Hi, AP Lang!

You need:• Pencil/pen• Journals

Warm Up (5/5/15):“It is astonishing as well as sad, how many trivial affairs even the wisest thinks he must attend to in a day; how singular an affair he thinks he must omit. When the mathematician would solve a difficult problem, he first frees the equation of all incumbrances, and reduces it to its simplest terms. So simplify the problem of life, distinguish the necessary and the real.” –Thoreau Use your R, E, O to D, C, Q Thoreau’s claim.

Agenda:• Journal: Simplicity • Rhetorical Analysis Practice

– pre-20th century – Column analysis

• 4 groups• 1 column per group• ANNOTATE | FIND DEVICES/STRATEGIES• Teach each other

• Multiple Choice: – All/Except Practice

• HOMEWORK: – Make your life easier now… plan outfits, plan lunches, pack

bags… whatever you can do to ease the stress before next week (realizing you will not have any time this weekend)

– STUDY STUDY STUDY STUDY STUDY STUDY STUDY STUDY!

When you leave you will have:-analyzed the role of rhetorical devices in

essays.

Jigsaw Review

• Within your groups, count off 1-4• 1 = front corner by the bookshelves• 2 = back corner by door• 3 = back corner by cabinet• 4 = front corner by desk

• EXPLAIN your column… everyone else annotates as you explain.

May 5 Journal:No journal!

What are the 3 strategies for

introductions that we talked about

yesterday?

Agenda:- 3 strategies- Intro model- Write, write,

write!- Body para

model!

The Important Stuff…Beginnings• A good one should catch a reader’s

attention, and hold it.• Keep their attention (make ‘em want

to read!)• Go back to your intro after you’ve

written a little• Anecdote

– The other books you’ve read and either loved or hated and why Fences is better.

– Don’t like reading, but enjoyed reading fences

• Dialogue – Quote from the book– Dialogue from class

• Facts & Statistics – Drop out rate in WCPS– Percentage of male students– Race in WCPS

StructureIntro:

**Use one of the strategies here

**background about Fences the book & a plot summary

**thesis statement

A Model Body ParagraphIn WCPS there are 22,495 students. Of these

students, 51% (11,504) of them are male. Just like WCPS, many of the characters in Fences are also male. Within the play, the male characters struggle with achieving their dreams and finding happiness in life. By reading Fences, many 11th grade male students could learn a lot about life and not have to endure the same struggles that Troy, Cory, and Lyons experience. Also, of the 22,495 students that attend WCPS, 28% of them come from a diverse, non-white background. Even though all the characters in Fences are African Americans, most students will be able to relate to the issues that the Maxon family experiences throughout the play.

Books we read in high school…• To Kill a Mockingbird• Romeo & Juliet• Of Mice and Men• Animal Farm• Into the Wild• A Raisin in the Sun• Fences• Macbeth• A Midsummer’s Night Dream• Lord of the Flies• The Hunger Games• The Book Thief • The Chocolate War• The Things They Carried• A Long Way Gone• The Outsiders• The Secret Life of Bees

Good, Bad, Ugly?

• Everyone should read Fences.

• You should read this book; I really liked it.

• Fences is about a family in the 1950s.

• Fences should be read by all 11th grade students in Washington County Public Schools because students can relate to it.

Thesis Statements• Includes topic & claim & why:– Fences should/should not be read by every 11th

grader in Washington County Public Schools because of it’s relatable characters.

– Topics should be in order as they will be in the essay!

• Does NOT include phrases like: – I think– You should– (anything with personal pronouns)

Reflection: Concerning your essay:-What are you most nervous about?-What are you most excited about?

Journal ExplodesREQUIREMENTS

• 5 paragraphs– Introduction– Conclusion

• 3 middle supporting paragraphs– Evidence– Examples– Personal stories/anecdotes

• Thesis statement

RUBRIC• Each paragraph = 5 points• Thesis statement = 5 points• Details/evidence to

support/explain thesis statements = 5 points

• GREAT vocab = 5 bonus points

40 points total

How can self-imposed barriers prevent people

from growing and experiencing their dreams?

FencesFences are good because… Fences are bad because…• Divide you from neighbor problems• Provide privacy • Create boundaries • Protection • Keep pets contained • A sense of style (decorate them)

• Create boundaries • Restricts exploration • A symbol of disagreement • Creates a limited space • Doesn’t allow anything new