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  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 1/12 Quality 74 Categories 94 1 issue 79 4 issues 100 0 issues 24 48 issues Voice 81 48 73 Document Information index.html Kath Straub Wed Apr 09 09:51:47 EDT 2014 Plain_English 1131 words / 173 sentences 6.5 words is the average sentence length 0 issues found in read-only sections Administrative Information Checking Information Scorecard index.html SEO Terminology Spelling Grammar Style Reuse Readability Informality Liveliness 1 Terminology 1 issue Deprecated Admitted 1 4 0 48 Scorecard SEO Terminology Spelling Grammar Style Reuse Readability Informality Liveliness Term Term Set Suggestion Context such (1 occurrence) Plain_English Look for red flags, such as:
  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 2/12 21Valid Term Term Set Suggestion Context You did not choose the option to check for admitted terms. Term Term Set Context opportunity (1 occurrence) Plain_English American consumers should have the opportunity to use credit to build a better future for themselves and their loved ones. opportunities (1 occurrence) Plain_English Credit discrimination prevents people from having access to these opportunities, and can make credit more expensive. Opportunity (3 occurences) Plain_English The Equal Credit Opportunity Act makes it illegal for a creditor to discriminate in any aspect of credit transaction based on certain characteristics. practices (1 occurrence) Plain_English In addition, the Fair Housing Act makes many discrimination practices in home financing illegal. Opportunity (3 occurences) Plain_English The Office of Fair Lending and Equal Opportunity communications (1 occurrence) Plain_English Walking away and continuing the discussion later, if you so choose, is a good way to control communications with the lender. Information (2 occurences) Plain_English Additional Information. Information (2 occurences) Plain_English Additional Information. information (2 occurences) Plain_English Below you will find links to additional information about your fair lending rights: information (2 occurences) Plain_English Below you will find links to additional information about your fair lending rights: information (2 occurences) Plain_English For more information on credit discrimination, download our brochure. information (2 occurences) Plain_English For more information on credit discrimination, download our brochure. Department (2 occurences) Plain_English Department of Housing and Urban Development: Development (1 occurrence) Plain_English Department of Housing and Urban Development:
  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 3/12 New Spelling 4 issues Issue Suggestion Context fairer (2 occurences) airer, pairer, Pairer You can help us protect consumers and create a fairer marketplace even if you dont want to file a complaint. fairer (2 occurences) airer, pairer, Pairer Help inform how we protect consumers & create a fairer marketplace. nuestro (1 occurrence) Visite nuestro sitio web en espaol sitio (1 occurrence) Visite nuestro sitio web en espaol Order by: Rule | OccurrenceGrammar 0 issues Opportunity (3 occurences) Plain_English More about the Equal Credit Opportunity Act (y en espaol). Department (2 occurences) Plain_English Department of Justice: Information (2 occurences) Plain_English Information for: Information (2 occurences) Plain_English Information for: calendar (1 occurrence) Plain_English Leadership calendar Administrative (1 occurrence) Plain_English Administrative adjudication adjudication (1 occurrence) Plain_English Administrative adjudication Term Context You did not choose the option to check for new terms.
  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 4/12 Issue Suggestion Order by: Rule | OccurrenceStyle 48 issues Issue Suggestion complex or long word What protections do I have against credit discrimination? avoid noun cluster > Consumer Financial Protection Bureau complex or long word What protections do I have against credit discrimination? complex or long word What protections do I have against credit discrimination? avoid modal verbs American consumers should have the opportunity to use credit to build a better future for themselves and their loved ones. complex or long word Credit discrimination prevents people from having access to these opportunities, and can make credit more expensive. complex or long word What is credit discrimination? complex or long word The Equal Credit Opportunity Act makes it illegal for a creditor to discriminate in any aspect of credit transaction based on certain characteristics. complex or long word
  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 5/12 The Equal Credit Opportunity Act makes it illegal for a creditor to discriminate in any aspect of credit transaction based on certain characteristics. complex or long word In addition, the Fair Housing Act makes many discrimination practices in home financing illegal. complex or long word What is credit discrimination? complex or long word How I can protect myself from credit discrimination complex or long word Offer you credit on terms that are less favorable, like a higher interest rate, than terms offered to someone with similar qualifications simplify word On the basis of: From: Based on: By: complex or long word How can I protect myself from credit discrimination? complex or long word Credit discrimination is often hidden or even unintentional, which makes it hard to spot. complex or long word Credit discrimination is often hidden or even unintentional, which makes it hard to spot. use bulleted list You hear the lender make negative comments about race, national origin, sex, or other protected groups. avoid complex sentences You are denied credit, but not given a reason why or told how to find out why.
  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 6/12 use complementizer If you believe a lender has discriminated against you for any reason, you can file a complaint. If you believe that a lender has discriminated against you for any reason, you can file a complaint. complex or long word If you believe a lender has discriminated against you for any reason, you can file a complaint. Sentence too long: 30 words Learn more about what factors lenders can consider in deciding whether to lend money and deciding what features to offer, like the interest rate or the term of the loan. avoid complex sentences Learn more about what factors lenders can consider in deciding whether to lend money and deciding what features to offer, like the interest rate or the term of the loan. avoid hidden verbs Creditors will make decisions based on your credit history. use complementizer Be sure there are no mistakes or missing items in your credit reports. Be sure that there are no mistakes or missing items in your credit reports. use complementizer Be sure you understand the rates and fees you will pay over the long run. Be sure that you understand the rates and fees you will pay over the long run. Sentence too long: 29 words Ask whether the rates and fees quoted to you by your lender are set, or if there are any circumstances in which the quoted rates and fees could change. avoid complex sentences Ask whether the rates and fees quoted to you by
  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 7/12 your lender are set, or if there are any circumstances in which the quoted rates and fees could change. complex or long word Ask whether the rates and fees quoted to you by your lender are set, or if there are any circumstances in which the quoted rates and fees could change. use "this/that/these/those" with noun If a creditor does not want to answer your questions, this could be a bad sign. avoid modal verbs Your lender shouldnt make you feel rushed, or unnecessarily delay action on your application. complex or long word Your lender shouldnt make you feel rushed, or unnecessarily delay action on your application. avoid modal verbs Remember, the product that works for you today may not work for you down the road. avoid needless word To learn more about the Office of Fair Lending and CFPBs fair lending efforts, please read our recent report to Congress or our recent blog posts. complex or long word Within the consumer bureau, the Office of Fair Lending works to ensure fair, equitable, and nondiscriminatory access to credit for both individuals and communities through: avoid noun cluster Enforcement and oversight of Federal fair lending laws; and avoid complex coordination Promotion of fair lending compliance and education among industry, fair lending, civil rights, and consumer and community advocates.
  • 4/9/2014 Scorecard http://206.80.38.129:8031/output/en/index_html_Kath_022225e57935afbe_3_report.xml 8/12 use bulleted list Promotion of fair lending compliance and education among industry, fair lending, civil rights, and consumer and community advocates. avoid noun cluster Assistant Director Patrice Alexander Ficklin leads the Office of Fair Lending. avoid noun cluster Consumer Financial Protection Bureau: complex or long word For more information on credit discrimination, download our brochure. com