Learn to Write...Right
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The three main categories of people we write mails to:
• Boss
• Colleague
• Client
Writing Effective Mails
It is time to update your employee parking stickers. New
stickers are required by April 1. Parking Rules and
Regulations require that all vehicles driven on campus
must display the current stickers.
Example
Please renew your employee parking stickers by April 1.
Put yourself in the Receiver’s shoes
The person receiving your mail
Thumb Rule
Remember, your readers may know nothing about what you're
telling them
• Leave Application For 03-12-2014
Subject Line Examples
• With Ref. To The Meeting/Call As On 12-13-2013
OR
• With Ref. To The ‘Hello Kitty’ Cartoon
• Your email should open by addressing the person you’re writing to.
Start With A Salutation
• For someone you don’t know well, especially if they’re a superior or if you have a working relationship with the person, always address ‘Dear.’
• If you know the person well, use ‘Hi Bob’ or ‘Hello Jerry’
• You can even use just the name with a comma (Jerry,)
Start With A Salutation
• If you know the person well, like your team mate, using ‘Dear Garry’ will look odd.
• Get straight to the point.
Write In Short Paragraphs
• Split your email into two to four short paragraphs, each one dealing with a single idea.
• Consider using bullet-points for extra clarity, or if you have too many points to cover.
• Follow the KISS principle.Keep It Short & Simple
• Listing several questions for the receiver to answer.
Using Bullets/Numbering When
• Suggesting a number of alternative options.
• Explaining the steps that you’ll be carrying out.
• If you need to write about several different issues (for
example, if you’re giving your boss an update on Project
X, asking him for a review meeting to discuss a pay
hike, and telling him that you’ve got a doctor’s
appointment on Friday), then don’t put them all in the
same email.
Stick To One Point
The receiver is a human, not a
computer to put the different
topics in different folders.
• Emails should follow the same rules of punctuation as other writing.
Use Capitals Appropriately
• Never write a whole sentence (or worse, a whole email) in capitals
• Always capitalise “I” and the first letter of proper nouns (names)
• Capitalize acronyms (USA, BBC, NSE)
• Always start sentences with a capital letter.
Use Capitals Appropriately
• Writing a particular word in capital showing it is
important or needs to be looked upon is a myth.
• For short internal company emails, you can get away
with just putting a double space after your last
paragraph then typing your name.
Signoff The Mail
• If you’re writing a more formal email, it is essential to
close it appropriately.
• Use Yours sincerely, (when you know the name of your
addressee) and Yours faithfully, (when you’ve
addressed it to “Dear Sir/Madam”) for very formal
emails such as job applications.
Signoff The Mail
• Use Best regards, or Kind regards, in most other
situations.
Signoff The Mail
• Even when writing to people you know well, it’s polite
to sign off with something such as “All the best,” “Take
care,” or “Have a nice day,” before typing your name.
• Don’t cram your email signature with quotes from your
favourite TV show, motivational speaker or witty friend.
Use Sensible Email Signatures
• Do include your name, email address, telephone
number and postal address (where appropriate) –
obviously, your company may have some guidelines on
these.
• It makes it easy for your correspondents to find your
contact details: they don’t need to root through for the
first message you sent them, but can just look in the
footer of any of your emails.
Use Sensible Email Signatures
• Always, always proofread you emails before you hit the
‘Send’ button.
Always Proofread Your Emails
• Check spellings, sentence formation, capitalization and
usage of the correct words (affect/effect, it’s/its,
you’re/your, than/then.
• Read from the receiver’s perspective.
i’ve attached my resume i would be grateful if you could
read it and get back to me at your earliest convenience. i
have all the experience you are looking for – i’ve worked
in a customer-facing environment for three years, i am
competent with ms office and i enjoy working as part of a
team. thanks for your time
Email Example
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’ve attached my resume. I would be grateful if you could read it and get back to me at your earliest convenience. I have all the experience you are looking for:
• I’ve worked in a customer-facing environment for three years• I am competent with MS office• I enjoy working as part of a team
Thanks for your time.
Yours faithfully,Joe Bloggs
Email Example