Microsoft PowerPoint - Thieu Nang - Session 32

7/27/2019 Microsoft PowerPoint - Thieu Nang - Session 32

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ENGLISH WRITINGhiu nn

Session 32

Module IIInstructor: H L V

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OVERVIEW

Review

Translation: Leantek

Homework solution

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LEANTEK

S mnh mission | goal

goal vs. objective vs. target e.g., study abroad take TOEFL desired TOELF score

LeanTekch da tin cycho midoanh nghip Vit

Each and every Vietnamese business may rely on | count on | depend on | lean on LeanTek

LeanTek: lean on | upon us

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LEANTEK

chuyn gia u ngnh v t vn qun tr doanh nghip, t vnpht trin ngun nhnlc, t vn h thng sn xut tinh gn.

Repetition: t vn the issue of linking scope chuyn gia u ngnh (E) v t vn (A) qun tr doanh nghip (B), t vn (A)

pht trin ngun nhn lc (C), t vn (A) h thng sn xut tinh gn (D).

E[(AB)+(AC)+(AD)] = [(EA)(B+C+D)]

expert consultants | consulting experts (EA) in oo or oug : consu ng vs. consu a ve vs. consu a on vs. consu ancy

service?

Internet check: consulting (1), consultancy (2), consultation (3), consultative(4)

business management (B), human resource (HR) development (C), andstreamlined production | lean manufacturing (D)

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LEANTEK Trn quan h hp tc vi nhiu t chc t vn quc t, chng ti t vn v gip

khch hng xy dng chin lc pht trin doanh nghip ton din.

Joining force with a number of our international partners in consulting Through ourpartnership with

we aim to help customers create a comprehensive strategy for business

development. -

why?

a good all-around education | an all-round singer diversity

a well-rounded scholar | a well-rounded curriculum balance

SOP/LOR application: check the target schools curriculum

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LEANTEK

Vi slogan Cch tn qun tr chng ti s em n cho khch hng ca mnhnhng kinh nghim khch hngt lt xctr thnh nhng doanh nghip, nhngtp on kinh t hng mnh, nng lc cnh tranh trong thi k hi nhp.

Standing by our Innovative Management motto | credo Cat's motto: No matter what you've done wrong, always try to make it look like

the dog did it. we committed ourselves to providing customers with relevant expertise

that allows them to self-transform into a powerful business, capable ofsta in com etitive vs.All reptiles have to slough [off] to grow.

in the context ofglobalized economy | entering the economic integrationperiod vs. the transition period

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GROUP ACTIVITY

Teamwork: What is the TP distribution of the Vietnamese version? What is the hyper-Theme of the first paragraph?

What should be the TP pattern of choice for this paragraph? Re-organize the Vietnamese version accordingly to improve its TP in two

different ways

Theme-Theme (3 points) -

Write down your answer on a piece of paper. Also give your solution tothe V.I.E.T.N.A.M homework (3 points)

Revise the English version accordingly to improve its TP in two differentways

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A SAMPLE SOLUTION

A Theme-Theme development [S1] LeanTek c thnh lp bi cc chuyn gia u ngnh. [S2] Chng ti, cng vi cc i tc quc t, s gip khch hng.. [S3] Chng ti tun th theo ng theo nguyn tc "Cch tn qun tr"

khch hng c th t lt xc...

[S1] LeanTek was founded by e, o n ng orce w our n erna ona par ners, a m o e p

[S3] We stand by our Innovative Management motto, committingourselves to

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A SAMPLE SOLUTION

A Rheme-Theme development Cng ty C phn LeanTek Vit Nam t vn v gip khch hng xy dng chin

lc pht trin bng cch em n cho khch hng kinh nghim khchhng t lt xc theo nguyn tc Cch tn qun tr vic ny kh thi bi ing chuyn gia t vn u ngnh + partner quc t gip khch hng thnhdoanh nghip, tp on kinh t hng mnh, nng lc cnh tranh.

LeanTek helps customers create business development strategies-

this is made possible by our team of top-class experts + internationalpartners Eventually, customers will become powerful and competitive

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HOMEWORK SOLUTION Country names and abbreviations

H.O.N.G.K.O.N.G. Hug Only Nice Guys, Kiss Only Naughty Girls.L.I.B.Y.A. stands forLove Is Beautiful; YouAlso.

Competition: come up with a meaningful phrase for V.I.E.T.N.A.M. (5

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. . . . . . .Appreciative Men

My own solutions:

V.I.E.T. N.A.M. = Viagra Incredibly Extends Turned-on Nights (of)AgingMen

V.I.E.T. N.A.M. = Vestige (of) Incursion Era That NagsAmerican Minds watch a sample clip

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LEANTEK

Linear idea development (6 points)

LeanTek pht hin nhng th mnh ca khch hng trong nhng nng lc cn timn nhm nh thc nng lc tim n . Vi phng chm gip khch hng thay i pht trin, LeanTek bin tim nng thnh kt qu bn vng, thng qua hot ngtng cng nng lc lnh o, h thng qun l v to dng vn ha doanh nghip.To ra s pht trin bn vng cho khch hng.

