Final draft planning
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Assignment 11 Draft 8 – opening sequence
Luara Pires
Kauana Labaldi
Chantelle Gilkes
Results for draft #4Teacher Assessment. Self Assessment.Peer Assessment.
www on draft #4
Titles are now in a good location and clear
Close up of her leg crossing. Effect for flashback is now better ‘Beach bypass’
Extreme close ups are now being used.
Ebi for draft #5
Show what he was looking at. Show what he is writting.
A more closer shot of when she is going to remember one of the flashbacks.
More close ups for the flashback.
Things to do for final draft
• More close ups and extreme close ups
• Improve on voice over
• Improve on investigation papers
• Make it shorter
• Make the flashbacks shorter and more affective
