Our Goals
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Retackle the Traits
Build Scoring Confidence
Identify the Next Steps
Our Goals
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The Six Traits of WritingIdeas and Content
Organization
Voice
Word Choice
Sentence Fluency
Conventions EditingTrait
Revi
sing
Tra
its
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Ideas and Content
Clear and controlled
Focused and relevant
Fresh and original
Complete and well-developed
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Organization
Inviting beginning
Logical sequencing
Thoughtful transitions
Conscious closing
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Voice
Connects you to your reader
Expresses feelings
Varies according to purpose and audience
Is as unique as a fingerprint
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Uses a variety of descriptive words
Paints a picture for the reader
Is specific to the audience and purpose
Promotes clarity with precise language
Word Choice
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Strong, well-built sentences
Varied sentence lengths
Natural rhythm and flow
Varied sentence beginnings
Sentence Fluency
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Capitalization
Punctuation
Spelling
Grammar
Conventions
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Think about Your Writing Instruction…
• Which trait has been the easiest for you to score?
• The most difficult?
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Traits Overview
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_VA2Mt4O-Ns
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Evaluating Rubrics
Compare and contrast two or more rubrics from the samples provided.
Decide and discuss which rubric would work best for your class.
Where We Left Off…
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Scoring Practice
Ideas and Organization
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Practice
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Practice
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Scoring Practice
Voice and Word Choice
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Practice
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Sentence Fluency and Conventions
Scoring Practice
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Last summer, I came across a video game called final fantasy II. It was a Role playing game online that was very fun and addicting. At the start of the summer I was worried alot about the changes that were happening in my life and I was scared about what was going to happen next year at school.
This Fantasy of living in a world of fun and adventure looked alot better than reality so I started playing. At first everything was ok. I forgot about my problems and had alot of fun.
Around August I relized that I had not only forgot about my problems but I had forgot about my cares too. I hadn’t talked to my family much, I barely spent time with friends and I hadn’t even got my permit yet and I was a month away from 16. This game was no longer a fantasy but an addiction. All I wanted to do was play this game and nothing else.
Finaly, with the help of my friends and some thinking, I decided to stop playing final fantasy or any other addicting games again. This was a key decision in my life.
Practice
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Scoring Practice
http://www.openc.k12.or.us/scoring/
http://apps.educationnorthwest.org/traits/scoring_practice.php
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Students know expectations from beginning
Expectations can be assigned by teachers or students
Students can monitor their own progress
Students become aware of the quality of their work
They can use the rubric as a final checkpoint
Students with special needs can have tailored rubrics
Rubric Benefits
Jackson and Larkin, Teaching Students to Use Grading Rubrics 2002
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How Can We Help Students Understand Scoring Rubrics?
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Jigsaw Activity
Group A: Teaching Students about Rubrics, page 41 and part of 42 with Table 2
Group B: The Rubric Strategy page, 42-43 with Figure 2
Group C: Common Problems and Suggestions, page 44 with Table 3
Create a short presentation for your peers!
Read Jackson and Larkin’s, Teaching Students to Use Grading Rubrics 2002
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More Ways to Help Students Understand:
Start with checklists.This helps students recognize thestrengths in their writing.
Complement the Traits.Students will begin to recognize strengths in others’ writing.
Start with simple Rubrics.Add more criteria as the students gain confidence.
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Scoring PracticeTeacher and Student Scoring Practice
http://www.literatelearner.com/Create a sample student account with class
ID LK823 and practice scoring!
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Resources!http://6-traits.blogspot.com/
www.writingfix.com
www.readwritethink.org
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Resources!http://als.4aplus.comGet essay prompts
& supplement writing lessons