Linear idea develo ment 6 oints

Phng chm gip khch hng thay i pht trin pht hin th mnh tim n ca khch hng nh thc nng lc thng qua hot ng tng cng nng lc lnh o, h thng qun l

v to dng vn ha doanh nghip bin n thnh kt qu bn vng

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LEANTEK Phng chm gip khch hngthay i pht trinpht hin th mnh tim n

ca khch hng nh thc nng lc tim n thng qua hot ng tngcng nng lc lnh o, h thng qun l v to dng vn ha doanh nghipbin n thnh kt qu bn vng

Change to develop??? redundancy

With | standing by our change for better motto vs. Listening to customers is now part of the mantra of new management in

public services. But how many public bodies really do it?

watch a sample clip and through a series of activities, such as management capability

improvement and corporate culture cultivation, help them utilize their ownresources to full advantage and maintain their growth rate.

maintain vs. sustain vs. keep up: whats the difference?

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LEANTEK

Chng tila chn v u tvo cc doanh nghip Vit Nam vi t cch l i tcu t chin lc. Chng ti u t vo khch hng khng bng ti chnh m bngchnh ni dung t vn.

How to improve the TP and switch from TT to RT?

use marked Theme

As a potential business strategy partner, we selectively invest in Vietnamese

select and invest vs. selectively invest: coordination vs. subordination

2-verb sequence in Vietnamese adverb + verb in English ci v chp nhn (li mi)

smilingly accept (the invitation) go tht phn i

screamingly protest

bit m vn vi phm (lut)

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LEANTEK

Chng tiu tvo khch hng khng bng ti chnh m bng chnh ni dung tvn.

in forms of advisory services rather than financial funds

vs. Our contributions will be in forms of Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu di nhm to dng mt

vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip.

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LEANTEK

Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu dinhm to dng mtvn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip. Gia tng ti a gi tr ca doanhnghip.

can we put bi bn and lu diin the same clause? how to make it less awkward?

We will contribute in forms oflong-term advisory services which will be

delivered in a well-planned | well-thought-out manner

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LEANTEK

Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu dinhm to dng mtvn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip. Gia tng ti a gi trca doanhnghip.

what is the relationship between the last two sentences? combination orcause-and-effect?

in order to | in an effort to cultivate business culture and brands

representative ofthe company and maximize the market value of the business

Solution 2: cause and effect , and subsequently, help maximize the market value of the business which, in turn, would help maximize the market value of the business

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LEANTEK

Summary of the structure changes (in Vietnamese) Chng ti la chn v u t vo cc doanh nghip Vit Nam vi t cch l i tc

u t chin lc.Chng ti u t vo khch hng khng bng ti chnh m bngchnh ni dung t vn. Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu dinhm to dng mt vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip. Gia tng tia gi tr ca doanh nghip.

Vi t cch l i tc u t chin lc chng ti u t c chn lc vocc doanh nghip Vit Nam u t khng bng ti chnh m bng chnhn ung v n u m n ung n y c c n m c c

bn nhm to dng mt vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanhnghip v (do gip) gia tng ti a gi tr ca doanh nghip

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LEANTEK

Trit l kinh doanh: i nhng con ng m cha ai i, lm nhng vic cha ai hockhng ai dm lm

redundancy

Business | operation philosophy | principle

[Dare to] venture into uncharted waters | territories

explore unbeaten path a e on groun rea ng wor s

Blaze a trail | Always be a trendsetter!

My solution LeanTek Take the Lead!

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GROUP ACTIVITY

Watch a short clip and identify the implicit link: Patient: I think I'm ready to die. Delivery guy: I've got a ton of bricks for Dr. Dorian.

The groups able to identify the link will get an extra 2 points.

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Dialogue: Patient: I think I'm ready to die. Delivery guy: I've got a ton of bricks for Dr. Dorian.

Idiom:

The truth hit him like a ton of bricks. The woman he was in love with-

GROUP ACTIVITY SOLUTION

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Past solutions Bc s cha km bnh nhn cht th xng ng b nm gch Bc s mun cht theo bnh nhn lun.

Bc s bo: mun cht th cho gch xy m / xy ngha a lun. Nm cu ni ca b lo the schema issue

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HOMEWORK

For session 34: Translate the two stanzas of a Vietnamesepoem by an unknown author.Nu mt ngy ta bng thy yu nhauEm ng bt ng, cho rng mnh v c

Anh cho rng tnh yu nh hi thKhng th ln ny cng s th ln sau.

v...Nu m t n ta bn mun xa nhau

Em ng bt ng, cho rng mnh v cAnh cho rng tnh yu nh hi thTrong ci ngi ny, ai th mi c u.

clue: pay attention to the linking between the two stanzas

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