, Cannes Film
Festival, etc.
#6b: Box Office figures “Avatar is the highest-grossing film of all
time!”
#5: The Movie Review Too much plot summary Too much opinion Not enough argument
#4: Poor Citation Style Learn MLA formatting and how to use it!
#3: Bad Research No academic sources Not using sources to support your
argument “Sprinkling” quotes
Adding quotes at beginning or end of paragraphs with no explanation of how it is relevant.
Irrelevant/misapplied quotes Make sure you understand what the
quotation means.
#2: Argument Doesn’t Match Thesis Outline your paper first. Each paragraph contribute to your
argument.
#1: Excessive Praise I DON’T CARE ABOUT YOUR OPINION! I need you to convince me that your
argument is valid.
Sources 1 Popular
Examples: New York Times, AJC, Newsweek, etc.
2 academic/scholarly sources Generally long (15+ pages) Published by a University press Contains footnotes and citations Peer-reviewed
RESEARCH GUIDE (on blog)