New Specification A21 and A22 Exemplar responses.
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New SpecificationA21 and A22
Exemplar responses
A21: Comparative Government
Option A: USA/UKQuestion 1• Very strong answer • Good balance• More than 3 explicit/implicit references to
or uses of the Source• Good reference to other evidence• Level 5 response: 26 marks
A21: Comparative Government
Question 2
Exemplar question asks for relevant examples
Only ONE example will be required
• Some knowledge and understanding of the principle
• Not established that it applies to ministers
A21: Comparative Government
• Example reinforces conclusion that candidate believes it applies to backbench MPs
• The example does not relate to collective responsibility so does not count
• 2 marks awarded
A21: Comparative Government
Question 4• Good structure based on similarities and
contrasts• Focus on legislation• Good range of points made• Valid point about success rates• No reference to lack of party discipline and
funding of members of Congress explaining legislative activism
A21: Comparative Government
• Crucially, no evidence at all. A ‘ceiling’ will apply: maximum Level 4
• Level 4 response: 18 marks
A21: Comparative Government
Option B: Republic of Ireland/UK
Question 3
• Excellent start: definition of ‘watchdog’ and purpose of scrutiny explained
• But too much on criticism: does not score
• So limited on forms of scrutiny: only two explained
• Level 4 response: 7 marks
A21: Comparative Government
Question 5(a)
Positives
• Excellent start: “Presidential” trend and Cabinet Government both explained
• Good structure: similarities and differences
• Balanced
• Good range of points on both sides and points well explained
A21: Comparative Government
• But no balance of evidence: only one from the Republic
• Was it not his own party that required Ahern to go?
• Level 4 (top) response: 24 marks
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Option A: Political Power
Question 1: Answer A
• One mark for Pluralist Theory
• Three points from Source listed
• But reasons why these illustrate Pluralism not developed: one mark for each
• Total: 4 marks
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Question 1: Answer B
• One mark for identification of Pluralism
• Three points from the Source given
• Reasons why these illustrate Pluralism developed
• 9 marks awarded
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Question 2• Good focus on criticisms• Reference to Source at the start but
limited use there after• Relevant evidence/examples but would
have benefited from more – to illustrate Lukes, for example
• Other theories used effectively to criticise• Level 4 (top) response: 12 marks
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Alternative Power QuestionsQuestion 1• Legitmacy defined: 1 mark• Two points taken from the Source and
explained. “Treated fairly” could have been developed
• Third point is candidate’s own knowledge and is valid
• 9 marks awarded
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Alternative Power Questions
Question 2
• Issue clearly understood
• Reference to “crisis” at the outset but the idea not explained
• Too long on the ‘means’ by which states are overthrown
• This eats into time spent on reasons
A22: Political Power and Ideas
• But a reasonable range of reasons given
• Source used
• Level 5 response: 13 marks
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Option B: Political IdeasQuestion 1: Answer A• One mark for identification• Three points taken from the Source to illustrate
this is liberalism• Do the first two overlap and are therefore only
one?• Candidate would have been advised to use the
three numbered/bullet point format• 10 marks awarded
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Question 1: Answer B
• One mark for identification
• Two marks for the “state is a threat” and one for “Freedom of expression”
• “Tyranny” relevant but not explained as a reason: one mark
• Total: 5 marks
A22: Political Power and Ideas
Question 2
• Focused on criticisms
• Effective use of other ideologies
• Some, but not extensive, use of the Source
• Little/no evidence
• Level 4 response: 11 marks