Exercise 18

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Exercise 18. No.1. (Worse) It is important to develop a more effective approach to solve the complicated problem. (Better) A more effective approach must be developed to solve the complicated problem. No.2. (Worse) There were nine observations taken for each trial run. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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(Worse) It is important to develop a more effective approach to solve the complicated problem.

(Better) A more effective approach must be developed to solve the complicated problem.

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(Worse) There were nine observations taken for each trial run.

(Better) Each trial run included nine observations.

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(Worse) There is a chance that multifunction printers include many additional utilities.

(Better) Multifunction printers may include many additional utilities.

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(Worse) It is crucial that an ink jet printer is more versatile than a laser printer.

(Better) An ink jet printer must be more versatile than a laser one.

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(Worse) There can be little doubt that ink jet printers have a higher per-page cost than laser printers.

(Better) Ink jet printers undoubtedly cost more per page than laser ones.

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(Worse) It is quite probable that an ink jet printer is a better choice than a laser printer if initial cost is the primary consideration.

(Better) An ink jet printer is probably a better choice than a laser one if initial cost is the primary consideration.

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(Worse) There is a comparison made in this article of the major differences between commercially successful keyboards.

(Better) This article compares the major differences between commercially successful keyboards.

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(Worse) It is unlikely that ink jet printers will become obsolete owing to their relatively low cost.

(Better) Ink jet printers will unlikely become obsolete owing to their relatively low cost.

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(Worse) It is not necessary to train the network in all instances.

(Better) The network does not need to be trained in all instances.

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(Worse) It is possible to configure Windows NT so that a password is required at the workstation.

(Better) Windows NT can be configured to require a password at the workstation.

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(Worse) There is an opportunity for an error to happen within the application.

(Better) An error might happen within the application.

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(Worse) There is a necessity for the program to be implemented by a knowledgeable systems manager.

(Better) A knowledgeable systems manager must implement the program.