Outline TT Project Presentation created by Mentari

Commented by:

Raden Aldi Kurnia Wijaya 3712100011, Muhammad Ghazalli 3712100012, Muhammad Iqbal

Maulana 3712100014, Innanda Rizqiani Putri 3712100021, Ilham Adi Pratama 3712100022

Slide 1 to 11

The first slide is about this presentation Outline, consist of 5 point that might the audience

could understand more if Mentari turn this 5 big point into bullets not a circle shape. The next

thing is it’s will be more tidy if this outline splitted into 5 slide with each slide explain one big

point because there’s a lot sub point to explain.

Slide 2 to 11

Oke, there’s 2 big picture there with a little explaination. That’s good because we

audience will pay attention to Mentari as a presenter not to her presentation, but there’s

something I would like to say is it will be more effective if Mentari highlight the interest zone with

circle shape or zoom it so we could see the images that she explain more clearly.

Slide 3 to 11

Same as before, but in this picture she mark the interest zone with red box which is nice.

But, it will be more nice if she also zoom it because the slide frame is limited. Simple presentation

is nice because the audience will focus to Mentari as presenter.

Slide 4 to 11

On slide 4th , she just showing three pictures without any caption. This thing can made

audience confused. The other thing is, the pictures is too small. She can increase size of each

picture with much space on the layer to make slide presentation clearer to understand and eye

catching.

Slide 5 to 11

Slide 5th is better than before with caption on each image. There is also highlight of each

interest zone which is good. But, there is a title on this slide. I think, a slide presentation will be

nice if each slide include with simple title to make audience easy to understand.

Slide 6 to 11

Slide 6th is more communicative with more scale and legend to support the map.

Consistent to highlighting on each interest zone is good. Mentari also can use layer maximally to

make each picture clear to understand.

Slide 7 to 11

In this slide, there’s 3 pictures, where each picture describes the results of this research.

However, presenter does not give the caption for each picture.

Slide 8 to 11

In this slide, the presenter explains 1 among 3 pictures on the previous slide. On this slide

looks more nice, because the presenter zooming on the some part. Making it easier for the

audience to watch.

Slide 9 to 11

Same as the previous slide, this slide explains about one of the results of this

research. But on this slide, there’s no captions on each picture.

Slide 10 to 11

There is no ‘Conclusion’ and ‘Suggestion’ at the end of the Slide. Conclusion and

Suggetstion is important in the Thesis Presentation. In ‘Conclusion’ slide Mentari should put some

points that She gets from the Thesis/research which is useful for other people who watch the

presentation. The ‘Suggestion’ slide is also important. In the ‘Suggestion’ Slide, Mentari may put

some suggestion to the way her research for Thesis goes. And she can give some advice to the

people who wants continue her research.

There is no ‘Thank You’ at the end of the Slide. Although She has said ‘Thank You’ for the

attendance of the audience in the beginning of the presentation, It’s better if she give the ‘Second

time’ thank you at the end of the presentation to appreciate the audience who have watched &

listen her presentation and Salute her Thesis Mentor.

The ppt is so stiff, and boring to see. Mentari also should make a good design for each

slide of her presentation. So that people will feel more comfortable to see each slide of her

presentation. Each Slide of the presentation must contain the logo of ITS on the right top of the

slide and her name on the left top