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MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteIt is very good to set out the criteria by which you will judge success.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteThis is a really well structured introduction. It clearly sets out what will be examined.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteThis introduction coukld be improved with a reference to the other side of the argument. ie. ways in which the policy could be seen as less than successfull or even as a failure.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteThis opening point could be improved if it dealt more directly with the issue of success , instead of beginning to describe the situation in Germany.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightHere we see a simple but effective link back to the question.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightThere is good detail of the period but it needs to follow a strong point and be used to show and support the point.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteHere we can see another paragraph that does not tackle the question directly in the opening point. This is almost dealing with the question 'how did the German economy improve' rather than how successful were the policies.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightThis is good as it directly deals with amount of success and results of the policy.

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MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteThe candidate has identified another key area where there was a need for a strong policy and sets out the context very well.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightThis shows a good level of reasoning as the candidate is measuring and weighing up the impact of the policy.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteThis essay is characterised by good detail and knowledge of the Nazi economic policies but the analysis is not developed.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightHere the impact of the policy is assessed. This could be explained further and the extent of impact and success thought through further.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightHere we begin to see the essay turn around to look at areas that were less successful.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightThis is good analysis and the candidate is reasoning through how stable and long term the impact of the policies would be.

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MarkedbyTeachersHighlightHere the candidate points out the pros and cons of the state of the economy and uses the wider context effectively to support the judgement.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteThis paragraph used good detail from the period to exemplify the problems with the economic policies.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightThis is quite a nice link between the economic policies and the wider success and impact of the Nazi party.

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MarkedbyTeachersHighlightA strong focus on the issue in the question.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteHere we see the key counter argument which has been fully explored earlier in the essay.

MarkedbyTeachersHighlightThis key point is well selected and gets to the heart of the issue of success and considers the criteria for success at that time.

MarkedbyTeachersSticky NoteThis essay is a very thorough and detailed account of Nazi economic policy and shows an excellent level of knowledge and understanding of the topic. In a timed exam question it would be better to deliberately select and focus on a few key aspects of the policies and focus more on the analysis of the impact and extent of success rather than attempting to cover so much detail on the period . ****