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Outline and Paragraph Writing Is Beauty Skin Deep? 1. Topic : The never-ending desires for beauty change the minds of people to change not only the fashion in clothes and hairstyle, but also some part of their body. 2. Support and Details: Plastic surgery, tattoos, and body piercing are getting popular. Tattooing is the procedure of putting ink under their skin. Some people perform body piercing to make them look unique. Others do plastic surgery to change their bodies and faces. 3. Conclusion : People never feel satisfied, they always want to improve themselves, they are even willing to make risky and dangerous decisions only to enhance the beauty. THE NEVER-ENDING DESIRE FOR BEAUTY The never-ending desires for beauty change people's minds. Some people are not satisfied with their looks, and this prompts them to take action to change not only the fashion in clothes and

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Outline and Paragraph Writing

Is Beauty Skin Deep?

1. Topic :

The never-ending desires for beauty change the minds of people to change not only the fashion in

clothes and hairstyle, but also some part of their body.

2. Support and Details:

Plastic surgery, tattoos, and body piercing are getting popular. Tattooing is the procedure of

putting ink under their skin. Some people perform body piercing to make them look unique.

Others do plastic surgery to change their bodies and faces.

3. Conclusion :

People never feel satisfied, they always want to improve themselves, they are even willing to

make risky and dangerous decisions only to enhance the beauty.

THE NEVER-ENDING DESIRE FOR BEAUTY

The never-ending desires for beauty change people's minds. Some people are not satisfied

with their looks, and this prompts them to take action to change not only the fashion in clothes

and hairstyle, but also some of their body parts. In fact that tattoos, body piercing, and plastic

surgery are getting popular. Some people get tattoos. Tattooing is the procedure of putting ink

under their skin. They say it is a sign of an important event in their lives, represent love and to

improve their appearance. Some people perform body piercing or even put objects under their

skin to make them look unique, and improve their appearance. Others do plastic surgery to

change their bodies and faces. They spend a lot of money to make themselves look better. Critics

say these procedures pose risks and thus are not needed, they urged people to avoid it. But some

people do not think about the risks. They only want to improve themselves to a higher level of

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beauty. Even if it is dangerous for their health. They are even willing to make risky and

dangerous decisions only to enhance the beauty.