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Essay 2 common errors
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MLA issues
Please see the PowerPoint on the website titled “how to format your essay.” This will be under the tab labeled “writing.”
http://www.bixbyenglish9.com/writing-unit.html
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Comma rules
- introductory clause or phrase: comma after- Essential clause: no commas- Non-essential clause: surrounded by commas- Cd sentence: comma before conjunction (must
connect two COMPLETE sentences)- Dependent clause at end: no comma!
-10 points for 1 error on every essay!
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Topic sentences
Do not use the definition of the figurative language as what the device does
Ex: The author uses similes to compare two unlike things.
The author uses imagery to vividly describe using one of the five senses.
The author uses personification to give a non-human human-like qualities.
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This simile…
Avoid saying the simile, personification, etc. does something. The figurative language is not capable of an action; the author is the one who is doing something by using the figurative language.
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Words words, I know wordsSome of you seemed to just say words for the sake of taking up space. In fact you successfully use a ton of words to say absolutely nothing. Often, it was clear that you did not even know what the word you were using meant.Ex: - The similes create an invigorating tone…- The splendiforous use of similes…- The visualization of the imagery….- The imagery added profoundness to the tone…- The simile added to the dangerousness…
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First and second person
you= second person (do not use this)
I, me , we, us= first person (do not use this)
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This quote…
When you say “this quote shows…” you are addressing the fact that you are writing an essay. Quote is a flat word and cannot be used; therefore, “this quote…” is not to be used either.
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Cm not opinion based
Ex: Because Harrison was strong, he had to wear weights. This is not your opinion on the quote; it is literally what happens in the story. Your commentary is opinion based and must explain how your quote proves your topic sentence and ultimately, your thesis.
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Quotes not embedded
You must provide context for your quote:Ex:- When Harrison burst into the ballet, he was “covered in
Halloween and hardware”- After the Harrison asked for a volunteer, “A ballerina
arose…”- As George is watching tv, his handicap went off and it
sounded like “burglars fleeing from a burglar alarm”- While Rainsford is standing on the boat, he thinks the night
feels “like moist black velvet”
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Capitalization
• Do not capitalize imagery or simile… not sure why you are doing this, but many of you did
• Do not capitalize the first letter of your quote if it is in the middle of a sentence and not a proper noun.
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Passive Voice
The affect created by the author = passive voice
The author created this affect = active voice
Passive voice = bad active voice=good
PERSON DOING ACTION GOES BEFORE ACTION!