Notes on Poetry: S.L.A.M. · of wind and clouds, of wind and sand, after seventy days, of wind and...

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Notes on Poetry: The S.L.A.M.

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Notes on

Poetry:

The S.L.A.M.

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A poem packs all kinds of

sounds, feelings (emotions),

and ideas into a few carefully

chosen words.

Sounds Emotions Ideas

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The words, the sounds,

and

even the shapeof

a poem all work togetherto

create a total effect!

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SoundUsually poems are meant to be read aloud;

poets will choose and arrange words to

create sounds that appeal to the listener.

Sound techniques include the following:

• Alliteration / Assonance

• Onomatopoeia

• Refrain/Repetition

• Rhyme

• Rhythm

• Meter

• Rhyme Scheme

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AlliterationThe repetition of consonant sounds:

Positive Patti holds her pretty petite purple purse.

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AssonanceThe repetition of vowel sounds:

Avery always ate apples.

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A word that sounds like the

things they name.

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A device or technique in which a sound, word, phrase, or line is repeated for effect or emphasis

After seventy days

of wind and sun,

of wind and clouds,

of wind and sand,

after seventy days,

of wind and dust,

a little

rain

came.

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A repetition or similarity of sounds at the end

of words, usually at the end of lines.

My love for you grows each passing day,With dreams of watching you run & play.Your life will have many ups & downs,I promise to be there for the smiles & frowns.

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Rhythm

• Rhythm – the pattern or flow of sound created by the arrangement of stressed and unstressed syllables in a line of poetryHow one reads the poem in rhythm.

The outlook wasn’t brilliant for the Mudville nine that day;

The score stood four to two, with but one inning more to play,

And then when Cooney died at first, and Barrows did the same,

A pall-like silence fell up the patrons of the game.

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Meter

• Meter is basically the rhythm throughout

the poem. (Like our example of Casey at

the Bat.)

• The recurring patterns of stressed (long)

and unstressed (short) syllables happen in

every stanza.

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Rhyme Scheme

It is the pattern of rhyme at the end of lines in

a poem or song

My Baby Sister

by Bruce Lansky

My baby sister’s a

Really swell. b

I love her smile, c

But not her smell. b

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Types of Effective Language• Good Word Choice• Imagery• Figurative Language

–Simile

–Metaphor

–Personification

–Hyperbole

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The language of a poem is carefully

chosen by the poet, who considers words to create a flow (rhythm), stir

emotions, and produce visual

images in the listener’s mind.

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ImageryThe use of descriptive words or phrases to create vivid mental pictures in the minds of the reader often appealing to sight, sound, taste, smell, and/ortouch.

“The tree roots

clutched the ground

like gnarled

fingers.”

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4 types: Figurative Language

Authors use figurative language to create

fresh and original descriptions.

Figurative expressions while not literally

true, help readers picture ordinary things in

different ways.

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SimileA comparison of two things, using the signal words like or

as.

“her eyes shone like stars”

“the sun looked like a red ball in the sky”

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MetaphorA comparison of two things that have some

quality in common, but does not use likeor as.

“The sun is a red spiraling ball in the sky”

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Human qualities that are applied to an

animal, an object, or an idea is known

as personification.

“The warm smile of the sun

shines brightly.”

“The piano leaned

toward me”

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HyperboleA type of figurative language that makes

an exaggeration for the purpose of

emphasis.

Example:

His ears were so sharp he could hear

dogs bark in the next county.

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ArrangementDistinctive elements about the arrangement

of the poem on the page. These elements

include the following:

Capitalization Margins

Punctuation Word Position

Stanza End Line Rhyme

Internal Rhyme Line Breaks

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Arrangement

Capitalization – C DMargins –

Indentions or lines begin from

center of the page, etc.

Punctuation – commas, colons, semi-colons

, : ;

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• Poems in various shape!

Word Position

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Arrangement

Stanza – grouping of two or more lines in a

poem usually similar in length and pattern.

Similar to paragraph form in prose.

End-line rhyme – most common form of

rhyme in poetry.Now I lay me down to sleep

I pray the lord my soul to keep

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ArrangementInternal rhyme – rhyme that occurs

within a line.From fearful trip the victor ship comes in with object won.

Line Breaks – poet puts emphasis or importance on an idea or topic. Line lengthmay help to emphasize topic.

It rained

a little

everywhere

but here.

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MessageSpeaker – the voice that talks to the reader

in a poem, like the narrator in a piece of fiction; the speaker is not necessarily the poet.

Symbol – a person, place, object, or an

action that stands for something

beyond itself.

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Types of Poetry• Lyrical Poetry - is a short poem or a long poem

with rhyming that expresses personal feelings.

• Narrative Poetry - is poetry that has a plot.

They may be short or long, and the story may be

simple or complex. Narrative poems include

epics and ballads.

• Both lyrical and narrative can be humorous.

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Verse Form• Free Verse - Free verse is poetry without

rules; after all, it doesn't rhyme, and it

doesn't have a meter.

The arrangement consists of carefully

chosen words in verses.

• Blank Verse - is a type of poetry, having a

regular meter, but no rhyme.