Assignment 16 - Pitch Audience Feedback

Voodoo/Occult sub-genre (pitch 1)

• Good research into the sub-genre.

• Wide variety of films have been analysed.

• Wide variety of research into setting, camera work, sound and editing.

• The plot of our pitch wasn’t very detailed.

• We need to develop our plot by being more specific.

• We need to give more information to why we have chosen to use a non-linear OTS.

• We need to go into more detail about out USP (unique selling point).

Killer/psychological sub-genre (pitch 2)

• Good amount of research went into the conventions of this sub-genre.

• Our plot was a lot more detailed and specific in comparison to our first pitch.

• Good detail into why we chose to use a non-linear OTS.

• We could have put more detail into the conventions of the plot.

• More detail was needed when we were stating wether we were going to challenge or reinforce the conventions.

• We need to choose a more original plot for our second pitch.